给编辑写一封信

退修文章要指出稿件的不足，退修信的主体内容，需要修改的地方明确的说清楚，别含糊，要不然你俩就来回折腾吧，但是语气要客气，要尊重人家的学术观点和见解。再就是详略得当，重要的内容多花笔墨，不重要的就一笔带过。退修就是把稿件退还给作者，让其按照要求进行修改。经过退修后的文章一般质量会有明显提升，只要作者按照杂志社给出的修改意见修改，会逐渐达到见刊要求的，见刊就不是问题了。

Dear Li Hua, Thank you for your trusting on You told me in your letter that your old friends didn't like the new ones you have just Actually,this is quite common in the society,there are so many kind people in theworld,but everyone on earth has his own character,I think all of your friends are kind to you,so,in my opinion,you should communicate with your old friend and tell them the advatages of your new ones,try your best to reduce the misunderstanding between them,I believe after a period of knowing each other,they may be as good friend as Yours XXXX