考英语书面表达写作指导之漫画作文(议论类)Tasks:1. To deal with difficulty in writing about cartoons2. To learn the basic structure of cartoon writing3. To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writing2010年江苏省高考说明:writing示例1鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。
它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。 但是, 过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。
请你以鼠标为切入点, 根据下表所提示的信息, 用英语写一篇短文。注意:1. 对所给要点逐一陈述, 适当发挥, 要简单翻译。
2. 词数150左右。 开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。The mouse is a most effective device used by people to municate with a __________________________________________________________________The mouse is a most effective device used by people to municate with a puter. 示例2下图描绘的是现在许多家长的苦恼。
请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文,描述一下他们可能的做法并发表你的看法。注意:1. 仔细品味图中文字的幽默、无奈,要适当发挥想象,不要做简单描述。
2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。To most of the parents, it's no easy job to keep their children away from the PC . 读图2. 解意3. 谋篇读图1. 漫画的题目 眼睛2. 漫画的画面 细节3. 漫画的文字 观点4. 漫画的夸张 寓意解意1. 辨明褒贬,找准角度 夸奖褒扬 or 批评讽喻? 2. 联系生活,明晰主旨 Imagination! 注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues),切记要认真阅读!谋篇3 parts:1) describe the picture2) interpret its meaning3) give your opinions about the phenomenonPart 1 Describe the pictureThe picture is talking about/shows…The picture shows a mon phenomenon. The picture describes an interesting the picture, there are…/…is (are) doing…The picture above is about ……Let's look at the picture above/ 2 Interpret the pictureIt seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind of story is performed picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of…The picture indicates that we…Nowadays, it is a mon phenomenon that…This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of mon phenomenon among…Part 3 Give your opinionsI think/believe thatAs far as I'm concerned,In my opinion,From my point of view,Only in this way can….Polish up your article!1. To use linking words if necessary2. To use plicated structures if possible 1. To use linking words表示平行、对等或选择关系 and, as well as, together with, not only…but also。
表示转折关系 but, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, while表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one hand…on the other hand。表示因果关系 so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to. 表示时间、顺序关系 first, second …, then, next, finally, for one thing 。
for another, in the end, 表示递进、强调关系 besides, what's more, in addition, worse still, above all表示解释、说明关系 such as, for example, for instance(例如), in other words, and so on表示结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion2. To use plicated structuresFor most of the parents, it's no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor. Let's look at the picture above. Two people are standing in front of a puter, whose monitor is wearing underwear. The woman is staring at the puter, thinking while the man is telling him that there are three ways to make the Inter safer for her children---hardware, sofare and may be ridiculous to cover the PC monitor with someone's underwear, but it describes vividly parents' distress and feelings of helplessness when they are faced with the problem. Concerned about their children's security, some of them just cut off the access to the Inter at home -“the hardware solution”; some choose to use a certain sofare program to prevent their kids from getting on line –“the sofare solution”; others may make some rules to limit the time their children spend on the Inter -“the underwear solution”!From my point of view, this phenomenon calls for the attention of the whole society. On one hand, the government should make laws to censor the Inter and block inappropriate sites, making it a safer place for all teenagers. On the other hand, it is better for parents to give their children a proper guide instead of just prevention. Teenagers need to be taught how to tell and resist bad information consciously. Only in 。
This picture, I don't know it's name, but I know what it meant. There's a hand, strong and firm, right in the middle, in beeen the fingers withheld o sticks, or you could call it, branches. The hand represents human, and its race. The o branches, which are in the form of chopsticks, represent chinese culture and nature. Does this meant that humans and their culture is all from and related to nature? It could likely be that way, and if you think further, it could mean nature is part of our culture and it will remain that way forever.
