初二作文训练(1)How to be a good learner【本期题目】在紧张的学习阶段,同学们希望互相交流学习经验,共同提高学习效率。现在校园杂志New Century就以“How to be a good learner”为题征稿,请你谈谈你在学习方法或学习习惯方面的建议(至少3条)。不少于60词。 提示词语:carefully, in class, go over, help, each other, do sports【思路扩展】同学们看到这个作文题,应该先对这个题材进行发散性地思考。大家能想到哪些方面呢?比如上课专心听讲、按时完成作业、有问题及时请教老师、同学间互相帮助、劳逸结合、保持乐观的情绪等等。然后,我们再把这些要点用简单的英语表示出来。1. Get ready for class课前预习2. listen to the teacher carefully in class, take down notes 认真听讲、记笔记3. Go over after class 课后及时复习4. Do homework on time 按时做作业5. Don't be afraid to make mistakes 别怕犯错6. work hard 努力学习7. Learn to share / discuss with classmates ( knowledge/ ideas) 学会与人共享8. Ask when we don’t understand 不懂就问9. Believe in ourselves相信自己10. Do sports when we are tired 劳逸结合11. Have good learning habits 有好的学习习惯【连词成句】有了以上词汇和要点,我们怎么把这些关键词串起来呢?同学们可以回忆以下我们所学过的用于提建议的句式。1. We should/can do…2. We’d better (not) do… 3. Why not do…? 4. It’s a good idea to do…5. Let’s do…接下来,我们需要做的就是用这些句式把要点连起来,再加上适当的过渡词如first, second等表示不同层次的意思就可以了。你是不是已经跃跃欲试了?那就赶快开始吧!【范文展示】Everyone wants to study well. To be a good learner, I think good learning habits are necessary.First, it’s very important for us to listen to the teacher carefully and take down some notes. After class, we should review the lessons, because we can’t remember and understand everything in class. Second, when we are tired, we’d better go outside to do sports to relax.Above all, we need to work hard and never give up. I hope all of us will become good learners.(2)上网的利与弊【本期题目】目前,网络越来越普及,很多中学生沉迷于网络,对学习不感兴趣。中学生上网的利与弊已经成为人们日常讨论的焦点。请你就此问题谈谈自己的看法,写一篇60词左右的短文。提示词:important, lose one’s interest in study, be bad for【思路扩展】通过审题,我们可以获知:1. 本文的主题:中学生上网的利弊;2. 文章要点:谈一谈上网的利弊,并发表自己的观点;3. 人称:在叙述现象时可以用第三人称they;在分析上网利弊时应该用第一人称we,因为你也属于中学生中的一员。提到中学生上网的利弊,同学们的脑中也一定冒出了很多想法吧?现在,我们把这些想法分类整理出来:1. Pros (支持的观点): feel relaxed, make new friends, keep in touch with friends, help us with study, easy to go shopping…2. Cons (反对的观点): be bad for health, be a waste of time, lose their interests in study, some websites are bad for students’ minds…【连词成句】同学们在这两方面不需要平均使用笔墨,而应对其中一方略有侧重。这两个观点之间是转折或者对比的关系,所以我们需要用一些具有转折意义的词来连接, 如:but, however (可用于句首、句中或者句末,但是前后要用逗号隔开), though / although, on the one hand… on the other hand, despite / in spite of (尽管,虽然)。除了讨论网络应用的利弊,我们还要对文中所提到的部分中学生沉迷于网络的现象发表自己的看法。同学们可以用以下句式来开头:1. I think… 2. In my opinion / view… 3. In my point of view… 4. As far as I am concerned…【范文展示】Now, the Internet is becoming more and more important in our daily lives. We can watch movies and chat with our friends on the Internet. Besides, we can learn a lot. However, the Internet sometimes does us serious harm. I hear that some students spend too much time on the Internet. I think it’s really a waste of time and it’s also bad for our eyes. If we visit bad websites, it may have a bad influence on our minds, too. In my opinion, we shouldn’t spend too much time on the Internet, and we should make full use of our spare time. 【点评】本文信息点齐全,条理比较清楚,词汇运用比较准确,语言也比较流畅。在两个观点间能运用however来表示转折;在结尾处,也鲜明地表明了自己的观点。(3)谈论帮助别人【本期主题】助人为乐一直是中华民族的传统美德。在和谐社会中,帮助别人已经成为一种良好的社会风尚。你认为什么情况下我们应该帮助他人?请你讲讲你帮助别人的一次经历并谈谈自己的感受。不少于80词。