给英文报社编辑写一封信

感觉好像是英语周报(或者测试报?- -)上的作文……我什么时候写过的给忘了= =写全文的话……好吧我承认自己比较懒……就来几个重点的 单词+短语+句子 救救急吧！！内容，包括 content一名高三学生 a student of grade nine给。。写一封信 write a letter to sb某英文报社编辑 a editor of a certain English newspaper agency压力大 The pressure is very 父母对我期望高 My parents show high expectation to 我很苦恼 I'm so 希望对你有所帮助^ ^

Dear Editor,I’d like to tell you some of my problems with my parents in daily My parents tend to make almost all decisions for They choose the school and subjects for Sometimes even clothing and daily timetables have to be decided by In my opinion, deciding everything for children does not help them but harm them in many Firstly, it will make children lack independence, which is unfavorable to their development in the long Secondly, in many cases parents’ decisions go against children’s personal ideas and interests, which will make children form resistance and naturally influence their I do believe to grow to be independent is a natural way for Parents should give us chances to make our own They may help us make choices instead of replacing us to make Yours sincerely,Li Hua 试题分析：本文是一篇提纲类作文，但是只是大概的提纲没有具体的要点，对考生的要求非常高，需要考生有较强的组织语言的能力和运用语言的功底。本文的话题是父母总是喜欢包办一切，考生所熟悉的，具有可写性。在写作之前，注意谋篇布局，文章应该是三段，第一段提及这种现象，第二段谈弊端，第三段分析原因提出建议。在写作时要注意选词如independently，Gradually，accompany等高级词汇的运用。同时运用合适的连接词和句型。最后要注意对文章的润色。【亮点说明】My parents tend to make almost all decisions for 这里有固定短语：tend to do In my opinion, deciding everything for children does not help them but harm them in many 这句话用了动名词做主语， it will make children lack independence, which is unfavorable to their development in the long 这句话用了非限制性定语从句， in many cases parents’ decisions go against children’s personal ideas and interests, which will make children form resistance and naturally influence their 这句话也是非限制性定语从句， I do believe to grow to be independent is a natural way for 这句话用了强调，还有范文还使用了 Firstly, Secondly,这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。

Dear editor: I have something to trouble you !My English is very poor at When I work choic ,I often hesitate betten two Untfill the answer come out ,I often choose the wrong answer,And ,when I doing cloze,I usually forget the front when I doing the next hese are most difficults to face and to dsal with Due to these reasons,I couln't understand what's teacher's say,what's more ,I fall behand with others ,and lose heart to learn it ! Facing these quesions ,could you give me some Hope you write to me soon ,and I will appriate you very much ! Your student