够不够?不够我可以加。
There are o men in the picture. One is the son and the other is his father. The son is admitted to the university. They are going to enroll. The son is just standing aside while his father is busy helping him carry the bedroll on his shoulder and his hand. The father is just like a porter. The young man behaves like a boss. The cartoonist satirizes the parents' hard working for their children, but, the children think that is going without saying. I think they are indifferent and they are can't live by themslves.图片中有两个男人。
一个是儿子,一个是爸爸。这个儿子进入大学,他们准备登记入学。
这个儿子只是站在一边,而他的爸爸却在肩上和手里扛着拿着他的行李。爸爸就像一个搬运工,而他却像一个老板。
漫画家讽刺父母对孩子们的辛勤劳动,但e79fa5e98193e78988e69d83364是,孩子们却认为是理所当然的事。我认为他们是冷漠的并且他们是无能的。
他们不能独立生存。
近些年,英语高考[微博]书面表达出现了“漫画作文”或“看图作文”:给考生一幅漫画,要求考生看完漫画后完成一篇不少于50字的短文。
笔者认为,这种命题作文最大的特点就是观点的开放性、包容性、多元性,要考生对自己所写的短文自圆其说,言之成理。 北京市对于开放性作文一类文(13- 15分)的评分标准是:整体上,完全完成了试题规定的任务,完全达到了预期的写作目的。
具体而言:(1) 内容充实,体现了活跃的思维和清晰的逻辑;(2)交际得体,表达时充分考虑到了交际对象的需求;(3) 体现出较强的语言运用能力。 笔者研究了多年北京市高考卷、各区县模拟卷以及其他省市卷漫画作文,总结了漫画作文的一般写作思路,即用“引—议—联—结”策略展现漫画作文结构,希望对即将参加高考的莘莘学子有点启发和借鉴作用。
在动笔写作之前,考生需要对短文的内容和结构整体构思,多问几个“如何”?漫画主题是什么,如何表现主题,如何论述,如何过渡,如何联系实际,如何结尾,等等。 引:就是描述图画,引出话题。
笔者认为,如同新闻记者“如实、客观、公正”报道一样,考生描述漫画时不宜使用评论性语言,而应该抓住材料要旨,用简洁的语言,准确地描述漫画主要内容,所描述的内容为下文发表议论打基础。 漫画起始句常见的表达有: (1) As can been see from the picture/ cartoon, … (2) As is vividly described/ illustrated in the picture/ cartoon, … (3) As is vividly depicted/ revealed in the picture/ cartoon, … (4) From/ In the picture/ cartoon, we may clearly see that… (5) As we can see clearly from the picture/ cartoon, … 议:就是针对漫画描述内容提出自己的观点,解读漫画的寓意,诠释漫画价值,这是写好漫画作文的关键。
对漫画的主题应注重8个字:正确、深刻、新颖、简约。 ①正确。
立意一定要合乎题目要求,即“切题”才算正确,否则,再好的主题不切题也是枉然。当然,还要有针对性。
选取人们最感兴趣的、最能反映人们思想感情的作为主题,文章才能最大限度地激起反响。 ②深刻。
主题的深刻在于充分揭示事物的本质与规律。有些考生在立意上难以深入,原因往往就在于浅尝辄止,没有深入开掘。
所谓开掘就是深入思索,挖出事物最本质的东西。比如,只从刻苦学习方面来分析一个学生成绩优秀是不够深刻的,若能再进一步阐述他为什么会刻苦,为什么能持之以恒,或者就学习态度、学习兴趣、学习方法、学习习惯等方面进行分析,开掘出他刻苦学习的动机和动力,这样的立意,不就深刻多了吗?所以在主题开掘上多问几个为什么是十分必要的。
③新颖。作文提倡言人之所未言,言人之所不能言,力求使人们获得新的启迪、新的联想。
文章写出新意关键在于作者具备独创精神。如果思想懒惰,人云亦云,所写文章必然千人一面。
只有勇于进取勤于思考,敢用自己的语言表达的人,才有可能创新。如写作文《读“龟兔赛跑”》时,有的学生就更深一层地想到兔子其实输给了自己,输给了自己的骄傲和轻敌,自己才是最大的敌人,从而认识到克服自身的弱点对取得胜利是至关重要的;有的同学却换一个角度认为,兔子是故意输给乌龟的,因为兔子明白它与乌龟不是一个档次,胜之不武,输之更惨,是一场双输的比赛,干脆先领先后睡觉,以避开两难境地,聪明之至!上述两种立意均可谓新颖。
平时多注意思考这样的问题:是不是常见却没引起注意;是不是注意了却不以为然;是不是没有认识到这样的深度;是不是有新的认识角度,等等。求新不是猎奇,而是从生活中去探寻新问题,所以只要勤于思考,出新出彩并非难事。
④简约。简而明才称得上“约”。
就立意而言,简明、集中是对主题的要求;相反,主题分散想面面俱到,反而面面不到,是立意之大忌。要做到“简约”,就需要高度的概括力。
思维不进行概括,表象就无法升华为本质,认识就无法实现理性的飞跃,思想就不可能达到简明、集中。“简约”要求思想内容上单一集中。
这样可以集中精力,写得深刻,给人以鲜明突出的印象。 阐述漫画主题常见的表达有: (1) The picture conveys the message (seriously/ thoughtfully/ ironically/ profoundly) that… (2) The picture is to get it across that… (3) The author is trying to get it across that… (4) The artist of the cartoon tries to let us keep in mind that… (5) What the picture is intended to convey is that… (6) What the artist of picture/ cartoon is intended to inform us is that… (7) What the picture tries to convey is that… (8) The author of the picture is trying to make sense that… 联:根据所给漫画内容,联系现实生活,联系社会,联系个人。
