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retouch 英[riː'tʌtʃ]美[,ri'tʌtʃ] 润饰；修整部分 润饰；修整 润饰；修整[ 第三人称单数retouches 过去式retouched 过去分词retouched 现在分词retouching ] 同近义词润饰；修整trim up, give shape 润饰；修整trim up, give shape to 双 21世纪大英汉词典retouch [,ri:'tʌtʃ; 'ri:tʌtʃ] 润色；修改：The artist retouched the painting several 画家对这张画作了几次润色。 【摄影术】修描(底片等)：This photograph has been 这张照片已经过修整。 补染(新长出的头发) 【考古学】修磨(石器毛坯等) 润色；修整 补染 润色；修饰 润色时的增删部分 【摄影术】修描过的照片(或底片等)；修版 (头发的)补染 【考古学】(石器毛坯的)修磨
embroidery；retouch；polish；larded with
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embroidery；retouch；polish；larded with
Withthedevelopmentofthetimes(随着时代的发展应该是Withthedevelopmentoftime,),chattingonlinehasbecomeanindispensablepartofourdailylife,especiallywith(这里介词应用for)Asoneofmymostmeaningfulexperiences,Foronething,itprovidesusaconvenientandefficientmethodtocontactourfriends,letuseventhousandsofmilesawaycanalsokeepintouch(改为andwecaneasilykeepintouchnomatterhowgreatthedistancebetweenus)Unlikethetelephone,wehavetohaveamobilephoneeachothercanwehaveatalk(改为wecanonlystartaconversationbyholdingamoblephoneinhand),Chattingonlinecanoffermemuchopportunity(moreoppotunities)Foranotherreason,Also,(改成inthemeantime)(改成)Though(通过吧?through)chattingonline,Ihavemorechancestomakenewfriendswhocanhelpmeand(+wecan)Andthemostcriticalresultofchattingonlineisthatwecanshareourmoodwithourfriendsatanytime,(inaface-to-facetalk)NowItendtochatonlineinEnglish,whichcanpromoteour(改成my，不然和前面的I不搭)spokenEInshort,thereisnotanythinginmylifethatismorebeneficialthanchattingonlineifwe(I)楼主写的很好，我只是稍加润色
touch up修改(润色)的意思touch up the article
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润色是指通过对文字进行修饰，使其文采丰富，以下例子是对句子进行润色，希望对理解有帮助： I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high (强调句强调句强调句强调句) It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of E We can live a happy life only by this (倒装) Only by this means can we live a happy He fell The lights were still (with结构) He fell asleep with the lights When I heard that, I was much (非谓语动词) Hearing that, I was much They carried out a survey among 260 (被动语态) A survey was carried out among 260 They were faced with many They didn’t lose (非谓语动词) Faced with many problems, they didn’t lose heart． It was getting And it began to (插入语) It was getting What was worse, it began to He worked very He made great progress in his (改为复合句) He worked so hard that he made great progress in his He offered me a piece of advice that I should cheer up and start all over (what引导的主语从句) What he offered me was a piece of advice that I should cheer up and start all over I got on a There were already too many people on (定语从句) I got on a bus on which there were already too many 50% of the students surveyed choose super stars as their (强调数字) As many as 50% of the students surveyed choose super stars as their
retouch 英[riː'tʌtʃ]美[,ri'tʌtʃ] 润饰；修整部分 润饰；修整 润饰；修整[ 第三人称单数retouches 过去式retouched 过去分词retouched 现在分词retouching ] 同近义词润饰；修整trim up, give shape 润饰；修整trim up, give shape to 双 21世纪大英汉词典retouch [,ri:'tʌtʃ; 'ri:tʌtʃ] 润色；修改：The artist retouched the painting several 画家对这张画作了几次润色。 【摄影术】修描(底片等)：This photograph has been 这张照片已经过修整。 补染(新长出的头发) 【考古学】修磨(石器毛坯等) 润色；修整 补染 润色；修饰 润色时的增删部分 【摄影术】修描过的照片(或底片等)；修版 (头发的)补染 【考古学】(石器毛坯的)修磨
polish英 ['pɒlɪʃ]美 ['pɑlɪʃ] 磨光，擦亮；擦亮剂；优雅，精良 磨光；修改；润色 磨光，使发亮；使完美; 改进 擦亮，变光滑 波兰的[网络短语] Polish 波兰语,抛光,擦亮Shoe polish 鞋油,鞋油,鞋擦亮剂Polish Wikipedia 波兰语维基百科
polish英 [ˈpɒlɪʃ] 美 [ˈpɑ:lɪʃ]磨光; 润色; 擦光; 修改;光泽剂，擦亮剂; 擦亮，磨光; 优美，优雅，精良;[例句]The wood won't Angle electric grinders这种木材无法磨光。GB/T7442-1996电动角向磨光机[其他]第三人称单数：polishes 现在分词：polishing 过去式：polished 过去分词：polished 形近词： palish