本科毕业论文英文摘要语法错误

Abstract:Education is thought of as ‘three-in-one’ action jointly taken by school, society and family. The society is supposed to supply educational resources accessible to family and school. Nowadays family-school partnerships vary in all kinds of forms. As one of the 2007 well-being programmes sponsored by the Shanghai municipal government, the ‘family-school interaction’ networking platform provides a new opportunity for dialogues among teachers, parents and students, with modern education showing the trends towards networkization, virtualization, internationalization and personalization. However, there exist many problems with the family-school interaction platform, and this is an important issue that has recently attracted attention of research on education studies. Obvious differences exist between middle and primary schools in using the platform. Based upon such problems, this paper points out that poor linkage may be responsible for poor performance of family-school cooperation among middle and primary schools. By questionnaire surveys and interviews, the author analyzed the cause for the problem, and furthermore put forward some solutions. The paper tried to explore a practice model of family-school partnership and give an impetus to its smooth development .

错误没多少，主要是老师看出来你是机器翻译的，偷懒了，老师有些不爽。

你觉得自己出现好多语法错误，那是你对英语语法学的不精。对于这一方面的问题就是必须把语法学到位，熟练掌握：1、十大词类，每种词性的用法特点及其在句子中的句法功能和位置。2、动词时态，十六种时态的用法特点及其句子结构和连用的时间状语必须明确，运用自如。3、动词语态，明确动词的主、被动语态，并且何时用被动语态更贴切。4、动词的语气，对于一个句子是用陈述语气、疑问语气、祈使语气还是虚拟语气，要根据表达的需要恰当定位。5、非谓语动词的用法，固定短语以及固定搭配等的正确记忆和运用。6、主谓一致的情况。7、简单句、并列句和复合句的正确使用以及句子成分的正确分析等等。所以，要明确自己的错误在哪，才能够正确纠正错误，甚至不再犯错误，还要注意中西文化语言表达的不同。 另外，对于论文英文如何润色，我的建议是要注意正确使用形容词、副词等修饰成分和关联词，以及长句子，即并列句和复合句以及高级句子的使用，如果一味的使用简单句子描写，即使文章中没有错误，但也不会有多大的起色，反而会使文章显得生硬、苍白无力，更拿不到高分。因此，写作时要根据情况适时润色，根据需要恰当而正确表达。

Eduation is a triune behavior of school,society and family.Social education eventually embodies the supply of available educational resources which are made use of by families and schools.Nowadays,the forms of home-school cooperation are various.As one of the 2007 Shanghai government practical projects,"Home-School Interaction"provides a new dialogual platform for teachers,parents and students,which reflects the developmental trend of networking ,virtualization,internationalization and individualization of current human beings.At the same time,there are many problems of "Home-School Interaction",whcih has become an important subject of educational theortical research.Among that,there are obvious differences between primary schools and middle schools in the usage of "Home-School Interaction"network platform.This article is based on the "Home-School Interaction"network platform's putting up questions.Author analyzes reasons of problems and then puts forward sloving strategies,activily discusses the practical models of home-school cooperation and promotes it in a healthy way through questionnaires and interviews.

我看好象好多句子没有断句，然后，恩~过于直译，不是每个中文词都需要翻译出来的。还有那个“Home-School Interaction”，不知道这个是英文里固有的固定搭配还是怎么样。如果是自己想的，我觉得这个译的不对...总之，需要好好改改...