既可以由此及彼地联系现实生活中相类似的现象,也可以联系现实生活中的相反的种种问题。既可以从大处着眼,也可以从小处入手。
当然在联系实际分析论证时,还要注意时时回扣或呼应“引”部,使“联”与“引”“藕”断而“丝”连。 常见联系实际的表达有: (1) In our daily life, … (2) It is the same with our (actual) life/ society。
(3) Similarly, it occurs to us in our life。 (4) Such a 。
以三人行必有我师为题的,不符合的话可以追问。
Confucius said: "the three of us are walking together, must have my teacher. " Each of us has its own advantages, but also has its own disadvantages, learning from others to make up their own short, long, of course, has its significance. As just looking at our own advantages, to see the strengths of others, will make the proud. However, only to see the strengths of others, will only be blind to learn from others, is that right? Ever hear of such a fable: there is a young lion, determined to bee a most perfect lion. Later, it found a lion in the long distance running endurance than weak antelope. So he decided to learn antelope graze to increase endurance, finally the lion for grazing and bee physical depletion.
According to researchers, drive to make or receive handset has four effects: one is distracting the driver, call or answer the phone, the young driver reaction speed is only 70 year old driver, which greatly weakened the ability of accident drivers; o is a mobile phone to a traffic accident risk 4 times higher than usual, as more than 3 fatal traffic accidents because drivers can not concentrate induced; three is driving make or take a mobile phone also can influence other traffic efficiency, and increased road traffic congestion, is not conducive to the *** ooth road orderly. Fourth, a mobile phone in a moving car, mobile phone may be in order to avoid the area switching too frequent, and specify the large power station covering a wider range of services, its tran *** it power will be improved by the increasing tran *** ission distance. So I propose, drivers call a penalty of 200 yuan, deduct 2 points for security, for the sake of you and me.看一下,或许对你有帮助.。
关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
比如:There are different opinions among people as to ics .Some people suggest that it is interesting.
采纳我吧~~~呵呵,大家都是学生啊~~~》。《
To be a gay or not to be a gay.
To be a gay or not to be a gay?
That is a big question.
According to the results of the research which was done recently, 10* of people around the world are gay! There are also many experts insist everyone has the possibility of being a full homosexual.
What is " full homosexual?"It is also a question.
