雅思写作小作文
阅读历年雅思作文,参考他们的作文结构合写作思路,有助于我们写雅思小作文。下面是我分享的雅思小作文范文,欢迎大家阅读!
separate line graphs answer
题目:
The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.
范文:
Here's my full answer:
The line graphs show the average monthly amount that parents in Britain spent on their children’s sporting activities and the number of British children who took part in three different sports from 2008 to 2014.
It is clear that parents spent more money each year on their children’s participation in sports over the six-year period. In terms of the number of children taking part, football was significantly more popular than athletics and swimming.
In 2008, British parents spent an average of around £20 per month on their children’s sporting activities. Parents’ spending on children’s sports increased gradually over the following six years, and by 2014 the average monthly amount had risen to just over £30.
Looking at participation numbers, in 2008 approximately 8 million British children played football, while only 2 million children were enrolled in swimming clubs and less than 1 million practised athletics. The figures for football participation remained relatively stable over the following 6 years. By contrast, participation in swimming almost doubled, to nearly 4 million children, and there was a near fivefold increase in the number of children doing athletics.
'waste graph' answer
范文:
The line graph compares three companies in terms of their waste output between the years 2000 and 2015.
It is clear that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste produced by all three companies shown on the graph. While companies A and B saw waste output fall over the 15-year period, the amount of waste produced by company C increased considerably.
In 2000, company A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while companies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes of waste material respectively. Over the following 5 years, the waste output of companies B and C rose by around 2 tonnes, but the figure for company A fell by approximately 1 tonne.
From 2005 to 2015, company A cut waste production by roughly 3 tonnes, and company B reduced its waste by around 7 tonnes. By contrast, company C saw an increase in waste production of approximately 4 tonnes over the same 10-year period. By 2015, company C’s waste output had risen to 10 tonnes, while the respective amounts of waste from companies A and B had dropped to 8 tonnes and only 3 tonnes.
(192 words, band 9)
pie charts report
题目;
The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.
范文:
The pie charts compare visitors’ responses to a survey about customer service at the Parkway Hotel in 2005 and in 2010.
It is clear that overall customer satisfaction increased considerably from 2005 to 2010. While most hotel guests rated customer service as satisfactory or poor in 2005, a clear majority described the hotel’s service as good or excellent in 2010.
Looking at the positive responses first, in 2005 only 5% of the hotel’s visitors rated its customer service as excellent, but this figure rose to 28% in 2010. Furthermore, while only 14% of guests described customer service in the hotel as good in 2005, almost three times as many people gave this rating five years later.
With regard to negative feedback, the proportion of guests who considered the hotel’s customer service to be poor fell from 21% in 2005 to only 12% in 2010. Similarly, the proportion of people who thought customer service was very poor dropped from 15% to only 4% over the 5-year period. Finally, a fall in the number of ‘satisfactory’ ratings in 2010 reflects the fact that more people gave positive responses to the survey in that year.
(193 words, band 9)
雅思小作文雅思写作小作文干货:必写特征数据及小作文常用词
提到雅思小作文数据题,很多同学都会不由自主的挠头:“最讨厌数字了,”“我数学不好”,“哪个该写,哪个不该写呢”等等都会成为考生的常见问题。不仅如此,由于考生词汇量的缺乏,小作文数据类词汇也是他们很头疼的事。今天这篇文章会将上面的问题一网打尽,让雅思考生的小作文写作不再难。
备考时,面对饼图、柱图、线图等各式各样的数据,学生很容易忙乱,再加上考试时间短(20分钟),更怕写超了(或写不完)。那么,什么样的数据该写呢, 请注意,如果图中出现以下数据,就一定要“交代“。
在静态表格图中,极值,等值,倍数关系是必写的,其中极值包括最大值和最小值。在动态图例如折线图,我们必须要写的数值包括:起点,终点及转折点,其中转折点你只需介绍非常明显的转折点即可,否则由于小作文考试时间短,很有可能写不完。在其他动态图如柱图饼图等,请同学们注意,变化趋势是必写的特征数据,当然也是因为时间的关系,只需介绍明显的趋势即可。对于其他数据,只要在时间允许的情况下尽量多介绍就好。
谈到了趋势,我们肯定要用到上升,下降等等一系列词汇。那么,这些词在英文中到底该怎么表达呢。接下来我为大家进行了整理,而且都是一些简单又经典的词汇。请注意:每组最多背3个就足够。
一、动词,(括号里为过去时)
1. 表上升:go up (went up) / increase (increased) / grow (grew) / rise (rose)
2. 表下降:decline(declined)/fall(fell)/ drop (dropped)/ decrease (decreased)
3. 表波动的动词:fluctuate (fluctuated)
4. 表稳定于某一水平(的短语):remain stable at/ remain steady at
5.表示经历了某种变化:see (saw)/ witness (witnessed) / experience (experienced)
6. 表示到达最高点(的短语):peak at/ reach its peak at
7. 表示到达最低点(的短语):reach its lowest point at/ fall to its lowest point at
