中文综述审稿意见

综述的审稿意见一般至少有三条：第一简要描述论文的研究内容和意义，并作出评价。对于其比较好的部分，要给于肯定。第二针对文章中的内容和结果，指出其具体的不足之处，并谈谈你的看法。文章的不足之处有三种层次：第一，论文结果不正确或有重大失误；第二，论文缺乏重要的结果；第三，论文的结果不够完善。第三最后，给出你的综合评价，接受，修改，还是拒收。根据以上三条来发挥。

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Furthermore, expression of AT2R has been shown by several authors for normal - page 5, line 12: Steckelings is a woman (“her” colleagues) - page 5, last section: The impact of AT2R expression on immune cells and of AT2R effects on vascularisation and neuroregeneration with regard to wound healing is not sufficiently - 6, 2 lines from bottom: “…restoring normality not only in the CV system but also in many tissues, such as ” Please provide a reference for the statement that the AT2R has been shown to restore normality in 最后提交时杂志社会有一个勾选表，该文被我拒了该文编辑在结合另一个审稿人意见的情况下还是reject此文了，从投稿到最后给出decision约6个星期，应该说是正常速度了。有意思的是中途，编辑发信催审稿了，估计是作者急着想知道结果，可以理解，想想之前的我们也何尝不是啊，每天都不停得刷屏，也写过催稿信，还以为没有用，甚至有时候也不“敢”写，因为害怕是否会有“反”作用，看来某些时候写信催催也还是可以的。总之，审稿也未必是件好差事，不过倒是可以知己知彼，可以站在审稿人的角度去思考我们自己在写文章的时候应该注意什么，别人文章的有哪些优点、缺点，我们都可以好好去总结，同时我们也获得与最新研究领域的接触也为以后研究，能够写作提供更多的思路。