论文雅思题目

首先，我们来整理一下雅思议论文审题的思路，一般雅思议论文的题目都由两部分组成：“背景?+?指令”，前者决定了文章所写的内容，后者决定了论文的文体。如"Some?people?believe?that?the?charity?organisations?should?give?aid?to?those?in?greatest?need,?wherever?they?live.?Some?people?believe?that?the?charity?organisations?would?better?concentrate?on?helping?people?who?live?in?own?country?instead.?Discuss?both?views,?and?give?your?opinion."?背景涉及的是慈善援助问题，讨论是应该不顾地域限制，援助最需要救助的人?还是优先帮助本国人?指令则要求写一篇辩论型的文章。只有对题目的两个要求都作出准确的回应，在内容和文体上完美的结合，才能取得理想的分数。官方对于"Task?Achievement"的9分规定就指出"fully?satisfies?all?the?requirements?of?the?task;?clearly?presents?a?fully?developed?response"(完全满足所有题目要求，清晰地给出充分的回应)。根据这一思路，满分路上的一大拦路虎就是审题，理解片面导致扣分。我们可以将其分成两种类型：1、片面理解文章背景内容导致偏题一些考生在不理解题意的时候最喜欢抓住题目的某几个字眼着力说明和描述，忽视了题目的整体立意，导致偏题。①?不理解题目意思以下面这道真题为例"Today?there?is?a?great?increase?in?anti-social?behaviour?and?lack?of?respect?to?others.?What?are?the?causes?of?this??What?measures?can?be?taken?to?reduce?this?problem?"?许多考生反映题目难以理解，这主要是源于对"anti-social?behaviour"的定义不清，于是把重点放在了后半句"lack?of?respect?to?others"上，有人大书特书当今年轻人不尊重老年人，有人着重描写偷盗等极端犯罪行为，将原因归结为贫穷缺钱。尽管两者之间存在一定联系，但绝对不能将其片面地理解为诸如“谩骂他人，不给老年人让座”的狭隘例子。"Anti-social?behaviour?is?behaviour?that?lacks?consideration?for?others?and?that?may?cause?damage?to?society,?whether?intentionally?or?through?negligence,?as?opposed?to?pro-social?behaviour,?behaviour?that?helps?or?benefits?society?(Berger?2003,?p.?302)."?这是在维基百科里给出的解释，包括校园暴力、公众场合醉酒、破坏公物等都在此范围内，以偏概全，再去分析产生的原因和解决方式，就很难达到对题目充分回应的要求。针对该点，建议考生应在备考时加强对雅思题目涉及范围的了解，平时对社会热点问题加以关注并熟悉其英语词汇，以免偏离主题。②?从题目个别字眼出发再来看一道真题"Air?travel?can?only?benefit?the?richest?people?in?the?world.?The?ordinary?people?can?get?no?advantage?with?the?development?of?air?travel.?To?what?extent?do?you?agree?or?disagree?"?许多考生看到了飞机旅行的字眼就匆忙下笔，大书特书飞机旅行的利弊如耗费能源、造成污染等。殊不知本题讨论的是飞机旅行给富人和一般人带来的好处。等写完定睛一看，悔之晚矣。针对这类“性急”的考生的建议是，“三思而后行”，认真体会题目的意思。背景理解的片面常源于考生性急的心理或是对某些词汇句式无法很好的把握。要避免此类问题的发生，建议平时要加强对写作真题题目的审题练习并对常见热点问题词汇加以记忆。2、片面理解指令要求导致偏题题目的指令常常隐含着出题者对文章的期待和要求，考生应该认真琢磨，以免偏题。①?片面理解指令个别字眼Many?people?think?it?is?very?important?to?protect?environment?but?they?make?no?effort?to?do?it?themselves.?Why?does?it?happen??How?to?solve?this?problem??有些考生只注意到"why"和题目背景中的环保场景，没有将背景和指令结合起来理解，结果仅仅说明了人们保护环境的原因而忽视了题目的要求“人们明知环保重要却不为之的原因”。我认为，就几十个字的题目来说，考生宁可多花上一点时间认真理解题意，只有主题立意准确，才谈得上词汇、句式和整体连贯性的得分。②?没有认真把握指令之间的联系Many?people?are?optimistic?about?the?21st?century?and?see?it?as?an?opportunity?to?make?positive?changes?to?the?world.?To?what?extent?do?you?agree?or?disagree?with?their?optimism??What?changes?would?you?like?to?see?in?the?new?century??该题有两个指令，分别是“是否同意题目的乐观态度”及“你希望在新世纪看到哪些改变?”乍看之下，考生可以同意背景中的态度，对一些积极的变化加以评述，但第二个指令其实隐含着出题人对正反两面都进行分析的要求，否则就显得多余。因此，双边或者让步的文章结构会更适合该题。指令理解的片面性常常源于考生的过度自信，看了个大概就匆匆下笔。

雅思写作遇到法律犯罪类的题目该怎么解答，下面我给大家整理了该题目的解析大全，希望对你们有所帮助。

雅思写作典型法律犯罪题目讲解

A类的雅思大作文大致可以分为教育，社会，科技，政府政策，大众媒体，法律和犯罪这么六大类的题目，而其中学生们普遍反映最怵的，感觉最无从下手的题目当属法律与犯罪类型的题目。截至到08年12月22日为止，在1月12日，8月16日以及10月11日的考试均出现了法律，犯罪的题目。虽然说出题频率相对来说并不是非常的频繁，但是如果学生在备考中没有进行合理有效的对此类话题具有针对性的总结和复习的话，相信很难在写作中取得什么理想的分数(参加了这几次考试中的学员的分数普遍不是非常的理想)。而纵观市面上大量的雅思写作指导，烤鸭备考秘笈这些针对不同层次，不同水平的学生而编辑的雅思丛书中，我们也很难看到针对犯罪这类题目的一些教学及复习指导。在此篇论文中，我将就法律与犯罪所涉及的一些常见话题给大家从其内容，语言逐一进行分析，希望雅思教师们或者烤鸭们能够从中受益。

1. Can capital punishment (death penalty) ever be justified?

是否应该有死刑?

这个题目可以说是一谈到法律犯罪这一大类话题时，最会经常谈到的问题。对于大多数中国雅思考生，尤其是高中生，大学生，如果没有事先经过精心准备的话，对这个题目恐怕只能是傻眼了。关于这个话题，大致可以分成以下这几个分论点来展开：

Arguments against capital punishment

1. 死刑只是对罪犯的一种处罚，而并不能够将犯罪行为中受害者生命挽回，或者赔偿其所遭受的伤害

Capital punishment, which even though manages to bring the criminals to justice, could by no means compensate for physical, mental and psychological sufferings inflicted on victims, or in some extreme cases, bring back their lives.

2. 无论一个人犯多大的错误，其他人都无权剥夺其生命。 (人权)

It is entirely unjustified to deprive one of his/her rights to live regardless of how insanely severe and cruel the offenses he/she has committed are. (This subject matter has boiled to the controversial issue of human rights)

3. 死刑犯的尸体的处理(是否可以用于器官移植等等)将是一个非常具有争议的道德问题。

How the body of the deceased criminal is going to be disposed of (used for organ transplant, for instance) will be bound to raise grave both ethical and social implications.

Arguments for capital punishment

1. 如果死刑犯没有受到最为严厉的惩罚，那么这对受害者是不公平的。

It would be only fair for the victims if the criminals are subject to the greatest fear of all- death.

2. 如果死刑取消的话，那么很多潜在的罪犯就不会顾忌做出一些极为可怕的犯罪行为。

If capital punishment is ever to be done away with, the potential wrong-doers wouldn’t be deterred from committing staggeringly serious offenses among which serial murder proves particularly appalling.

2. Should criminals be sent to prisons or placed on education and job retraining?

类似的题目之前曾经考过，而在今年的1月12日再次出现。对于这个题目，很多学生会非常容易的陷入一个陷阱(pitfall)，那就是认为说如果让学生接受教育或就业培训的话，那就是等同于有充分的人身自由了。其实不然，这里的教育或就业培训并不代表说把囚犯与普通的学生或接受培训者一样等同的对待，而是一样的要限制他们的自由，只不过说不像在监狱里整天关在牢房里无所事事，而是要接受教育和培训。关于这个题目，其实就变成了一个两者之间的对比，可以从以下几个方面进行论述。

1. 监狱同教育或就业培训相比有很强的阻吓作用，这样可以有效的抑制犯罪率的上升。

In stark contrast to placing criminals on educational courses or employment retraining, prisons appeared more effective in deterring potential, would-be wrongdoers from committing crimes, thus drastically decreasing the likelihood of rising crime rate.

2. 监狱更多的对罪犯来说是一种惩罚，因此能够避免再犯。

Being locked up behind the bars is a punitive measure imposed on criminals who are highly unlikely to turn into a recidivist in consideration of their fear of setting foot into jails ever again.

Arguments for education and job retraining

1. 罪犯在监狱里所被包围的是一群囚犯，这对罪犯的改造不是好的，反而是不好的影响。接受教育可以让罪犯在一个积极的环境里，真正的意识到对与错。

“Captivity of negativity” is a terminology intended to describe the destructive, rather than constructive impact on criminals who are locked up in prison, surrounded by people who probably have committed even more serious charges. Education serves to correct any misconception or eliminate twisted thoughts they have by immersing them in a positive environment.

