First,Write about the event(When and where It happened)
Next,write about what you and some of your friends,where do you when this event happened。
Then writes about why this event was improvement。
Our improvement,even that eyes member VR as it happened in on us in。
When I heard the news of this eventual,when this event happened。I was my friends where。
This event is a very improvements出me because I remember this event will becaused。
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