8. 达到/位于:reach/stand at
9. 表占多少份额(的动词): account for (accounted for) /represent (represented) /make up (made up)/constitute (constituted)
10. 表对将来数字的预测(以被动出现):is expected / is predicted / is projected
11. 变成原来两倍或三倍:double/increase twofold, triple
二、形容词和副词,括号里为副词
1. 表急剧的形容词:sharp (sharply) /rapid (rapidly) /dramatic (dramatically)
2. 表持续的形容词:consistent(consistently)
3. 表显著:significant(significantly) / considerable (considerably)
4. 表很小幅度:slight (slightly)
5. 表大约:about / around/ approximately
6. 分别: respectively
经过了上面的整理,同学们看完后是否就没那么恐惧了呢?小作文写作真的不像大家想象得那么难。接下来就是行动的时间了,小作文和大作文一样,一定要多写多练,实践检验理论嘛。
接下来我想说下学生在大作文写作上的问题。中国考生普遍在写作上摒弃不了中国思维,从而写出的文章会有些不太符合外国文章的习惯,这些都很正常,用了十几二十几年的语言已经在我们的头脑中定型,想一下改过来也没那么容易。例如一个学生想表达为了使人们变得更加健康,我们需要改善一些饮食习惯,比如说不吃夜宵,要吃早饭等等,那么他翻译过来的时候就说“don’t eat food at night, and must have breakfast,”这里就不太符合英语的表达习惯,首先,祈使句是不可以用在写作里,而且更地道的表达应该是we should avoid having food at night,所以,就需要同学们在学习中多积累,并逐渐摒弃中文思维。
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我们想要提高雅思作文,多看范文,是非常有帮助的,下面是为大家整理的关于雅思大作文范文三篇的相关资料,希望帮到大家。
雅思大作文范文一:
在学习的时候分心做其他事情好不好
While I prefer to put away my cellphone when doing homework, I can see how some students could benefit from having a cellphone around. I think it is fine for students to use cellphones while studying as long as they can stay focused.
One reason is that many students are accustomed to studying with music. They find that certain types of music puts them into a study mode, and that music can make the monotony of studying more bearable. My friend, for example, has a hard time sitting in one place unless she plays classical music. Normally she is very high-energy and distractible, but while listening to classical music, she calms down and becomes highly focused. For students like her, a cellphone is a highly useful study aid. It allows her to bring her music with her anywhere, so she is not limited to just studying in her room where her stereo is.
Another reason is that students sometimes need to use the internet to do research or check assignments, but it is not always possible or desirable for them to carry a laptop around. In these situations, a cellphone is a good substitute. I remember one time when I had to complete a history assignment while on a family vacation. There wasn’t access to the internet where we were going, so my laptop would have been useless for research. Instead, I used my cellphone’s 3G connection to do research and wrote the assignment by hand. The vacation was much more relaxing because I didn’t have to lug my heavy laptop and charger around, and I still finished the assignment on time.
Some will point out that cellphones can potentially distract students from their work. This is true, but in my experience they are far less distracting than laptops, which students use quite frequently for schoolwork. Cellphones have much smaller screens and generally take more effort to use, so students are less likely to waste time on them reading blogs or playing games. It simply isn’t as satisfying to procrastinate on a cellphone—laptops are much better for that. Plus, if you’re writing a paper on your laptop, your web browser is just a couple of clicks away. If you’re writing by hand with a cellphone next to you, it’s a bit less easy to put down your pencil, pick up your phone, unlock it, and open a browser.
While I don’t personally use cellphones while studying unless absolutely necessary, I think that they can be helpful for a lot of students. It’s true that cellphones can be distracting, but they’re less damaging to productivity than laptops, so I think it’s hard to argue that students shouldn’t use them.
雅思大作文范文二:
探索太空是否是资源浪费
It is a waste of time to spend funds on space travel or space exploration.
Nowadays, an increasing number of citizens are discussing the recent launch of ShenZhou carrier rocket. While there are some people who claim that this kind of launch is a waste of money or time because it could not bring any benefits for citizens, I hold a different opinion. From my perspective, space exploration is necessary.
Admittedly, space travel or space exploration would waste a large sum of money. By spending much money on doing research regarding outer space life, government loses their focus on civil life where many people are suffering from starvation, air pollution and epidemics. Under this circumstance, there is no doubt that people would complain about government’s aloft behaviors. However,if viewing from a different angle, space exploration is a long time investment. Never should we expect the journey would bring immediate economic returns to the country. In this case, space travel and space exploration is quite helpful for the country.