2. 大多数罪犯往往是没有什么文化知识和生存技能，出狱后通常很难找到工作。教育和就业培训能够让他们在日后的生活中靠自己生存下去，而不至于因为没有收入来源而再次误入歧途。

A significant proportion of criminals are sadly illiterate without adequate fundamental knowledge and survival skills and it wouldn’t be easy for them to find a decent job after being released from the jail. With convenient access to education and job retraining, they are able to survive by themselves, greatly reducing the chance of becoming a recidivist in times when they are financially challenged.

3. Should individual choices interfere with the society that is based on rules and laws

这是今年10月11号的考题，这道题目主要讨论的核心是一种矛盾。那就是社会始终是以法规和法律为基础的，而有时社会的利益往往是与个人的选择相矛盾的。当这种矛盾发生时，应该将哪一个放在首位?为什么?这次考试结束后，我曾经与几个参与考试的学生讨论过，很多学生的反映就是这个题目其实并不难，但就是不知道怎样下手。还有某位学生直接就举了一个我们不能随便杀人，因为这是违反法律的事情的这样一个例子。其实，这个题目最为关键的是两点：怎样去法律的范围还有就是要找到一个合适法律与个人选择发生冲突的这么一个结合点。我对这个题目的段落结构以及内容的理解如下：

1.这种矛盾的产生主要是因为法律法规是从大众和国家的利益出发，而个人利益则绝大多数情况下是站在个人角度考虑问题的。一个有利于个人的问题如果给其他人造成了无谓的伤害，则是不应该允许的。

The conflict of public interest and personal interest accounts largely for the issue of the extent to which is the interference of personal choices justified with the society governed by rules and laws.

这里我们可以举一个例子，就知识产权(Intellectual Property Rights).很多人都会去网络上下载免费电影，音乐以及电子书。这样做的原因就是正版(authentic copy)相对中国消费者来说太贵。虽然说这看起来合情合理，大多数人都会从中受益，但是这也同时伤害到了娱乐明星们(celebrities)和唱片公司的利益，所以这时候应该以法律为根本，杜绝这种行为。

2.反过来说，我们不可否认个别特别情况下法律也应该给正当的个人选择让步

On the other hand, rules and laws should give in to personal choices in some special cases.

比如说，开车送心脏病突然发作的人赶往医院。尽管说途中司机可能会闯红灯(run red lights，会造成一定的交通混乱，甚至说还有发生交通事故的可能。但是这样一种行为我认为应该被理解(tolerated). 这是出于法律之外的，但是又合乎情理的。当然，这种法律的让步是有限的，很多时候确实很难判断。所以，无论是法律还是个人选择，最终都是从应该是整体的利益出发.

以上就是我对三个比较典型的法律犯罪类的题目的讲解，希望能够帮助到在紧张备考雅思的考生们。

雅思大作文解析及范文：社会法律规范是否该遵守

Task:Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

思路解析：

应该遵守：法律和法规是社会有序运行的前提，它们规范了人们的行为和思想，让人们的活动能限制在一个安全的，合法的范围。相反，一旦人们恣意妄为地来忽略这些法律的话，整个社会会陷入混乱。举例，如果交通法规不被遵守，则会出现大量的车祸。如果刑法不被遵守的话，则会出现大量的社会犯罪。

不应该遵守：对于那些不公正的法律，人们应该被授予足够的自由来进行对抗。举例，如果美国今天仍然保留着奴隶法案的话，则今天的美国黑人将处境悲惨，没有教育，医疗，工作和投票的权利。可以看到，这样的法律必将引发来自黑人的愤怒，反抗，甚至是战争。

参考范文：

Nowadays, there is an assertion that the freedom of citizens should be limited; otherwise it might harm the social laws and justice system, thus making our society unstable. Personally, this view is psychologically right, while it overlooks the importance of fighting against the unfair laws freely.

Firstly, there is no doubt that obeying social rules and laws is the fundamental obligation for all individuals, for the reason that they serve as a key function of ensuring our society running on the right track. Obviously, these regulations define the borders between the right and the wrong, the social ethics and day-to-day conduct standards, all of which can instruct and regulate citizens to act and think in a lawful, polite and safe way. Otherwise, the ignorance of these regulations, or so-called “an absolute freedom”, will trap our society into chaos and even malfunction. For example, if the traffic laws were disrespected, it is expected that all streets and highways will be full of congestions and car crashes caused by wrongdoings in driving like blind over speed or overtaking. Similarly, if the criminal law were absent, then there will be no concern of punishments for committing crimes. Consequently, illegal activities including thefts, robberies, arson, rapes, vandalism and murders will be overwhelming, which will not only place the poverties and lives of the public in the danger, but also destroy today’s civilization in a long term.

However, there is always a justification that people should be allowed to freely question and topple those unfair laws that are the barriers of democracy development. In history, the typical example is the slavery law in America that defined African-Americans as second-class citizens and deprived their rights of public education, health care and vote. If this evil law were just followed, instead of being eradicated through the pursuit of human freedom, we now can predict clearly that current the community of America would be still full of inequity, discrimination, and massive social disorder caused by conflicts between the black and white.

All in all, I agree that it is very necessary to limit the freedom of the public by confining their behaviors in the bounds of social regulation and laws, which is the pre-condition of social democracy and stability. However, when it comes to unjust laws, the public should have the freedom to eliminate them.

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雅思写作重点题目总结：犯罪与法律类

1. 青少年犯罪

母题：In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this case happening? How should children or teenagers be punished? (100804)

提示：青少年犯罪juvenile delinquency 产生的原因及其解决方法。可从家庭、社会、媒体三个角度分析。

子题：很多年轻人有一种反社会行为，原因是什么，如何解决?犯罪是人类本性，还是可以预防的?

2. 犯罪预防

母题：Unlike in most other countries, police in the UK do not commonly carry guns. Some people think it leaves citizens unprotected. But others think it reduces the overall violence in our society. Discuss both sides of the view and give your opinion. (040320, 040619)

提示：这道题目当之无愧地成为母题，因为这道话题自从2010年9月起已经成为了雅思口语话题中的题目。11年8月20日，这道题目以变题的形式再一次出现在雅思写作中。

子题：是否应该严惩违反交规者?城市中采取预防犯罪的措施，利大于弊吗?个人如果为所欲为，社会就无法运转，你同意吗?犯罪是世界问题，无法预防，你同意吗?

3. 罪犯惩处

母题：Sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree or disagree? (050618, 080918)

提示：其实囚禁imprisonment和再教育都是一种让囚犯改造rehabilitate的方法。还有community service对于轻犯和初犯都是一种不错的惩处方式。

子题：监狱除了惩罚犯罪，还有什么功能?降低犯罪的最佳方法是延长监狱星期吗?刑满释放人员再犯罪率很高，为什么，如何解决?你认为罪犯应该送到监狱还是应该做一些社区工作或学习一些技能?

雅思写作高难词汇整理：法律专集

犯罪/违反法律:commit a crime , break the law,

law breaking, violate the law, against the law,

罪犯: criminal, law offender, law breaker,

law violator, villain, vermin, convict

守法: abide by the law, comply, compliance with the law,

conform. to the law, abidance by law, keep the law

滥用法律: abuse of law, stretch the law

监狱/关押:jail, prison, imprisonment, imprison, incarcerate, lock up

死刑: capital punishment, death penalty, death sentence

无期徒刑: life sentence, life prisonment, lifelong punishment

受害者: victim, casualty

无辜的: innocent, harmless

改造: rehabilitate

威慑力: deterrent

逮捕: arrest, apprehend

武装抢劫: armed robbery ; 纵火: arson;

敲诈勒索: blackmail; 贩卖违禁品: bootlegging;

非法闯入: break-in; 行贿受贿:bribery;

窃听: bug; 入室盗窃: burglary;

职业罪犯: career criminal; 虐待儿童 : child abuse;

伪造: counterfeit; 强奸犯:rapist;

赌博: gamble; 劫持: hijack;

集团犯罪:organized crime; 扒手: pickpocket;

色情商店: pornoshop; 逃税: tax evasion;

仁慈的: lenient, merciful;

开明的: enlightened,

文明的: civilized,

仁慈的: humane

和谐的: harmonious

同情的的: sympathetic

残忍的: cruel, brutal, merciless, inhumane, dispiteous

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雅思论文范文

2017雅思作文参考范文

老一辈人对人们的生活、思想和行为有着非常传统的`观念。然而，有些人认为这些想法对现代生活的年轻一代没有任何帮助。你同意这种观点吗?为什么?下面是我分享的雅思作文范文，希望能对大家有所帮助!

题目：The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

范文：

It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with the needs of younger people. While I agree that some traditional ideas are outdated, I believe that others are still useful and should not be forgotten.

On the one hand, many of the ideas that elderly people have about life are becoming less relevant for younger people. In the past, for example, people were advised to learn a profession and find a secure job for life, but today’s workers expect much more variety and diversity from their careers. At the same time, the ‘rules’ around relationships are being eroded as young adults make their own choices about who and when to marry. But perhaps the greatest disparity between the generations can be seen in their attitudes towards gender roles. The traditional roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives, are no longer accepted as necessary or appropriate by most younger people.

