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Some comments are provided below that could be helpful for the authors to improve their manuscript.
1. The introduction is weak. The motivation for the research is missing.
2. The author should highlight the research objectives of the research in the introduction separately. Also, how the authors would address their need to be mentioned.
3. The manuscript lacks flow. The authors should make more efforts in presenting the work more systematically and clearly. The authors(s) have cited old citations throughout the manuscript. The author(s) are also suggested to includes references from the latest publications (year 2022).
4. English (language, sentence structure and grammar) needs improvement.
5. The introduction lacks in gaining attention and highlighting the need of the study. The author(s) should mention research objectives of the research separately. More relevant references are needed to strengthen the intro section。
6. The findings of the study need to be more elaborate. This section needs to be developed and supported by previous work. The discussion needs to be improvised with a theoretical contribution. The findings of the discussion need to be strengthened with the previous research work.
7. The discussion needs to be improvised with theoretical contribution.
8. The conclusion is very weak. It should also be an extrapolation of the key findings from the research and not a summary. So, there should be conclusions around the background theory, data theory/analysis and, key outcomes. The authors should have included the following sub-sections within the conclusion section with more details:
* Implications to theory and practice should be clearly stated;
* Key lessons learnt;
* Limitations of this research;
9. The selection of the case location should be more elaborated.
10. Proofread the whole manuscript as many typos and grammar errors are present.
11. Future research directions should be improved; in that, they should stem from the awareness of the limitations and opening avenues related to the obtained outcomes
12. Author(s) should try to include some novel implications and unique contributions in the paper.
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