论文大修回复模板
(1)、简要介绍你的稿件；
(2)、介绍你对修改稿所作的revision；
(3)、感谢reviewers的意见，并说明已经回答了审稿人提出的问题。
2.Response to reviewer：其实就是在一个文档里，逐条地、认真地回答审稿人提出的每一个问题（important），届时上传修改稿时，也将esponse to reviewer作为独立的文档上传。
SCI文章修回的COVER LETTER模板如下：Dear Dr.XXXX,Thank you very much for your letter and advice. We have revised the paper, and would like to re-submit it for your consideration. We have addressed the comments raised by the reviewers, and the amendments are highlighted in red in the revised manuscript. We hope that the revision is acceptable, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
With best wishes,
Yours sincerely,XXXXXX================================================================（换页）We would like to express our sincere thanks to the reviewers for the constructive and positive comments.Replies to Reviewer 1XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXReplies to Reviewer 2XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXReplies to Reviewer 3XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
注意：
1、 对于审稿人的建议一定要礼貌地回答；
2、不要利用不同审稿人之间的不同意见相互辩驳；
3、回答不利的意见，一定要有分度，不能有较真和抵触的想法；
4、无论如何都需要对编辑和审稿人致谢。
大修审稿意见，重金求教如何回复
投稿Energy，35天后返回修改，给的大修，求教有经验的虫友如何回复审稿意见比较好。另外，为什么附件里只有一个人的审稿人意见？Dear***, The review of this paper is now complete, and I am including the Reviewers' reports (directly at the end of this email and sometimes as attachments). As you can see, one Reviewer recommends rejection, and the others recommend possible reconsideration after major revisions. If you are able to revise the manuscript thoroughly in response to the Reviewers' comments, I believe that it would be suitable for second review. I should add that, in view of the strong criticisms, anything but a thorough response and revision would just be an unfortunate waste of time. Once you have revised the paper accordingly, please submit with it a note describing in detail your response to these comments and a separate copy of the revised paper marked up to indicate where the revisions were made. NOTE: Upon submitting your revised manuscript, please upload the source files for your article. For additional details regarding acceptable file formats, please refer to the Guide for Authors at: When submitting your revised paper, we ask that you include the following items: Manuscript and Figure Source Files (mandatory) We cannot accommodate PDF manuscript files for production purposes. We also ask that when submitting your revision you follow the journal formatting guidelines. Figures and tables may be embedded within the source file for the submission as long as they are of sufficient resolution for Production. Refer to the Guide for Authors for additional information.http:// Highlights (mandatory) Highlights consist of a short collection of bullet points that convey the core findings of the article and should be submitted in a separate file in the online submission system. Please use 'Highlights' in the file name and include 3 to 5 bullet points (maximum 85 characters, including spaces, per bullet point). See the following website for more information Please note that this journal offers a new, free service called AudioSlides: brief, webcast-style presentations that are shown next to published articles on ScienceDirect (see also http://www.elsevier.com/audioslides). If your paper is accepted for publication, you will automatically receive an invitation to create an AudioSlides presentation. Thank you for your interest in ENERGY. Sincerely, Milorad Lj Bojic, Ph.D. Editor Reviewers' comments: Reviewer #1: Through a thorough reading and reviewing, the reviewer suggests that the following problems should be addressed and the manuscript should be modified. 1. Keywords should contain "Lauric acid". 2. XRD results reveal that the IKL and LA/IKL have the same diffraction peak at 2 of 7.8o, indicating that the LA molecules are mainly located on the IKL surface rather than the inner-layer. Please discuss in more detail. 