According to the liter written by Yinhe Lee, She said there are about 7 levels to recognise homosexuals, but I just make up 3 of them.
level 1: Admiration to people who are the same sex as you.
level 2: Occasional sex activities with same sex people .
level 3: Absolutely same sex activity.
People 's bias to homosexuals always says Homosexuals 's sex activities tran *** it sex Disease( Such as AIDS) much easier, however it is not true. **** the information given by WHO( world heath anisation) , they said according to the survey done last year, blood tran *** itting is the worst.
Then, to be a gay or not to be a gay?
There are 2 main problems need to be considered fully *** to be solved properly.
Firstly is your family. Are you ready to persuade them to permit your decision? to save your lover?。
Another one is marriage. The best way to maintain a long fair is getting married! But, there are only a few *****ries *** states in the world 's laws admit *** support the marriage of homos. Are you the resident of Holl***, Engl***, Spain。? If you are not, you need o make that up by yourself!
To be a gay or not to be a gay.
What???You do not want to be a gay or les any more?
Why do you e here to ruin our imagination???
The final *** permanent answer to this question is:
TO BE A GAY, OR BE KILLED BY US.
考英语书面表达写作指导之漫画作文(议论类) Tasks: 1. To deal with difficulty in writing about cartoons 2. To learn the basic structure of cartoon writing 3. To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writing 2010年江苏省高考说明:writing 示例1 鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。
它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。 但是, 过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。
请你以鼠标为切入点, 根据下表所提示的信息, 用英语写一篇短文。 注意: 1. 对所给要点逐一陈述, 适当发挥, 要简单翻译。
2. 词数150左右。 开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。 The mouse is a most effective device used by people to municate with a puter. __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ The mouse is a most effective device used by people to municate with a puter. 示例2 下图描绘的是现在许多家长的苦恼。
请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文,描述一下他们可能的做法并发表你的看法。 注意:1. 仔细品味图中文字的幽默、无奈,要适当发挥想象,不要做简单描述。
2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。 To most of the parents, it's no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor. Difficulties? 1. 读图 2. 解意 3. 谋篇 读图 1. 漫画的题目 眼睛 2. 漫画的画面 细节 3. 漫画的文字 观点 4. 漫画的夸张 寓意 解意 1. 辨明褒贬,找准角度 夸奖褒扬 or 批评讽喻? 2. 联系生活,明晰主旨 Imagination! 注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues),切记要认真阅读!!! 谋篇 3 parts: 1) describe the picture 2) interpret its meaning 3) give your opinions about the phenomenon Part 1 Describe the picture The picture is talking about/shows… The picture shows a mon phenomenon. The picture describes an interesting phenomenon. In the picture, there are…/…is (are) doing… The picture above is about … …Let's look at the picture above/first. Part 2 Interpret the picture It seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind of story is performed everywhere. The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of… The picture indicates that we…Nowadays, it is a mon phenomenon that… This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of mon phenomenon among… Part 3 Give your opinions I think/believe that As far as I'm concerned, In my opinion, From my point of view, Only in this way can…. Polish up your article! 1. To use linking words if necessary 2. To use plicated structures if possible 1. To use linking words 表示平行、对等或选择关系 and, as well as, together with, not only…but also。
表示转折关系 but, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, while 表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one hand…on the other hand。 表示因果关系 so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to. 表示时间、顺序关系 first, second …, then, next, finally, for one thing 。
for another, in the end, 表示递进、强调关系 besides, what's more, in addition, worse still, above all 表示解释、说明关系 such as, for example, for instance(例如), in other words, and so on 表示结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion 2. To use plicated structures For most of the parents, it's no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor. Let's look at the picture above. Two people are standing in front of a puter, whose monitor is wearing underwear. The woman is staring at the puter, thinking while the man is telling him that there are three ways to make the Inter safer for her children---hardware, sofare and underwear. It may be ridiculous to cover the PC monitor with someone's underwear, but it describes vividly parents' distress and feelings of helplessness when they are faced with the problem. Concerned about their children's security, some of them just cut off the access to the Inter at home -“the hardware solution”; some choose to use a certain sofare program to prevent their kids from getting on line –“the sofare solution”; others may make some rules to limit the time their children spend on the Inter -“the underwear solution”! From my point of view, this phenomenon calls for the attention of the whole society. On one hand, the government should make laws to censor the Inter and block inappropriate sites, making it a safer place for all teenagers. On the other hand, it is better for parents to give their children a proper guide instead of just prevention. Teenagers need to 。
我是写这种作文过来的。
关于这种作文老师当时说的话印象挺深刻.其实也没什么技巧,按着步骤写就好.如果你的英语好那么还是新颖点比较好.如果没有信心,就按以下步骤写.