To begin with, space exploration might bring benefits for us to search for new energy resource. That is to say, other planets may be rich in certain kinds of resources that are in great shortage on the earth. According to the report released after the exploration to the Mars, the officials from NASA confirms that Mars contains a great volume of natural gas and iron. Moreover, engineers have also noticed that these resources on the planet are able to explore, and if they could solve the problem of long time transportation, these resources could be used on the earth. Consequently, the use of natural gas will not consume burning of petroleum and make our planet a better place to live in.
In addition, space exploration aims to improve level of technology. In other words, it is the development of advanced technology that makes it possible to explore the outer space. It is usually the case that without the technology of launching satellite into the space, it is impossible for people to conduct research. As a result, scientists have to improved their knowledge in related areas so that they could guarantee the launch of these rockets, as well as satellites. Meanwhile, to ensure astronauts’ safety in the outer space, scientists have to repeated work on their suits in order to keep astronauts away from radioactivity. Also, to fill with enough oxygen, scientists have to run encapsulation tests again and again. Only if these equipment are guaranteed can astronauts be safely working in the outer space.
To sum up, the seemly useless space exploration would cost a large sum of money; however, this space activity could still bring benefits in both new energy searching and technology improvement.
雅思大作文范文三:
养宠物能带来哪些益处
The issue whetherkeeping pets could benefit children might trigger intense debate amongindividuals. Some might argue that pets could bring both intangible andtangible advantages to children, citing the reason that pets might help toexplore the meaning of love and responsibility. However, from my perspective, iwould disagree with their statement.
First, keepingpets could incur some health problems, because pets are often unhygienic due tothe rather dirty environment where they were born or raised up, which mightlead to the result that pets such as kittens or puppies would carry parasitesand potential virus which threaten the health of children. Cat hairs mightfloat in the air while fleas might originate from puppy heads. Even if the petsare born in hygienic or professional clinics, their instinct nature of playingwild would drive them and the homes to be unclean and insanitary which greatlyharm the healthy growing of children.
Furthermore, petsmight interrupt the studies of children, considering the fact that their livelycharacter matches the natural demanding for fun of the children. Running andhiding around the corners in the house, purring and barking for a touch ofcare, dogs and cats would easily draw the attention from their little ownersand disrupt their focus on a specific and difficult mathematical question or aconcentration on the development of a composition idea. To apply the abovepoint further, in a long run, children accompanying their pets would experiencea decline in their academic performance and ruin the prospect of their future.
Admittedly,children do learn the meaning of caring and responsibility from their pets dueto the fact that they have to take time everyday to handle the food, water andshelter for their beloved ones. And they could also acquire seemly genuineenjoyment and happiness from playing with their pets. But those enjoyment couldbe attained from other safer and simpler ways, specifically games or arts,other than pets. The mental benefits such as the sense of responsibility andcaring could be narrowed and segmentary because the emotion of animals cannotbe as difficult and sensitive as that of humans. Children might be depressedand desperate when they find they don’t pay off as they give. The world doesnot operate as children do with their pets.
In conclusion, keeping pets would not bring as many benefits as we think to children. Instead,it often ends up doing more harms to them. To ensure the healthy development ofchildren, we must not let them have their pets.
以上就是雅思大作文范文三篇的内容,希望对大家有所帮助哦。
2018年6月30日雅思小作文范文:柱状图
2018年6月30日场的雅思小作文真题范文已出,小作文类型:柱状图。本期小作文题目是:The chart below shows the rate of males and females who were overweight in Australia from 1980 to 2010.
雅思小作文类型:Bar chart
雅思小作文范文解析
看到小作文,我们首先要定位3W(when, where, what),该柱状图描述的时间是过去的4个年份,跨度30年。地点为澳洲。内容为超重男女的比例。该题目内容一目了然,男性比率总高于女性,所以思路解答上可以男女分开,描述各自的变化趋势。范文共计8句话。
雅思小作文范文
The bar chart compares the gender distribution of overweight men and women in Australia in four separate years 1980, 1990, 2000 and 2010.
Across all the years, it is apparent that the proportion of males who were obese was significantly higher than that of their female counterparts. Initially, almost one half (48%) of the male tended to be excessively fat. This number rose merely by 4% in the following decade before shooting up and arriving at its peak at 69% in 2000. Subsequently, there was a marginally downward trend, ending up with 65%.
Similarly, the rate of females also showed an upward in the first two decades in spite of a relatively lower proportion (28%) occupied in 1980. This figure had consistently increased to 49% until 2000 and had remained stable by the end of the period.
In brief, the chart shows that although overweight population continued to be male-dominated in Australia over the past few decades,the gender gap had ultimately narrowed.
范文原创自小站老师Alice. Hua
字数 162 words
雅思小作文高分表达
compares the gender distribution rose merely
in four separate years shooting up and arriving at its peak at
it is apparent that a marginally downward trend
was significantly higher than Had consistently increased
female counterparts had remained stable