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My Dream Job Everyone has their dream jobs, so have I As my family and friends know, I am good at writing and have excellent eloquence(口才),so my dream job, first, is becoming a I want to write articles for newspapers and And then, after graduation from high school, I desire to study in Beijing and get good After last, what I want to do is working in a TV S
I plan to write some articles for newspapers and magazines
我只能对此表示很无语，你还不知道怎么写就准备每天给杂志写文章？说你什么好呢？
I want to be a journalist when I grow I will write arricles for newspapers and magazines, take a walk to keep healt in the park when i am
打算给报纸,杂志写文章: be going to write articles for magazine and
there is a wireless station; so long
there is a wireless station; so long
I want to be a journalist when I grow I will write arricles for newspapers and magazines, take a walk to keep healt in the park when i am
I plan to write some articles for newspapers and magazines
When I grow up,I want to be a journalist, writing articles for newspapers and magazines And I can take a walk in the park to keep myself strong in my spare
I'm going to write articles and send them to magazines
My Dream Job Everyone has their dream jobs, so have I As my family and friends know, I am good at writing and have excellent eloquence(口才),so my dream job, first, is becoming a I want to write articles for newspapers and And then, after graduation from high school, I desire to study in Beijing and get good After last, what I want to do is working in a TV S
【答案】MydreamjobEBecauseIwouldliketoseedifferentpeopleandIWhat'smore,IWhatcanIdotobecomeareporter?IWhenIfinishhighschoolIwanttogotocollegeinBBecauseIthinkIIwanttoworkatastationandI【答案解析】试题分析：该题要求我们以mydreamjob为题写一篇作文，在题目中为我们列出了一个大概的提纲，包括想成为记者并阐述原因、打算给报纸杂志写文章、毕业后想去北京读大学及想在电台工作和想去环游世界等内容。所以我们写作时要注意文章中要包括这四个方面的信息，而且更重要的是要发挥想象力，使文章更加的丰富，充实。通过审题我们可以知道本篇文章应主要使用一般现在时，第一人称。写作时还要注意使用好的句式以使行文连贯、流畅。【亮点说明】这篇范文以mydreamjob为主题以第一人称介绍了自己梦想中的工作。需要注意的是我们要围绕这一主题阐明选择这一工作的原因以及如何为实现这一梦想做好准备。这就需要我们发挥想象使文章的内容更丰富。这篇短文在这一点上做的不错，在题目所给的四个提纲之外补充了一些内容。另外表达时注意使用了不同的句式，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。结合使用一些句型，如mydreamistobeareporter、What'smore,Icantellpeoplethetruthaboutsomethingpopular、WhenIfinishhighschoolIwanttogotocollegeinBeijing等。这些句型的使用使文章连贯。考点：提纲类短文。
plan to contribute to newspaper and magazine office
I plan to write some articles for newspapers and magazines
there is a wireless station; so long
I'm going to write articles and send them to magazines