1首先写幅漫画画的什么 人物 场景
2其次再写你认为这么画是为了什么 揭示了什么现象
3最后总结 点明主题
写这种作文需要有中心,不要东一块西一块.字体一定要写好.字体好的话即使一样的内容你的作文也会多一两分的.!!!!
加油阿~
Christian was playing with his father's golf club. But he's so careless that he broke the mirror. He's so afraid that his father would be angry at him. Therefore, he sat there and thought for a moment. Then an idea came to his mind. He cleared out the rest of the broken glasses and paint a picture of his father on there. After he finished his work, his father came. Christian did such a good job that he father didn't notice that it was just a picture but not his reflection. Suddenly, father felt a little strange. Because he was wearing a tie. But inside the “mirror” , he was wearing a bow tie! When he was puzzling, christian slipped away quietly.
100来字。 你要是觉得长了就自己删点吧。
My favorite books
My favorite book is a ic book. Those cute cartoons often makes me fet. I like the "ic party," "Man-Songs-off" There are many, many ic books 。 I think that the figure of the great painter, I like these cartoons. Jane and I will always keep these beautiful books, because they grew up with me. I love ics
我最喜欢的书
我最喜欢的书是漫画书。那些可爱的漫画常常使我流连忘返。我喜欢《漫画派对》《知音漫客》还有很多很多漫画书。
我觉得那些画家的人物画的真好,我特别喜欢这些漫画。
我会一直珍存这些美好的书,因为是它们伴随着我长大的。我爱漫画!
One day, the Christian accidentally ball broke the window, his father was very angry, and he ran out of the house. Very late he hasn't e back, his father is worry, just go out and find him. And his dad came home, he also broke a piece of glass, but this time his father didn't criticize him, instead embrace him cry。
As the years passed, living a life of ease and leisure tospend a holiday the idea more and more far away from me!Replace *** . is to look at the so-called good pressure, in one afternoon after the parents after the harsh, dad said to me: "the teacher said at the meeting, don't look at thoseboring, will only make people bee stupid ic book!'t read ic books! my father announced it to me, I was shocked. Why can make people relax, relieve fatigue of the ic bookwas so totally denied? Why now ics will destroy a generation Chinese? Why foreigners would not Chinese soinconsistent ics? Why people love ic imaginationmore often than dead dead time reading books Chinesemore innovative? Why foreign science and technologyChinese developed?My father giving this mand I is not to regard it as not read ic books? I admit that ic book lookreally performance will decline, but I am not every day watching cartoons, just under a lot of pressure, the mood is bad circumstances will read ics. A psychologist once investigated, most of the students Chinese happy or not is based on the achievement of! Don't father wanted me tobee such a person?Don't read ics will really improve a lot of my grades?I don't approve of this view. First, many good students in our class still like to watch cartoons, performance is still not affected by. Secondly, the ic can enhance people'simagination, very helpful for art and writing. Finally, I alsothink that learning tired, have a look the ic to relax, can make people have a better spirit into learning, so not onlydoes not