On the other hand, some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern world. For example, older generations attach great importance to working hard, doing one’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s competitive job market. Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with respect. Finally, I believe that young people would lead happier lives if they had a more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community and neighbourliness.

In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpful in today’s world, we should not dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelevant.

题目：Art classes, like painting and drawing, are not as important as other subjects, so some people think that it should not be a compulsory subject at high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

范文1：

Schools are places where students acquire knowledge and skills needed for further achievements. Given the pressure that students are facing, some cannot help wondering whether art classes should still be compulsory.

Those holding the view that art classes should not be compulsory might think that art consumes too much of students' time. Fierce competitions students will face When applying for universities necessitate total devotion to academic subjects. College students who intend to take science as their major are even expected to be fluent in foreign languages now so that essays written by foreign scholars are not barriers in their academic pursuit. In other words, high school students are supposed to show higher levels of academic competence,which seemingly makes art unessential.

However, art classes are by no means only intended for entertainment. Children even dabbling in art tend to be more creative in mind. Those skilled in music or painting can interpret the world in a way that we cannot expect from a layman. This kind of ingenuity is also a rare quality constantly found in great scientists, whose contributions have served to create a totally new field for the latter generations. In his reply to a question about death, Albert Einstein considered his departure from the mortal world to be forever farewell to another great musician. With a sigh he answered "I cannot listen to Mozart anymore". Thus, can we simply regard art classes to be selective?

In conclusion, although stricter academic requirements are imposed on students, this cannot be an excuse for excluding art subjects from their curricula. Whatever kind of art can stimulate and inspire students, paving way for their future academic attainment.

范文2：

When the news came that art classes such as music, painting and drawing would be made mandatory in my high school, it was met with both approvals and objections. This mixed response reflects the different attitudes towards the role of art in the education of high school students.

Those who stand up for art classes argue that art is so important to the students’ development that it should be made compulsory. By taking art classes, students may come out of their shell socially and make friends with those with similar interests. Furthermore, rather than a waste of time, taking art classes can actually help students with other subjects such as maths and physics. The theory is that art can help exercise our mental power (imagination, for example) and make us smarter. More importantly, art calls for persistent practice and unyielding stamina, which are also important qualities that we expect our students to possess.

Objections of art classes as required mainly come from those who think art classes are a waste of time because they are not useful to students. Except for the very few who may take art as their lifelong career, the great majority of students will not get a job in relation to art when they finish their high school. Besides, what is the point of compelling a student who has no interest in art to spend many hours restlessly in the art classes?

To my mind, art classes should become compulsory in high school. The objective of education is not just to let students acquire the basic practical survival skills, but to prepare them for the future life, both physically and mentally. With this in mind, we can safely conclude that the time spent on art will be rewarding in the long run. Of course, the schools should be very careful when deciding on the required hours that should be spent on art classes.

静观这几年，教育类的写作话题深受雅思君的喜爱，下面我给大家分享一些雅思写作范文集锦:教育类，希望可以帮助大家备考。

雅思写作教育类高分范文：孩子参加辅导班的利与弊

Nowadays children are joining extra coaching classes apart from the school studies. Some think it is important for their future, others think the extra time should be spent playing. Do you agree or disagree? 现在孩子加入额外的培训课程除了学习。一些人认为它是重要为他们的未来,别人都认为这些额外的时间应该用来玩耍。你赞成还是反对?

In order to improve their education, children are participating in extra classes after school instead of spending time playing. This has raised a heated debate around the world whether it is a positive or negative development. Some people believe extra coaching classes lead to good job prospect, whereas others hold a distinctive view and think that children should spend their spare time on leisure activities. In my opinion, I believe that students should join extra classes if they are poor in particular subjects.

In fact, many students have difficulty to keep up with other students in their class, so going to extra classes is an ideal way to fill in the part of lessons they do not understand. In addition, as extra coaching classes generally specialize in a particular subject, the teaching method is much more better than at school and students are able to practice solving exercise problems from a variety of resource. Although self-study is also an effective way to improve their study, some students find it hard to practice this method because the lack of resource for practice problems solving and someone to explain to them.

Furthermore, in the extra coaching classes, students can also improve their social skill, which is very important in their lives and usually requires in almost every career. Even though spare time after school studies should be spent on playing or other leisure activities, children can also do these activities at the weekend and spend the weekdays studying hard. Besides, the break time between classes allows students to play games and do some leisure activities such as reading books or listening to music.

To sum up, participating in extra classes can help students in their study a great deal and they will get result after studying extra time. However, students should not overwork themselves and should spend the weekend on some leisure activities apart from study so as to refreshing their mind and relax.

雅思教育类写作高分范文：大学是否应该为大学生提供职场技能

雅思写作题目：

Nowadays, some university offer graduate students skills that assist to find employment, but some people believe the main function of university should be to access knowledge for its sake. What is your opinion?

写作范文：

As university education is the last stage before the starting of career, many people believe that it prepares students for employment only, but the fact is that it serves a lot many purposes. In this essay I shall discuss the various functions of a university.

Universities provide specialised education in fields such as medical, engineering, commerce etc. They provide library facilities, which support the curriculum. They provide laboratory facilities for science and technology related subjects. They send students to factories and industries so that they get practical experience. This job-oriented training helps them to understand the working conditions and also gives them an idea about competition in the market. They also create job opportunities for the students by arranging campus interviews.

On the other hand, universities also perform other functions which help the students in their personal life. They organise co-curricular activities such as cultural programmes, sports, debates, fairs etc. They gain many qualities such as self-confidence and positive attitude, which help them in their future life. Moreover, some people just go to university for gaining knowledge just out of interest for the subject. For example, a doctor may want to learn French language just for interest in the language.

Furthermore, a university is a place to know more about the world because there are students from across the globe in a university. For many, who may never travel abroad, this may be a chance of a lifetime for them to broaden their horizons and know more about the different cultures of the world. For example, in LPU ( Lovely Professional University), there are 200 students from Malaysia, Korea and other parts of the world.

To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, universities do not simply prepare a person for employment, but also have many other functions.

雅思写作范文海外留学的利与弊

海外留学的利与弊雅思写作题目：

More and more students choose to move to other oversea countries to have the higher education. Does the trend bring more benefits than disadvantages? What is your opinion?

下面我们一起来了解一下这个写作题目的范文：

An increasing number of Chinese students choose to have their higher education abroad. A heated discussion is triggered by the benefits and disadvantages that overseas education brings. In my opinion, although pursuing higher education in other countries may have some drawbacks, it would bring us more benefits.

Firstly, the ability to master a foreign language and appreciate other cultures could make us more competitive in the face of a globalizing world. A popular theory states that the best way to learn a different language is to spend a lengthy amount of time in the surroundings where the language is spoken. The possibility of broadening foreign language skills increases greatly when forced to communicate in such a way as different from their own. In addition, students who live under the confines of foreign culture develop the sense of a greater perspective of the world around them, and the ability to understand societal differences.

Secondly, many universities in other countries enjoy renowned reputations that provide a substantially higher quality of education. If students immerse themselves into such academic environments, they are exposed to the greatest minds of a certain field and chances that may sparkle brilliant insights.

Last but not least, studying abroad removes you from the normal support network that you are accustomed to back at home. While being away from friends and family can seem daunting, it is also a chance for you to hone your own skills and gain some independence. One major aspect of being an independent adult is having the ability to manage your own finances. Furthermore, living in a new country also forces you to familiarize yourself with the various living expenses. Understanding how to manage your expenses will especially be beneficial when you no longer rely on the support of your family.

Despite of some challenges international students may face such as homesickness and financial burden, studying abroad could reward students with excellent chances that lead them to a brighter future.

雅思教育类写作范文之儿童早学外语利弊

雅思教育类写作范文之儿童早学外语利弊写作题目：Some people say that teaching foreign languages to children in primary school is good and the advantages of teaching foreign language early outweigh the disadvantages. What is your opinion?有人认为，儿童在小学学习外语很有利，并且早学习外语的利大于弊。你怎么看?

写作范文：

Language is the best means of communication. In the moder globalization era it is not enough to be able to speak one language to communicate with the outside world. I strongly support the idea that children should begin learning a foreign language at primary school than at secondary school. They faster become familiar with a strange language, improve their hearing ability to understand new words as time goes by and learn new words. In the following paragraphs I will list some reasons to support my position.

Firstly, there is no doubt that a young mind readily absorbs new information. Child psychologists often mention that the most most formative years of learning happen in the first few years of life. Therefore, what children are exposed to is very often retained and remembered. In this way, a child is in a good position to learn the new information associated with a new language.

Secondly, senior students are often afraid to make mistakes when they are speaking in a new language. This fear is one of the biggest barriers for a person in their efforts to speak freely. Primary school children are not afraid of making grammatical mistakes because basically they just repeat words and sentences in the way they hear them. So, they have a better chance to get used to the right pronunciation of the language.

To sum up, I think that it is very essential for children to begin learning a foreign language in their early ages. It is brings many benefits such as great pronunciation. Also, it helps a child develop and gain more knowledge which is good for a long run.