提示词:help others, trouble, thank, feel happy【题目解析】作为一个半开放性的题目,本题除了规定主题为帮助他人外,并没有限定具体事件,而是让大家讲一次自己帮助别人的经历,这就为我们提供了很大的自由空间。因为文章主体部分是叙述一次经历,所以同学们要格外注意句子间的连贯和语言的生动性。通过审题,我们可以获知:1. 文章的主题:帮助他人2. 文章的要点:什么情况下帮助他人(when to help others);叙述一次自己帮助别人的经历(how I helped others); 谈谈自己的感受( how I feel)。3. 人称:I 4. 时态:一般过去时【写作指导】题材本身比较容易理解,也比较容易下笔,但是要想把文章写得精彩还要在语言上下足功夫。我们先来看看应该什么情况下帮助别人呢?当然是在别人有困难需要帮助时喽。下面,我们就来看看可以用哪些词汇和短语来表达。get into trouble, have some difficulty (in) doing something, need help, can’t do…具体“帮助别人”都有哪些表达法呢?help others, give somebody a hand, do somebody a favor 现在,同学们回想一下自己帮助别人的经历吧!help my classmate with his/ her study, help a child find his/ her mother in the shopping center, tell somebody the way to get to a place, translate for foreigners, help somebody carry heavy bags, take a sick boy/girl…to the hospital…有了上面的词汇,我们现在要做的就是用一些基本结构把它们连接起来,串成句子。文章的末尾还需要提到帮助别人后的感受,大家可以使用下面的表达方式:1. I feel happy. 2. I feel proud of myself because…3. I feel proud of myself for what I have done...4. I am glad that I can help others. 5. It’s my pleasure to help others.【参考范文】 We all may get into trouble and need help from others. So, I think it’s important to help people in need. I often help others when they are in trouble. One day, I was entering the lift when a woman ran towards me. I could see that she was in a hurry and I stopped to wait for her. She was carrying very heavy bags. I went to her and helped her get the bags into the lift. When she thanked me, I felt very happy.I think we all should help each other. In this way, our world will be full of love. 点评: 本文信息点齐全,结构完整,语言比较通顺。作者首先在第一段表明自己的观点,并在结尾处表明自己的态度,与开头相呼应,首尾一致。另外值得肯定的是,作者所选取的是日常生活中我们经常会遇到的一个非常小的事件,显得真实、自然。(4)如何减轻压力?【本期题目】面对学习压力,减压 (reduce pressure) 在中学生中已经成为一个流行词汇,你是如何放松自己、给自己减压的呢?请就这个问题展开,谈谈自己的做法(至少三条)和你的感想。提示词语:homework, nervous, relax, release/ let off (释放) pressure【写作指导】通过审题,我们可以获知:文章的主题:中学生减压的问题文章的要点:“我”是怎样减压的(至少三条做法),“我”对于这个问题的感想或者看法人称:I时态:一般现在时同学们还有哪些减压办法呢?我们先简单罗列一下。go to KTV with classmates, go to the park with classmates/parents, watch TV, write down feelings in a diary/write blogs, talk to parents/teachers, play chess/ basketball/ badminton/ tennis/ table tennis… go jogging (慢跑)/ swimming/ boating/ fishing/ shopping/ travelling, have a good sleep除了以上所谈到的解压方法,同学们还需要表达自己的感想,参考一下下面的句式吧。I feel tired/ nervous/ worriedI feel relaxed/ happy/ comfortable I think/ In my opinion 我认为/在我看来……【参考范文】Now, we students are having more and more pressure from our studies, parents, teachers or even ourselves. We have to find a way to relax. Here are my ways of reducing pressure. I have a cat to help me relax. She is just like a friend to me, and it is fun to play with her. I like listening to music very much. It helps me let off pressure when I’m anxious. I like both peaceful music and exciting music. In addition, I often talk to my friends, and it is really helpful.I think it is necessary for us to relax and reduce pressure when we are too nervous. 【点评】本文信息点齐全,结构完整,语言通顺。作者首先介绍了目前中学生压力大的现状,然后用“Here are my ways of reducing pressure. ”承上启下,引出自己在减压方面的三种做法。最后,作者又明确表明自己的观点: 在我们过度紧张,压力过大时放松和减压是非常必要的。当然,在一些细节方面,如方法与方法之间的过渡问题,还可以再改进一下。