make the performance decline, but conducive to learning! I believe every word of the *** , and efforts to do so, but why the result is not a bit better? Is it really my hardenough?The worst is perhaps I feel the heart pain. In an already do not know a noon after many days passed, it is playing the Saier number times, with a father to enty yuan pocket money to me, I bought a Book of "Purcell Wizard", this isthe latest version, certainly not the students to buy! Which makes me pleased with oneself. Indeed, to the school, my book is subject to a lot of playing the Saier numberstudents pursued! I feel very proud! Ha-ha. You don't have! You can see for a while, but I can always see! Then I can understand the trend of elves in all the Saier number!But it didn't make me happy for long, or sorrow! Ding Ding ding! When the bell rang, originally thought that students can go, can not think of is not dispersed, but see more fall over each other! A terrible thing happened, quicker than words can tell, just by the teacher quick footed came. This teacher, even playing tricks in the table clas *** atesescaped her eye, let alone a bunch of us! Sure enoughteachers to blunt e over, confiscated my poor books."Piss me off! Why do I always hurt! I'm in the depths of the soul! "When the meeting, I don't give you the parents said?Don't bring ic books to school! Fang said the teacherin front of me. I lowered his head, said: "I was wrong." Ithink things like this in the past, in fact, not yet! The second day the teacher took a lesson to teach us, first let me tear up that I die were reluctant to tear the book, thensincere words and earnest wishes to our *** ysis of the advantages and disadvantages of watching cartoons,finally, I feel a heartfelt admiration to accept the teacher'spoint of like this in the past, though I still not pletely cut off the ic, but from the heart to accept the teacher's point of view, the reasonable arrangement of the ic books and learning time, my freedom, my life is still as of old.。
画漫画的英语:draw cartoon。
重点词汇:1、draw英 [drɔ:] 美 [drɔ] vt.& vi.吸引;绘画;拖,拉;招致。baivt.画;吸引;拉。
2、cartoon英 [kɑdu:ˈtu:n] 美 [kɑ:rˈtu:n] n.漫画;动画片;讽刺画;草图。vt.为…画漫画。
draw cartoon例句:He can draw a lot of cartoon characters. 他会画很多卡通人物。扩展资料:draw可用作及物动词,也可用作不及物动词。
用作及物动词时后接名词或zhi代词作宾语,也可接双宾语,其间接宾语可以转化为dao介词for的宾语,还可接以形容词或动词不定式充当补足语的复合宾语。作不及物动词时,其主动形式可具有被动意义。
draw的过去分词drawn可用作形容词,在句中作表专语或定语。cartoon的词属汇搭配:1、cartoon film 卡通片2、animated cartoon 卡通片3、cartoon set 动画布景4、strip cartoon 连环漫画。
5、cartoon strip 连环漫画。
关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
比如:There are different opinions among people as to ics .Some people suggest that it is interesting.
采纳我吧~~~呵呵,大家都是学生啊~~~》。《
在成长的历程中,有一位伙伴一直伴随着我。在我失败时,它给了我信心;在我气馁时,它给了我勇气;在我伤心时,它给了我安慰……。它就是一句名言失败是成功之母!
当我因考试失误而气时馁,面对那鲜红的“x”,听着同学们的冷嘲热讽,看着父母失望的眼光,我哭了,我对自己失去了信心。猛然间,我头脑中闪过了那句名言——失败是成功之母!我猛然醒悟:哪个人没有失败?摔倒了,再爬起来!于是,我又重新振作了起来,将泪水化着汗水,勤奋学习,不懂就问,终于在又一次的考试中取得了优异的成绩。啊!名言,我感谢你!
当我努力去干一件事而屡遭失败时,我气极败坏,将自己关进了小房间里,不住地哭泣,我恨自己,恨自己不争气,恨自己不成才,甚至恨父母怎么生个这么笨的我。忽然,一盏明灯在我心头点亮——失败是成功之母!我茅塞顿开:不经历风雨怎么见彩虹?没有爬不过的高山,没有闯不过的险滩!于是我擦干眼泪,又继续干了起来。功夫不负有心人,终于,我成功了!啊!名言,我感谢你!