教育类雅思写作范文之学习科目选择

教育类雅思写作之学习科目选择写作题目：

Today, teenagers in school nowadays have to study a wide range of subjects. Some people think the teenagers should learn all the school subjects, other think that the teenagers should concentrate in the subjects they are best at or they are interested in. Discuss both views and give your own points.

下面我们一起来了解一下这个写作题目的写作范文：

Nowadays, students are required to have a wide range of knowledge in order to seek a satisfied job or a higher degree. However, some still thinks that the quantity of subjects affect the quality of learning. They believe that it is better for the students to concentrate on several core modules. From my perspective, school is the place to provide students with general knowledge and to foster them a good habit of learning, so it is necessary to conduct the multi-disciplinary exploration.

The traditional view argues that students only need to focus on some major subjects, including English, math, ., etc. These subjects, to their understanding, are enough to foster the fundamental capabilities. Through learning the language, the teenagers can have better communication skills; through learning the math, the teenagers can have a clearer logic in thinking; through learning the ., the teenagers can build up their health. Apart from these, the other subjects may not contribute much. Instead, it is possible to distract the students from learning the core modules.

On the contrary, the opposite side has a wider consideration. They believe that it is the time for the teenagers to expand their vision at school. As a matter of fact, school is the place at which students spend most of their time and they acquire most of their education. So for them, a wider range of subjects provides them more opportunities. On the one hand, they are directly installed with more specialized knowledge. On the other, they may find their interests and foster their personal habits.

In summary, the limited amount of subjects contributes to a more concentrated type of learning experience and a higher ability in certain skills, while the multi-subjects exposure is beneficial for the teenagers' personal hobbies and long-term development.

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2017雅思作文参考范文

老一辈人对人们的生活、思想和行为有着非常传统的`观念。然而，有些人认为这些想法对现代生活的年轻一代没有任何帮助。你同意这种观点吗?为什么?下面是我分享的雅思作文范文，希望能对大家有所帮助!

题目：The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

范文：

It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with the needs of younger people. While I agree that some traditional ideas are outdated, I believe that others are still useful and should not be forgotten.

On the one hand, many of the ideas that elderly people have about life are becoming less relevant for younger people. In the past, for example, people were advised to learn a profession and find a secure job for life, but today’s workers expect much more variety and diversity from their careers. At the same time, the ‘rules’ around relationships are being eroded as young adults make their own choices about who and when to marry. But perhaps the greatest disparity between the generations can be seen in their attitudes towards gender roles. The traditional roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives, are no longer accepted as necessary or appropriate by most younger people.

On the other hand, some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern world. For example, older generations attach great importance to working hard, doing one’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s competitive job market. Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with respect. Finally, I believe that young people would lead happier lives if they had a more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community and neighbourliness.

In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpful in today’s world, we should not dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelevant.

题目：Art classes, like painting and drawing, are not as important as other subjects, so some people think that it should not be a compulsory subject at high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

范文1：

Schools are places where students acquire knowledge and skills needed for further achievements. Given the pressure that students are facing, some cannot help wondering whether art classes should still be compulsory.

Those holding the view that art classes should not be compulsory might think that art consumes too much of students' time. Fierce competitions students will face When applying for universities necessitate total devotion to academic subjects. College students who intend to take science as their major are even expected to be fluent in foreign languages now so that essays written by foreign scholars are not barriers in their academic pursuit. In other words, high school students are supposed to show higher levels of academic competence,which seemingly makes art unessential.

However, art classes are by no means only intended for entertainment. Children even dabbling in art tend to be more creative in mind. Those skilled in music or painting can interpret the world in a way that we cannot expect from a layman. This kind of ingenuity is also a rare quality constantly found in great scientists, whose contributions have served to create a totally new field for the latter generations. In his reply to a question about death, Albert Einstein considered his departure from the mortal world to be forever farewell to another great musician. With a sigh he answered "I cannot listen to Mozart anymore". Thus, can we simply regard art classes to be selective?

In conclusion, although stricter academic requirements are imposed on students, this cannot be an excuse for excluding art subjects from their curricula. Whatever kind of art can stimulate and inspire students, paving way for their future academic attainment.

范文2：

When the news came that art classes such as music, painting and drawing would be made mandatory in my high school, it was met with both approvals and objections. This mixed response reflects the different attitudes towards the role of art in the education of high school students.

Those who stand up for art classes argue that art is so important to the students’ development that it should be made compulsory. By taking art classes, students may come out of their shell socially and make friends with those with similar interests. Furthermore, rather than a waste of time, taking art classes can actually help students with other subjects such as maths and physics. The theory is that art can help exercise our mental power (imagination, for example) and make us smarter. More importantly, art calls for persistent practice and unyielding stamina, which are also important qualities that we expect our students to possess.

Objections of art classes as required mainly come from those who think art classes are a waste of time because they are not useful to students. Except for the very few who may take art as their lifelong career, the great majority of students will not get a job in relation to art when they finish their high school. Besides, what is the point of compelling a student who has no interest in art to spend many hours restlessly in the art classes?

To my mind, art classes should become compulsory in high school. The objective of education is not just to let students acquire the basic practical survival skills, but to prepare them for the future life, both physically and mentally. With this in mind, we can safely conclude that the time spent on art will be rewarding in the long run. Of course, the schools should be very careful when deciding on the required hours that should be spent on art classes.

楼主，你好，我这里有一篇雅思大作文范文，相信对你有用。雅思作文高分范文：职业专家比明星对社会的贡献大，因此要多收入，同意吗？本文是一篇8分的雅思作文高分范文，文章中有许多的高分句型以及运用的恰到好处的高分词组、词汇，文章的题目是：职业专家比明星对社会的贡献大，因此要多收入，同意吗？现将译文及范文分享给大家，希望对备考雅思的朋友能够有所帮助。中文标题：职业专家比明星对社会的贡献大，因此要多收入，同意吗？译文如下：在当代社会，似乎职业工作这在提高生产力，并给其他人提供直接的服务，而在体育和娱乐方面的名人没有做出此等贡献。因此，有人认为职业工作者应该比明星得到更多的报酬。然而，我不同意他们的意见，原因如下。职业工作者个人对社会的贡献不像名人那么多。任何一个职业工作者不像体育或是娱乐名人那样能够在专业领域给大众带来快乐。并且，同样地，单个职业雇员不能够给国家带来荣耀，也不能提升人们的名族归属感。否则，他们能够做到的话，报酬就不会少。职业工作者（如医生、护士和老师等）的能够使可以被训练和复制的，而明人的天赋是不可以的。一个普通人能够通过受教育和训练去做那些专业的工作，但是，没有那么的人通过受教育和训练能够打篮球打得像姚明一样好，也没有那么多人跳舞能够跳舞跳得想杰克逊那也好。此外，缺少的一个职业专家能被另一人所代替，而缺少一位名人可能会导致某一领域发展的限制。不可否认，由于大量的人们在专业领域工作并且直接服务于大众，他们看起来，至少表面上是与公众的生活水平的提升有着更加亲密的联系。然而，在这个信息时代，当人们更多地关注与精神生活并且能比较单间的获取必要信息时，职业工作者所创造的价值就没有名人所创造的价值高。总之，我不同意职业工作者应该比体育和娱乐名人的工资高的观点。只有当一个人的价值通过其对社会的全面贡献来衡量的时候，社会每个领域才能得到全面的发展。本文源自雅思救星。英文标题：Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 范文如下： It seems that, in this society, professional workers are improving the productivity and providing direct service to others, while celebrities in sports and entertainment are not making such contributions. Therefore, some people claim a higher pay for the former over the latter. However, I would show my disagreement to their statement for the following reasons. Professional workers do not contribute so much to society as celebrities in person. Any single worker in the professional field is not able to bring the happiness to such a large population as a famous person in sports or entertainment does. Also, an individual professional employee cannot similarly bring glories to the country and enhance people’s sense of belongings to the nation. Otherwise, if they can, their payment will not be less. Unlike the talents in celebrities that are invaluable, the abilities of professional workers, such as doctors, nurses and teachers can be trained and copied. An ordinary person can be educated or trained to be engaged in those professional jobs, but not so many can be taught to play basketball so well as Yaomin and dance so gracefully as Jackson. Besides, the lack of a professional worker can be soon replaced by another one, while the loss of a celebrity may result in the limit of development in a certain field. Admittedly, due to the large population of people working in professional fields and the direct service people receive from them, they may seem, at least superficially, be more closely related to the improvement of the life level of the public. However, in this information age when people are attaching more importance to their spiritual life and easier in obtaining information needed, the value produced by professional workers is not so high as that brought by the celebrities. To sum up, I do not agree with the idea for professional workers to earn a higher salary than the sports and entertainment personalities. Only when a man’s value is measured by his overall contribution to society, can every field in the world be developed to its full.

雅思写作的提高不仅需要自己勤加练习，还要多读多看，以下是我给大家整理的雅思写作范文及素材：城市化。希望对大家的雅思写作备考有所帮助

雅思写作大作文高分范文城市化的影响

Question

These days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city.

Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation ( migration from the country to the city) and suggest some ways in which this trend could be reversed?

