Thank you very much for taking the time to read my statement. But I believe it's worthwhile for me.My name is xxx and will be graduating soon. I learned about your college from the newspaper. I'm overjoyed because your college not only is a famous one, it's also my dream college. All the classes are given in English, which will help me improve my English skills. And studying abroad can also temper myself. The majors you offer are among my favorites, especially Exhibit Management and Commercial majors.When I was very little, I started to demonstrate a gift in management. I also love working in the Exhibit Management field. It's like I used to work for the school wallpaper and my work was always acclaimed by everyone. I have decorated lots of parties and they all helped the hosts' success. It's safe to say it's my dream since I was a little boy (girl). In addition, through some professional psychological tests, I have proved to be a good candidate for this industry. So I'd like to apply for a major in the direction of Exhibit Management or Commerce. If I'm admitted to your college, I am sure I will master all it takes, getting the cutting edge knowledge and skills in this area and in the mean time I will also improve my English. I will prove this through my actions. I will show you through my efforts and I am confident I will reach my goal and land my dream job with my study in your college.后面根据你的意思稍做了一些修改,应该可以发出去了。祝你成功!!!