当我因工作不细致使班级荣誉受到损害时,我羞愧万分,恨不得一头钻进地缝中。悔恨的泪水无声地在我的脸庞上流淌,我的心也在哭泣,我辜负了老师对我的期望。此时,“失败是成功之母!”这句名言轻轻扣开我心灵的大门,我豁然开朗:做错了怕什么?及时改正就行了呗!那以后,我更加努力地工作,后来,我还被评为优秀队干。啊!名言,我感谢你!
这位好伙伴已陪伴我走过了六个春夏秋冬,帮我闯过了一个又一个的激流险滩。如今,我把它工整地抄下来,贴在书桌前。它将成为我人生旅程中一座不灭的灯塔,永远指引着我劈波斩浪,驶向成功的彼岸!
考英语书面表达写作指导之漫画作文(议论类)Tasks:1. To deal with difficulty in writing about cartoons2. To learn the basic structure of cartoon writing3. To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writing2010年江苏省高考说明:writing示例1鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。
它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。 但是, 过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。
请你以鼠标为切入点, 根据下表所提示的信息, 用英语写一篇短文。注意:1. 对所给要点逐一陈述, 适当发挥, 要简单翻译。
2. 词数150左右。 开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。The mouse is a most effective device used by people to municate with a __________________________________________________________________The mouse is a most effective device used by people to municate with a puter. 示例2下图描绘的是现在许多家长的苦恼。
请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文,描述一下他们可能的做法并发表你的看法。注意:1. 仔细品味图中文字的幽默、无奈,要适当发挥想象,不要做简单描述。
2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。To most of the parents, it's no easy job to keep their children away from the PC . 读图2. 解意3. 谋篇读图1. 漫画的题目 眼睛2. 漫画的画面 细节3. 漫画的文字 观点4. 漫画的夸张 寓意解意1. 辨明褒贬,找准角度 夸奖褒扬 or 批评讽喻? 2. 联系生活,明晰主旨 Imagination! 注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues),切记要认真阅读!谋篇3 parts:1) describe the picture2) interpret its meaning3) give your opinions about the phenomenonPart 1 Describe the pictureThe picture is talking about/shows…The picture shows a mon phenomenon. The picture describes an interesting the picture, there are…/…is (are) doing…The picture above is about ……Let's look at the picture above/ 2 Interpret the pictureIt seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind of story is performed picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of…The picture indicates that we…Nowadays, it is a mon phenomenon that…This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of mon phenomenon among…Part 3 Give your opinionsI think/believe thatAs far as I'm concerned,In my opinion,From my point of view,Only in this way can….Polish up your article!1. To use linking words if necessary2. To use plicated structures if possible 1. To use linking words表示平行、对等或选择关系 and, as well as, together with, not only…but also。
表示转折关系 but, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, while表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one hand…on the other hand。表示因果关系 so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to. 表示时间、顺序关系 first, second …, then, next, finally, for one thing 。
for another, in the end, 表示递进、强调关系 besides, what's more, in addition, worse still, above all表示解释、说明关系 such as, for example, for instance(例如), in other words, and so on表示结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion2. To use plicated structuresFor most of the parents, it's no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor. Let's look at the picture above. Two people are standing in front of a puter, whose monitor is wearing underwear. The woman is staring at the puter, thinking while the man is telling him that there are three ways to make the Inter safer for her children---hardware, sofare and may be ridiculous to cover the PC monitor with someone's underwear, but it describes vividly parents' distress and feelings of helplessness when they are faced with the problem. Concerned about their children's security, some of them just cut off the access to the Inter at home -“the hardware solution”; some choose to use a certain sofare program to prevent their kids from getting on line –“the sofare solution”; others may make some rules to limit the time their children spend on the Inter -“the underwear solution”!From my point of view, this phenomenon calls for the attention of the whole society. On one hand, the government should make laws to censor the Inter and block inappropriate sites, making it a safer place for all teenagers. On the other hand, it is better for parents to give their children a proper guide instead of just prevention. Teenagers need to be taught how to tell and resist bad information consciously. Only in 。