Key words analysis

? rural areas: 郊区, 它的相对词是urban areas

? depopulation: 减少居民，后面括号内的内容是岁这个词的解释

? trend: 趋势，和tide, current同义

? reverse: 使倒转

Argument:

? 这是属于议论文中的problem的类型，通常会在要求学生表达对这个问题的看法和给出一些解决方案。

Possible effects :

? 过于拥挤的城市易影响城市的舒适度

? 过于拥挤的城市可能会导致失业率升高

Possible solutions:

? 政府进行商业性的引导

? 加强农村基础建设，提升生活便利性

Model Essay 1 – Part 1

Introduction

Rural depopulation is a very important issue in many parts of the world today. In this essay, I will discuss some of the main effects of this problem and also offer some possible solutions to it.

Main body 1

Firstly, it is clear that migration away from the country negatively affects life in the city. Serious environmental and social problems often occur when cities become overcrowded. Problems such as air, water and noise pollution are now increasingly common in urban areas around the world because there are simply too many people living there. Pollution can make city life very uncomfortable indeed and can even cause illness. Beijing is a very good example of this. Overcrowding in cities can also lead to high unemployment (especially in poorer parts of the world) and crime.

Model Essay 1 – Part 2

Main body 2

In order to prevent people from moving away from the country and reduce the size of cities, I feel we must make country life more attractive. In my view, the best way of doing this would be to improve services in the country. One of the main reasons that so many people have left the country is that facilities like shopping centres, cinemas, swimming pools, restaurants, libraries, schools and hospitals are generally better in the city. If such facilities were available in the country, more people would choose to live there. Another effective solution would be for the government to subsidies businesses and workers who move to the country.

Conclusion

n conclusion, I believe we must all recognise how serious this problem is. For the sake of the environment and our own quality of life it is vital that we preserve rural communities.

雅思考试大作文范文:过度城市化的原因和结果

雅思大作文题目：

Since cities have changed a lot, the size ofthe cities has grown enormously. Discuss thecauses and consequence of the enormous sizeof cities.

雅思大作文范文：

Nowadays, the maps of cities are updatedfrequently. With the development of city, more andmore suburbs become parts of the city. When thecities in the world are amplifying constantly, peoplediscuss the topic hotly, the causes andconsequence of the enormous cities. Different people have different answers by theirrespective views.

In my opinion, the evolution of society and the development of economy result in thegrowth of the vast size of cities. Since the number of population in every city is increasingcontinually, people need a large amount of space to live in. With the progress of the technology,the output of crops rises sharply. Fewer and fewer farmers are required, as a result, more andmore villages urbanize. The growth of the cities brings us many huge changes.

There are more job opportunities in the cities. For instance, China will hold the OlympicGames in Beijing in 2008. The government is amplifying the size of Beijing to build new gyms inorder to hold it excellently. Obviously, people in the cities could gain a lot of new jobs.

Of course, the enormous size of cities also has bad effects. Pollution is becoming more andmore serious all over the world with the amplification of the cities. For example, thepoisonous gas sent off by factories and automobiles has made the air unhealthy for people tobreathe. Water waste keeps pouring into rivers and lakes; as a result, many water species aredying out. Furthermore, more people the city have, more rubbish we can find.

In a word, since each coin has two sides, we should be acquainted clearly with the reasonswhy the size of the cities has grown enormously and what it will bring us. Thus, we could makefull use of the positive effects and overcome the negative effects.

雅思大作文范文解析-如何解决城市建设带来的问题

题目

The world has many towns and cities constructed in previous centuries that are suitable and livable for people in those times. What problems will this cause today and what can be done to solve these problems?

题型：问题解决

翻译：世界上有许多几个世纪前建造的城镇，适合那时代的人们居住。这会导致今天出现什么问题以及如何解决这些问题呢?

写作结构

开头段：背景引入+话题介绍

主体段 1：可能造成的问题

主体段 2：可以采取的措施

结尾段：总结概括

范文解析

开头段

交代背景“如今全球化和现代化超过了城镇建设，并带来一些问题”，政府需要采取措施解决它们。

背景句：Globalization and modernization nowadays have considerably outpaced the construction of new cities，which has brought some adverse impacts on people’s life.

话题介绍：Under pressure, the government needs to identify them to reduce complaints from citizens.

主体段 1

商业开发为一些城市的城市化带来了一些问题，如交通堵塞，住房紧张等。

主题句：Commercial development gives a facility to urbanization in some cities where the basic infrastructure does not match the needs of enormous flow of dwellers.

平行列举 1：In some cases, the shortage of transportation means that the road would be blocked by vehicles especially during rush hours. This low efficient traffic can have negative implications on business to some extent.

平行列举 2：Apart from stagnated traffic, there are accommodation issues to be considered. This is because the advances of economy surely require large numbers of migrants. If single-storey constructions without necessary facilities including heating, sewage system and even electricity supply take a dominating place in city, it would be difficult for those workers to dwell comfortably.

主体段 2

为解决上述问题，政府可以采取一些措施。如建设高架桥和地下交通系统减轻道路交通;说服房地产公司建造更多功能性的区域来甘山城市面貌。

主题句：To solve the problems identified above, the most influential factor may be the government who is responsible for modifying the old cities.

平行列举：Perhaps viaducts are needed to accommodate more vehicles and underground traffic systems such as railways or underpass tunnels can serve to ease road traffic dramatically. Persuading estate companies to construct more functional concrete jungles would probably be an effective strategy to mitigate the terrible living or working conditions. It would also help to improve the overlook of city if some districts are demolished for central business areas, public parks or statues.

结尾段

总结概括文章内容。

Overall, the governors play a vital role in city development, and tax payers should have the awareness of maintaining their new cities.

重点表达

impact on... 对...产生影响

to some extent 在某种程度上

it will/would be difficult for sb to do sth 对某人来讲做某事是有困难的

serve to 服务于

play a vital role in 在某方面发挥巨大作用

雅思大作文范文解析-如何解决城乡差异大的问题

题目

Some people think a rise in standard of living in a country only seems to benefit cities more than rural areas. What problems may those differences cause? How to solve those problems?

题型：问题解决

翻译：有些人认为，提高一个国家的生活水平似乎给城市带来的好处比农村更大。这些差异会造成什么问题?如何解决这些问题?

写作结构

开头段：引入背景+话题介绍

主体段 1：可能造成的问题之一

主体段 2：可能造成的问题之二

结尾段：可采取的措施

范文解析

开头段

交代背景“一个国家的工业化和城市化大大提高了公民的生活水平。然而，许多人断言发展的成就城市超过农村，并产生了许多问题”，表示“应采取措施解决问题”。

背景句：The industrialization and urbanization of a country have massively improved the living standard of its citizens. However, many people assert that the developmental achievements have benefited cities much more than rural areas and a series of problems have arisen.

话题介绍：This essay will discuss the problems and then offer feasible solutions to cope with the situation.

主体段 1

高度发达的大都市区占据了多数的优质资源，提供了大量的就业和商业机会，导致大量年轻农村居民涌入城市寻求机会，直接导致欠发达地区的劳动力和资金严重短缺。

主题句：The imbalance of economic and social progress between rural and urban areas is starkly visible and have triggered a number of problems.

平行列举：First, the highly developed metropolitan areas have occupied the quality resources of education, medical service, finance, commerce and entertainment, providing numerous opportunities in employment and business. As a result, a large number of young rural dwellers crowd into the city to pursue education, hunt jobs and make investments, directly leading to the severe shortage of available labour force and capital in the underdeveloped places. The loss in population and finance would inevitably worsen the overall economic development in rural districts.

主体段 2

由于农村和城市居民的受教育程度、职业和收入不同，可能导致农村居民进城务工的时候收到歧视。

主题句：The second problem resides in the aftermath of rural-urban migration.

平行列举：As a multicultural destination, the city holds a huge population with diverse backgrounds in terms of education, profession, income, social class, and even accent. Individuals from underdeveloped places tend to have less professional competence and personal wealth, due to the lack of educational and commercial resources in rural areas. Such discrepancy might trigger discrimination towards the rural residents who struggle their way through the urban jungle. What's worse, the widening wealth gap might even force the poorer ones to commit crimes to obtain more material possession.

结尾段

可采取措施解决发展不平衡的问题，如政府应该帮助农村居民利用当地资源发展旅游和商业贸易产业;在农村地区的教育系统中投入更多的劳动力和资金;还需要立法和监管来打击与歧视和暴力有关的行为。

Several solutions could be taken into account to improve the situation. The government should help rural residents exploiting local resources, such as natural landscape and specialty products, to develop industries in tourism and commercial trade. Once the industries are on the rise, job opportunities would be generated, along with a growing business revenue and average income. In addition, more workforce and fund should be invested into the education system in rural areas. If rural dwellers could obtain a specific skill or a certain academic qualification, they would be more professionally competent and employable. Furthermore, legislation and regulation are also required to fight against conduct related to discrimination and violence.

重点表达

living standard 生活水平

a series of 一系列

cope with 处理，解决

labour force 劳动力

simon雅思写作观点总结之城市化

Simon 写作观点集：Cities 城市化

for Urbanization 城市化的原因

People move to cities in search of job opportunities

Cities offer greater employment possibilities and a higher standard of living

People migrate to cities from the countryside

Traditional activities like farming need fewer workers nowadays

of City Life 城市生活的缺点

Life in cities has its drawbacks

The cost of living is higher than in rural areas

Some people d not manage to find work

Housing is usually much more expensive

Homelessness and poverty are common on cities

There is a gap between rich and poor

Life in cities can be extremely stressful

There are problems like traffic congestion and crime

Cities lack a sense of community

People do not even know their neighbor

Cities are sometimes described as “concrete jungles”.