3. In the FTIR spectra, there are no peaks at 3670 and 3624 cm-1, please check why? 4. The authors note that the LA drives the IKL to exfoliate, which may afford an increase of specific surface area for LA/IKL. However, BET results reveal an obvious reduction of specific surface area. Is there any other reason for this reduction, for example the LA/IKL aggregation? Since SEM images imply that LA/IKL has larger size than IKL. 5. Please check the result of the impregnation ratio of LA in LA/IKL (51.5 wt%), which should be about 58 wt%. Reviewer #2: This manuscript reported a novel form-stable phase change material (FSPCM) for thermal energy storage which was prepared by*******. I have read the whole paper and find that this study is simple and less novelty. The very similar work been published in Journal of Materials Science & Engineering (Preparation and Thermal Properties of Binary Organic / kaolin Composites as Shape-stabilized Phase Change Material for Thermal Energy Storage, 2013, 31, 268-272.) In addition, the Ref. 19 and Ref. 29 have been cited repeatedly. Therefore, this paper in present stage could not be accepted for publication in Energy. Reviewer #3: COMMENTS: (1) The authors need to be careful in their English usage. Therefore, full of the paper should be reviewed. Especially, some sentences in the introduction section are lack of continuity. (2) What is LOI in Table 1? Please clearly write it. (3) On page 4, line 7, "The suspension was ultrasonic at 70 oC for 2 h…." should be corrected as "The suspension was kept in ultrasonic bath at 70 oC for 2 h…." (4) The performances of energy storage and release of composite PCMs are substantially dependent on their thermal conductivity. Therefore, the thermal conductivity of the composite PCM is important parameter in thermal energy storage applications. Please clarify the why did the authors measure the thermal conductivity value of the composite PCM. It is possible; the authors should be provided the thermal conductivity value of the composite PCM. (5) There are some writing errors in the text. For example; ---On page 1, line 24, "kaolinite is one ….. " should be "Kaolinite is one ….."---On page 1, line 59, "In recently years, ….." should be corrected as "In recent years , …."---On page 5, line 1, "Differential scanning calorimety (DSC) was carried out….." should be corrected as "Differential scanning calorimety (DSC) measurements were carried out…."---On page 5, line 15, "The morphology and microstructure was….." should be corrected as "The morphology and microstructure were….."---On page 6, line 58, "FTIR spectroscopy and the results is shown….." should be corrected as "FTIR spectroscopy and the results are shown .." ---On page 7, line 19, "The adsorption peaks at 2923 cm-1 and 2854 cm-1 is caused….." should be corrected as "The adsorption peaks at 2923 cm-1 and 2854 cm-1 are caused.." ---On page 8, line 19, "…… of mespores below …..." should be corrected as "…… of mesopores below ……."---On page 8, line 47, "……SEM images were made." should be "…SEM images were obtained. ---On page 9, in the caption of section 3.5 "thermal properties…..." should be corrected as "Thermal properties……" (4) The following papers can be useful to more clearly understanding the form-stable composite PCM: ---Capric-myristic acid/expanded perlite composite as form-stable phase change material for latent heat thermal energy storage, Renewable Energy Volume: 33 Issue: 12 DEC 2008 Pages: 2599-2605 ---Preparation, characterization and thermal properties of Lauryl alcohol/Kaolin as novel form-stable composite phase change material for thermal energy storage in buildings, Applied Thermal Engineering, Volume 59, Issues 1-2, 25 September 2013, Pages 336-347 ---Structures and thermal properties of fatty acid/expanded perlite composites as form-stable phase change materials Energy and Buildings, Volume 68, Part A, January 2014, Pages 587-592 ---Preparation, characterization and thermal properties of lauric acid/expanded perlite as novel form-stable composite phase change material, Chemical Engineering Journal Volume: 155 Issue: 3 Pages: 899-904 Published: DEC 15 2009 ---Preparation, thermal properties and thermal reliability of eutectic mixtures of fatty acids/expanded vermiculite as novel form-stable composites for energy storage Journal of Industrial and Engineering Chemistry Volume: 16 Issue: 5 Pages: 767-773 Published: SEP 25 2010
你按审稿人的建议认认真真地修改，特别是第二个审稿人，说你的论文simple and less novelty，这是很大的硬伤，这个问题不解决，很难录用的。还有你们细节太不注意了，英语写作也要提高。
好好根据审稿意见修改文章，特别是意见不好的那位。每一天都要回复，并说明文章是怎么带的，或者对审稿意见进行解释。
把论文发给导师修改应该怎么说
把自己的论文发送给导师修改的时候，首先应该保持礼貌，多用敬语跟老师问好，然后再提出自己的问题，希望老师能够解答。
1. 格式要正式
在大家提交毕业论文这段时间，导师的邮箱肯定是被同学们的论文塞满了的，这时候就需要我们在发送邮件的时候注意邮件的标题和格式，避免被当作垃圾邮件清除出去。在论文添加到附件时，命名写清楚是“xx论文修改第x版－姓名－日期”，便于老师查看，也方便自己后续修改。
2. 要有礼貌
导师加班加点为同学们指导论文是一件苦差事，所以我们在交流上一定要注意礼貌，做到大方得体，让大家都舒服。开头写清楚你是哪个班的同学，希望老师批评指正。结尾写上期待您的回复，麻烦老师了。这样的话语让人更加舒服也更亲切。
这里有个模板可以借鉴
尊敬的xx老师：
您好！ 我是xxx，就读于xx大学xx级，非常冒昧的给您写信。经过三年多的学习和实践，在导师的精心指导以及实验室良好的学术氛围影响下，我在设计实验、操作能力，以及论文撰写方面积累了一定的经验。这里是我写的毕业论文，希望老师批评指正。
冒昧致信，恳请您海涵！非常感谢您能在百忙之中抽出时间阅信！
此致
祝身体健康 工作愉快
学 生：xxx
2022年x月x日