英语的作文和汉语的作文写法不一样。这是因为英语是意合性语言,而汉语是形合性语言的缘故。
由于这点,所以写英语作文最应该注意的就是要让作文在意上表现的紧密。
就你所提的问题来看,依据上叙英语语言的特点,写英语四六级作文常以三段式最为常见,即首先谈论别人的观点;然后论叙自己的意见,即点题,说明你的观点;最后总结。这是相当于论叙文(议论文)而言的,其它种类的文章也大抵如此。
不过,你若是写其它论文或是水平层次较高的文章,当然就没有什么很固有的结构,也没有必要。但是所有高水平的文章都是基于在一定的基础上的。
一. 英语作文开头方式
1、“开门见山”式
一般来说,文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”,即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题,使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。
① 对于叙事类的文章,可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是:Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
② 对于论述性的文章,可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点,接着展开进一步的论述。如“The Time and the Money (时间和金钱)” 的开头可以是:Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don't think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back, but……
2、回忆性开头
二. 英语作文结尾方式
1、自然结尾,点明主题
随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。如“Helping the Policeman (帮助警察)”的结尾可以是:The o children were praised by the police and they felt happy. 再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)” 的结尾可以是:When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。
我是写这种作文过来的。
关于这种作文老师当时说的话印象挺深刻.其实也没什么技巧,按着步骤写就好.如果你的英语好那么还是新颖点比较好.如果没有信心,就按以下步骤写.
1首先写幅漫画画的什么 人物 场景
2其次再写你认为这么画是为了什么 揭示了什么现象
3最后总结 点明主题
写这种作文需要有中心,不要东一块西一块.字体一定要写好.字体好的话即使一样的内容你的作文也会多一两分的.!!!!
加油阿~
高考英语作文万能开头,结尾高考英语作文开头万能公式:
1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
经典句型: A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)
更多经典句型: As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
According to a recent survey, about of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
Honesty 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
Youth 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work? 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型:
A recent statistics shows that … 写作绝招
结尾万能公式: 1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
更多过渡短语: to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型: Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
更多句型: Accordingly, I remend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
一、开头句型 far as …is concerned 就……而言 goes without saying that… 不言而喻,… can be said with certainty that… 可以肯定地说…… the proverb says, 正如谚语所说的, has to be noticed that… 它必须注意到,… 's generally recognized that… 它普遍认为… 's likely that … 这可能是因为… 's hardly that… 这是很难的…… 's hardly too much to say that… 它几乎没有太多的说3233363533e78988e69d83366… calls for special attention is that…需要特别注意的是 's no denying the fact that…毫无疑问,无可否认 is more important than the fact that… 没有什么比这更重要的是… 's far more important is that… 更重要的是… 二、衔接句型 case in point is … 一个典型的例子是… is often the case…由于通常情况下… stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述 the problem is not so 然而问题并非如此简单,所以…… it's a pity that… 但遗憾的是… all that…对于这一切…… In spite of the fact that…尽管事实…… , we hold opinion that… 此外,我们坚持认为,… , the difficulty lies in…然而,困难在于… , we should pay attention to… 同样,我们要注意… (that)…but(that)…不是,而是 view of the present station.鉴于目前形势 has been mentioned above…正如上面所提到的… this respect, we may as well (say) 从这个角度上我们可以说 , we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is… 然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面,即 … 三、结尾句型 will conclude by saying… 最后我要说… , we have the reason to believe that…因此,我们有理由相信… things considered,总而言之 It may be safely said that…它可以有把握地说…… , in my opinion, it's more advisable…因此,在我看来,更可取的是… what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that…通过以上讨论,我们可以得出结论… data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that…通过数据我们得到的结论是,… can be concluded from the discussion that…从中我们可以得出这样的结论 my point of view, it would be better if…在我看来……也许更好 四、举例句型 's take…to illustrate this. 's take the above chart as an example to illustrate this. is one more example. … for example. same is true of… offers a typical instance of… may quote a mon example of… think of…。
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