Areas 人行道

Pedestrian zones in city centre can improve the local environment

Banning cars encourages people to walk or cycle

Many European cities have built bicycle lanes

Dependence on cars is linked to health problems like obesity

People who walk or cycle regularly are generally healthier

Pedestrian areas are safer and more attractive for both residents and tourists

雅思议论文素材

雅思作文提升可以从揣摩出色的雅思作文范文开始，在备考时一味地做真题是不可取的，也要多向出色的前辈学习才对，写作也要充分利用高分模版来达到事半功半的效果，所以，北京启德教育就为大家准备了出色雅思作文范文，本篇是关于习俗多元化的雅思作文范文。高分范文CountriesliketheUSAandAustraliaaremodernmulticulturalsocieties;theyhavebeencreatedbysuccessivewavesofimmigrationofpeoplesfromothercontinentsandcountries,aswellasbytheoriginalinhabitants:Europe,;GenghisKhanfoughtbitterlywithhis“bloodbrother”;.北京启德教育为大家整理关于习俗多元化的雅思作文范文中的高分词汇，帮助大家理解范文，同时建议大家多学习范文中高分词汇的用法，拿下高分。successive继承的，连续的容忍的，宽怒的混合烤的，炙过的Afteraday'swalk，thegrilledsausagesmelledsoinvitingtous.以上就是北京启德教育为大家整理的关于习俗多元化的雅思作文范文，建议在话题内容、结构框架、文字素材方面进行全面归纳。

雅思写作的提高不仅需要自己勤加练习，还要多读多看，以下是我给大家整理的雅思写作范文及素材：城市化。希望对大家的雅思写作备考有所帮助

雅思写作大作文高分范文城市化的影响

Question

These days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city.

Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation ( migration from the country to the city) and suggest some ways in which this trend could be reversed?

Key words analysis

? rural areas: 郊区, 它的相对词是urban areas

? depopulation: 减少居民，后面括号内的内容是岁这个词的解释

? trend: 趋势，和tide, current同义

? reverse: 使倒转

Argument:

? 这是属于议论文中的problem的类型，通常会在要求学生表达对这个问题的看法和给出一些解决方案。

Possible effects :

? 过于拥挤的城市易影响城市的舒适度

? 过于拥挤的城市可能会导致失业率升高

Possible solutions:

? 政府进行商业性的引导

? 加强农村基础建设，提升生活便利性

Model Essay 1 – Part 1

Introduction

Rural depopulation is a very important issue in many parts of the world today. In this essay, I will discuss some of the main effects of this problem and also offer some possible solutions to it.

Main body 1

Firstly, it is clear that migration away from the country negatively affects life in the city. Serious environmental and social problems often occur when cities become overcrowded. Problems such as air, water and noise pollution are now increasingly common in urban areas around the world because there are simply too many people living there. Pollution can make city life very uncomfortable indeed and can even cause illness. Beijing is a very good example of this. Overcrowding in cities can also lead to high unemployment (especially in poorer parts of the world) and crime.

Model Essay 1 – Part 2

Main body 2

In order to prevent people from moving away from the country and reduce the size of cities, I feel we must make country life more attractive. In my view, the best way of doing this would be to improve services in the country. One of the main reasons that so many people have left the country is that facilities like shopping centres, cinemas, swimming pools, restaurants, libraries, schools and hospitals are generally better in the city. If such facilities were available in the country, more people would choose to live there. Another effective solution would be for the government to subsidies businesses and workers who move to the country.

Conclusion

n conclusion, I believe we must all recognise how serious this problem is. For the sake of the environment and our own quality of life it is vital that we preserve rural communities.

雅思考试大作文范文:过度城市化的原因和结果

雅思大作文题目：

Since cities have changed a lot, the size ofthe cities has grown enormously. Discuss thecauses and consequence of the enormous sizeof cities.

雅思大作文范文：

Nowadays, the maps of cities are updatedfrequently. With the development of city, more andmore suburbs become parts of the city. When thecities in the world are amplifying constantly, peoplediscuss the topic hotly, the causes andconsequence of the enormous cities. Different people have different answers by theirrespective views.

In my opinion, the evolution of society and the development of economy result in thegrowth of the vast size of cities. Since the number of population in every city is increasingcontinually, people need a large amount of space to live in. With the progress of the technology,the output of crops rises sharply. Fewer and fewer farmers are required, as a result, more andmore villages urbanize. The growth of the cities brings us many huge changes.

There are more job opportunities in the cities. For instance, China will hold the OlympicGames in Beijing in 2008. The government is amplifying the size of Beijing to build new gyms inorder to hold it excellently. Obviously, people in the cities could gain a lot of new jobs.

Of course, the enormous size of cities also has bad effects. Pollution is becoming more andmore serious all over the world with the amplification of the cities. For example, thepoisonous gas sent off by factories and automobiles has made the air unhealthy for people tobreathe. Water waste keeps pouring into rivers and lakes; as a result, many water species aredying out. Furthermore, more people the city have, more rubbish we can find.

In a word, since each coin has two sides, we should be acquainted clearly with the reasonswhy the size of the cities has grown enormously and what it will bring us. Thus, we could makefull use of the positive effects and overcome the negative effects.

雅思大作文范文解析-如何解决城市建设带来的问题

题目

The world has many towns and cities constructed in previous centuries that are suitable and livable for people in those times. What problems will this cause today and what can be done to solve these problems?

题型：问题解决

翻译：世界上有许多几个世纪前建造的城镇，适合那时代的人们居住。这会导致今天出现什么问题以及如何解决这些问题呢?

写作结构

开头段：背景引入+话题介绍

主体段 1：可能造成的问题

主体段 2：可以采取的措施

结尾段：总结概括

范文解析

开头段

交代背景“如今全球化和现代化超过了城镇建设，并带来一些问题”，政府需要采取措施解决它们。

背景句：Globalization and modernization nowadays have considerably outpaced the construction of new cities，which has brought some adverse impacts on people’s life.

话题介绍：Under pressure, the government needs to identify them to reduce complaints from citizens.

主体段 1

商业开发为一些城市的城市化带来了一些问题，如交通堵塞，住房紧张等。

主题句：Commercial development gives a facility to urbanization in some cities where the basic infrastructure does not match the needs of enormous flow of dwellers.

平行列举 1：In some cases, the shortage of transportation means that the road would be blocked by vehicles especially during rush hours. This low efficient traffic can have negative implications on business to some extent.

平行列举 2：Apart from stagnated traffic, there are accommodation issues to be considered. This is because the advances of economy surely require large numbers of migrants. If single-storey constructions without necessary facilities including heating, sewage system and even electricity supply take a dominating place in city, it would be difficult for those workers to dwell comfortably.

主体段 2

为解决上述问题，政府可以采取一些措施。如建设高架桥和地下交通系统减轻道路交通;说服房地产公司建造更多功能性的区域来甘山城市面貌。

主题句：To solve the problems identified above, the most influential factor may be the government who is responsible for modifying the old cities.

平行列举：Perhaps viaducts are needed to accommodate more vehicles and underground traffic systems such as railways or underpass tunnels can serve to ease road traffic dramatically. Persuading estate companies to construct more functional concrete jungles would probably be an effective strategy to mitigate the terrible living or working conditions. It would also help to improve the overlook of city if some districts are demolished for central business areas, public parks or statues.

结尾段

总结概括文章内容。

Overall, the governors play a vital role in city development, and tax payers should have the awareness of maintaining their new cities.

重点表达

impact on... 对...产生影响

to some extent 在某种程度上

it will/would be difficult for sb to do sth 对某人来讲做某事是有困难的

serve to 服务于

play a vital role in 在某方面发挥巨大作用

雅思大作文范文解析-如何解决城乡差异大的问题

题目

Some people think a rise in standard of living in a country only seems to benefit cities more than rural areas. What problems may those differences cause? How to solve those problems?

题型：问题解决

翻译：有些人认为，提高一个国家的生活水平似乎给城市带来的好处比农村更大。这些差异会造成什么问题?如何解决这些问题?

写作结构

开头段：引入背景+话题介绍

主体段 1：可能造成的问题之一

主体段 2：可能造成的问题之二

结尾段：可采取的措施

范文解析

开头段

交代背景“一个国家的工业化和城市化大大提高了公民的生活水平。然而，许多人断言发展的成就城市超过农村，并产生了许多问题”，表示“应采取措施解决问题”。

背景句：The industrialization and urbanization of a country have massively improved the living standard of its citizens. However, many people assert that the developmental achievements have benefited cities much more than rural areas and a series of problems have arisen.

话题介绍：This essay will discuss the problems and then offer feasible solutions to cope with the situation.

主体段 1

高度发达的大都市区占据了多数的优质资源，提供了大量的就业和商业机会，导致大量年轻农村居民涌入城市寻求机会，直接导致欠发达地区的劳动力和资金严重短缺。

主题句：The imbalance of economic and social progress between rural and urban areas is starkly visible and have triggered a number of problems.

平行列举：First, the highly developed metropolitan areas have occupied the quality resources of education, medical service, finance, commerce and entertainment, providing numerous opportunities in employment and business. As a result, a large number of young rural dwellers crowd into the city to pursue education, hunt jobs and make investments, directly leading to the severe shortage of available labour force and capital in the underdeveloped places. The loss in population and finance would inevitably worsen the overall economic development in rural districts.

主体段 2

由于农村和城市居民的受教育程度、职业和收入不同，可能导致农村居民进城务工的时候收到歧视。

主题句：The second problem resides in the aftermath of rural-urban migration.

平行列举：As a multicultural destination, the city holds a huge population with diverse backgrounds in terms of education, profession, income, social class, and even accent. Individuals from underdeveloped places tend to have less professional competence and personal wealth, due to the lack of educational and commercial resources in rural areas. Such discrepancy might trigger discrimination towards the rural residents who struggle their way through the urban jungle. What's worse, the widening wealth gap might even force the poorer ones to commit crimes to obtain more material possession.

结尾段

可采取措施解决发展不平衡的问题，如政府应该帮助农村居民利用当地资源发展旅游和商业贸易产业;在农村地区的教育系统中投入更多的劳动力和资金;还需要立法和监管来打击与歧视和暴力有关的行为。

Several solutions could be taken into account to improve the situation. The government should help rural residents exploiting local resources, such as natural landscape and specialty products, to develop industries in tourism and commercial trade. Once the industries are on the rise, job opportunities would be generated, along with a growing business revenue and average income. In addition, more workforce and fund should be invested into the education system in rural areas. If rural dwellers could obtain a specific skill or a certain academic qualification, they would be more professionally competent and employable. Furthermore, legislation and regulation are also required to fight against conduct related to discrimination and violence.

重点表达

living standard 生活水平

a series of 一系列

cope with 处理，解决

labour force 劳动力

simon雅思写作观点总结之城市化

Simon 写作观点集：Cities 城市化

for Urbanization 城市化的原因

People move to cities in search of job opportunities

Cities offer greater employment possibilities and a higher standard of living

People migrate to cities from the countryside

Traditional activities like farming need fewer workers nowadays

of City Life 城市生活的缺点

Life in cities has its drawbacks

The cost of living is higher than in rural areas

Some people d not manage to find work

Housing is usually much more expensive

Homelessness and poverty are common on cities

There is a gap between rich and poor

Life in cities can be extremely stressful

There are problems like traffic congestion and crime

Cities lack a sense of community

People do not even know their neighbor

Cities are sometimes described as “concrete jungles”.

Areas 人行道

Pedestrian zones in city centre can improve the local environment

Banning cars encourages people to walk or cycle

Many European cities have built bicycle lanes

Dependence on cars is linked to health problems like obesity

People who walk or cycle regularly are generally healthier

Pedestrian areas are safer and more attractive for both residents and tourists

写好雅思作文离不开日积月累，下面我给大家带来雅思写作范文素材：advertisement，希望大家喜欢。

雅思写作高分范文之是否应禁止广告范文

In recent years, more and more advertisements have been flooding into our lives. Some advertisements exert negative effects on the youth. Therefore some people suggest that advertisements be banned. Do you agree or disagree with this? Give your reasons.

Along with the rapid progress of society, the advertising industry has undergone remarkable development. Every day we are surrounded by all kinds of ads and commercials, which have a profound influence on our daily lives. As a result, there arises a fierce debate concerning the proposal that we should ban all kinds of advertisements.

On one hand, some people are in favor of the idea that advertisement should not be banned; instead it should be further developed. They are of the opinion that advertisement is a good channel which helps promote the exchanges of information. In an era of information, everyone can benefit a lot from the advertisements, not only the manufacturers but the customers. Moreover, the advertisement enables people to catch up with the amazing advance in all fields. From the mushrooming advertisements, people get to know some newest products and the trend of consumption. Thirdly, advertising, to some extent, is not only an industry but an art. Many advertisements are elaborate works of art full of ingenuity and originality, which render great spiritual pleasure to the viewers and add to the picturesque cityscape. In a word, the advertisement is a blessing for modern people.

Despite the benefits advertisement has brought us, many people strongly condemn it, saying that they have been fed up with all kinds of rubbish ads. They call for a comprehensive ban on the advertisement based on the following reasons. First of all, a majority of advertisements are fictitious and misleading, causing confusion in people’s daily life and even leading to the injury and death of some customers. Secondly, they bring many inconveniences and troubles to us. For example, are you pleased with a mailbox stuffed with unwanted ads or a wonderful film on TV being interrupted frequently? Furthermore, the non-standard use of language in advertisement brings about irreparable damage to the integrity and purity of our language. Consequently, it will exert a disastrous impact on the literacy of our younger generations. In some people’s eyes, the advertisement is just a Genie out of the bottle.

To be frank, it is quite impossible for people to reach an absolute consensus on most controversial issues. To my mind, a total ban on advertisement is not an ideal and practical choice. How can we imagine all advertisements vanishing overnight? The demerits should by no means make us lose sight of the benefits advertisements have brought to us. A more workable and rational attitude should be adopted; that is, to eliminate the false and retain the true. Always bear in mind the old saying:“never throw away the baby with bath water.”

雅思写作大作文范文之儿童观看广告

雅思写作真题范文：There are many advertisements directed at children, such as snacks, toys and other goods. Parents argue that children are under pressure. Advertisers claim that the advertisements provide useful information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(有许多针对儿童的广告，如零食、玩具和其他商品。家长们认为孩子们处于压力之下。广告商声称广告提供有用的信息。讨论两种观点并给出你自己的观点。

雅思写作大作文题目讲解

此次大作文考察的为广告类话题，也是一道老题目。题目中提出了对立双方：父母认为孩子们比较受广告影响，从而产生一定压力;广告商则认为广告本身能够提供大量有用信息。

雅思写作大作文参考范文

随着儿童成长为广告业的目标群体，产生了一系列针对这些广告的广告，引起了社会的一些争议。

As children grow to be the target group of advertisement industry, a range of advertisements aimed at them have been produced, which had caused some controversies in the society.

Those who advocate the spread of advertising targeted at children deem that these advertisements can provide potential customers with a comprehensive understanding of the products advertised, which can help consumers make well-informed buying decisions. Since television advertisements can present goods in a visual and audio way, this can definitely enhance people’s knowledge of the advertised goods, especially some electronic toys or newly-introduced food.

On the other hand, parents are concerned that children are easily attracted by the vivid advertisement from the Internet or television, and because of it, kids will pester their parents to buy the goods advertised. Obviously, children are a group of consumers without the ability to distinguish good from bad and right from wrong. If they are convinced of the benefits of the products from the advertisement, they will not consider the negative aspects or further explore the truth of the advertisement itself.

Besides, peer pressure is another point which needs to be mentioned here. The widespread advertising campaign will make the public overwhelmed by these advertisements, which means there will always be some parents and children purchasing the advertised goods, and therefore, some psychological factor of children may urge a part of them to obtain the products even though they may not need the goods.

Personally, advertisements themselves contain a lot of information which can be quite useful for consumers. If the advertising industry can be well regulated and children being supervised when they are watching the advertisements, there is no need for parents to worry about the side effects by the widespread advertisements.

雅思考试大作文范文:广告与媒体的问题

雅思大作文题目：广告与媒体的问题

雅思大作文范文：

Television screens, newspapers, buses, andalmost all city streets are flooded by all kinds ofadvertisements. This has both advantages anddisadvantages to consumers who are unavoidablyinfluenced, though the degrees vary from person to person.

Because of the advertisements placed by many competing companies, consumers are ableto learn about certain new products rapidly. If a product happens to be what some consumersneed, they might be attracted to make a purchase and have trial use. If it turns out to bereally good, people would set about recommending it to friends and the sales of this product willgo up very quickly. So, we see this is a win-win situation both to consumers and manufacturersand we also see that consumers are not just influenced profoundly all at once. It takes time forthem to establish faith in the advertised products.

In most cases, the advertised products are good and worth buying. But there are alsocases where the effects or functions of a certain product are much exaggerated and it willdefinitely fool some people when they are attracted all at once and go to buy it. Since a productcan only win the market through its quality and its long established fame, there’s everyreason to believe that those fake or much exaggerated products will eventually lose theirmarket shares and die out. Thus, we see that the market is selective and consumers aresensible in the long term.

In developed countries, there are strict censorship and supervising systems regardingadvertising. If the advertisement put up by a company fails to honor the advertised effects, itwould be termed as fraud, thus violating the law which could lead to really serious result. Inmost cases, the manufacturing company would be fined so heavily that it would be difficult for itto survive any longer.

From the foregoing discussion, we can see that advertisements influence consumers bothfavorably and unfavorably and the degrees of this influence differ from person to person. Toprotect consumers, governments can follow the practice of developed countries by enforcingreally strict censorship and supervising laws in regard to advertising as a whole.

雅思写作语言素材积累：广告类

If a product is good or it meets people’s needs, people will buy it, so advertising is unnecessary and no more than an entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 人们购买商品是因为需要，广告没有作用，仅仅是娱乐，是否认同?

点评： no more than = only adv 仅仅

雅思论文格式解析

雅思议论文论证方法

雅思写作部分要求考生在一小时内完成两篇文章，一是150单词以上的图表说明文，二是250单词以上的议论文。说到雅思议论文，它的考查点可以从三个方面进行概括，即结构、内容、语言。本文将就其中内容方面进行探讨。雅思写作通常都围绕着几大类话题展开，如2009年到现在较常出现的教育类、科技类、媒体类等，所以考生要在考试前做好论据扩展的准备，争取每个话题都练习几个常考题目。

雅思议论文，不管是双边论证还是单边论证，论据的扩展是非常重要的，只有合理逻辑的对一个理由进行论证，才能说服考官相信你的论证是有理的。而合理的扩展有了素材后还需要一些方法的补充。常见的方法有解释说明(explanation)、举例子(exemplification)、列数据(raising figures)、对比对照(contrast & comparison)、让步(making concession)、引用(quotation)等。

1、解释说明(explanation)

句型：

This is to say, …

To be more precise,…

By this I mean,…

中国学生思维方式有个最大的特点就是拐弯抹角，不会开门见山，这往往与西方人的思维方式有着巨大的区别，西方人通常习惯一针见血，而不是含蓄的说话。这就导致很多考生在论证过程中用讲道理的论证方法时容易出现离题偏题的现象，从而降低考分。比如，一次课上，笔者请一位学生来分析一下“the reason why it is difficult for university students to find a job after graduation”，学生的答案为“the increasing world population”，考生给出答案后进行了分析，他认为人口多了，意味着大学生人数增多，那就是说大四学生变多了，找工作竞争激烈了，所以他们找工作困难了，这样就将看上去风马牛不相及的两个东西转了好几个圈终于联系在一起。中国学生喜欢去研究一个问题的根本原因，但事实上，这个原因与题目根本没联系，就可以被判定为离题，所以还不如直接说“the increasingly fierce competition”，更有说服力。根据这一特色，朗阁海外考试研究中心的老师建议考生在讲道理的时候只围绕topic sentence进行解释说明，这样就不会出现离题的现象了。我们看下面一个topic sentence，通过explanation来进行扩展。

. The retired people tend to offer service for the benefits of the family and the community.

读完这个句子，我们可能对其中the benefits of the family and the community感到疑惑，到底是什么利益，提供什么服务。

This is to say, the elderly always spend their time in taking care of the family and doing household chores for the family as well as organizing charitable activities for the community.

这样就能很好的对上述句子进行解释说明了。

2、举例子(exemplification)

句型：

For example, for instance, to illustrate, …

Take… as example, …

举例子也是中国考生较常用的论证方法，只是在使用的过程中往往也会出现一些不符合西方思维的问题。既是举例子，顾名思义，我们要列举一个具体的例子，比如某某人，或某事件而不是在for example后面还出现some people，这根本就不能算是个具体的例子。笔者在上课时请一位学生来举例论证“the students in high school suffer from increasing pressure”学生的例子是(中文)：某年某月某日，我经过我家邻居的门前，刚好看到他们家女儿因为压力过大而跳楼自杀了。这个例子有三个地方不合理，一是某年某月某日，过于具体，不可信;二是我亲眼看到她跳楼自杀，就算是真的也不可信，最好说是报纸或新闻中读到;三是压力过大，难道她在跳楼前还大喊一声“我压力太大了”告知大家跳楼的原因吗?显然又是不合理的。所以上述三个方面的问题请考生引起重视。接着我们也通过一个练习来对topic sentence进行举例的扩展。

. Most parents tend to overuse punishment in their education of the kids.

看到这样一个句子，我们脑中第一步要想到一个具体的事件，再想具体的人，就可以得出下面的例子。

For example, only because of the bad performance in primary school, the child of my neighbour was inflicted corporal punishment. In this case, it does nothing but harm to the child’s physical and mental development.

从例子中得出一个结论，这样使得论证过程更加有说服力。

3、列数据(raising figures)

句型：

As is reported/ investigated/ researched, …

It is reported that …

A recent research conducted by …Bureau reveals that…

列数据的论证方法较讲道理更有说服力，我们要在平时生活中多做积累才能应付列举考试中出现的各个话题的一些相关数字。雅思考试中的数据其实可以分成两大类，一类是有科学依据的，明确记载的数据，如一些新闻事件，四川地震、公交车自燃等的死亡或受伤人数，这些都是可查询的，如若考生对这些数据没有切实的把握就不需列举。另一类是指一些调查报告的数据，如大学生平均一天花多少时间自习，初中生平均一天花多少时间玩电脑游戏等，这类数据无据可依，考生完全可以自己根据论证内容给出数据，但一定要符合逻辑。我们通过一例来使用列数据的论证方法：

Eg. The retired people tend to offer service for the benefits of the family and the community.

要对这样一个topic sentence做列数据的扩展，我们首先要找到可列数据的点，此题有两处，一是退休老人的年龄，二是所花时间。结合上述句型，得出论证过程如下：

As is reported, the average time that the retired within the age group above 65 spend on the family and the community is at its length of about 5 hours per day.

4、比较(contrast & comparison)

考生可以拿相同或相反的事物做比较，相同关系叫对照(comparison)，相反关系叫对比(contrast)。此类论证我们重点掌握一些对比对照关系的连词：

In contrast, by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas

Likewise, similarly

5、引用(quotation)

在写作论证的过程中，表达一些观点的时候，如果能拿名人名言来进行论证则更有说服力，说明某位名人的观点和你的观点是达成一致，形成共鸣的。但引用要求考生要有相当大的积累，由于备考时间紧迫，此类论证可以少用。此外，朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家提醒考生要紧记，引用名人名言就意味着引用别人的观点，所以只要引两到三句起到论证自己观点的作用的话就可以了，点到为止，而不是中文写作中，引用越多越好。

6、让步(making concession)

让步的论证是中国考生较陌生的一个概念，其实在学状语从句时，我们就学过让步的关系，先退一步承认一个与自己观点相反的事实，再转折给出自己的观点，否定前者。句型如下：

Although/ though/ in spite of the fact that …

As is granted/ Admittedly, …

Opponents would argue that …

举个简单的例子，一个男生向女生告白，被女生拒绝，她就会委婉的用让步的论证来表达自己的想法，她会先承认男生的一些优点，再转折说自己并喜欢他。这样既能表达自己的观点，又不至于伤害对方。让步这种方法的优点为能较全面的看待一个问题，而且反驳更能有的放矢。具体例子如下：

Eg. People don not believe that saving money is a good idea in modern society.

这个Topic sentence的观点很明确，存钱在当代社会不是好主意，显然，用让步论证的话，我们要先承认存钱的优点，再根据所列有点进行反驳。

As is granted, saving money offers people a sense of security in case of emergency. However, people tend to believe that wise investment can get more profits.

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一篇好的雅思议论文结构一般由三个部分构成，分别是导语段（Introduction），主体段落（Body）与总结段（Conclusion）。这个结构很像三明治，其中导语段与总结段就像最上层和最下层的面包，而主体段落为论证段，相对较为重要，就像三明治中间的肉和菜。

雅思技巧与注意事项(写作---补充) 议论文注意事项1。开头必须直接明了，不需要对背景做介绍(或者简单介绍)，然后直接列出题目的观点用你自己的观点来对比(即平常说的“thesis statement”) 2。结尾不能太长，必须是对“thesis statement”以及每段的SUMMARY做概括 3。雅思的议论文，必须是先列出题目观点即你自己反对的观点，然后再提出你的观点，而不是单一观点的陈列。 4。每一个段落只表达一个问题或者是观点而且必须有主题句，而其后的句子必须与此主题句子相关，是比较，是论证，是举例，无论如何都要围绕中心来写。在每一段的结尾必须有引入下一段的过度性句子。你必须保证你所写的每一句话都与中心有关系，而不是凭借感觉的乱写 5。文章的主题句必须在第一段出现，或是支持或者是赞同，或者是站在中立的角度 6。认真分析题目，划出重点以及题目潜在的意思，并进行分析 7。评分项目CQ交流技巧AIE讨论、论点和论据VSS词汇与句型谈交流技巧以及其应用请使用关联词(但重复使用会扣分)，即比较常用的来增加文章的连贯性如：比较性however but although,nevertheless 重要性in fact indeed 总结性otherwise as a result because of this as a consequence therefore 例子性including such as for instance 增加性moreover in addition and also as well 时间性between during when just after before until following whilst 请注意语法表达将来请不要用标准的将来时用语如will/ going to要用 It can be argued that ----- It is often argued that --- This suggests that This would suggest that This seems to suggest that It could potentially result in ---- It may result in It is possible that 请使用代词如-------nuclear energy后面提到时候要用图表作文注意事项 1。开头除了包括我们以前练习作文时所说的介绍，还要加入what you would expect to find (即一眼就能够看出来的整体趋势)，还要写出我们所能真正找到的如 the chart shows average earnings in the uk over a 30 yers period --we would expect to find that a person--however-- 2.结尾除了回应文章外，还要把最关键的点或者是最明显的变化提出来如 while peoplke’s earnings increased accoring to their level of education ,the differences are far smaller than would be expected .What is more interesting ,however ,is,that the increase in earnings among

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