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很多考生拿到大作文考题都不知道如何动笔去写开头段,有的会把题目原封不动抄下来,但如果这样做,在统计作文字数时,第一段就不被统计在内了.实际上,大作文的第一段是情景铺垫,洛阳大华雅思建议考生在这一段要点明这篇文章要讨论/解决什么问题及问题的背景.作文的首段通常包含以下几个方面：1)场景或背景信息,即题目中出现的phenomenon.2)一些人的观点(some people's opinion),这部分在改写文章首段时可要可不要,考生可按照自己的情况来安排.3)个人观点,这一部分在有些文章的开首段中也可以不要.大作文要求字数至少达到250字,在写作中考虑到字数的合理安排,第一段最好写3-5句话,大约40字左右,并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么话都说完.因此大作文开首方式通常有以下几种情况：1)题目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon),有时也出现一些人的观点,并且题目中字数较多.这种情况下最保险的办法是将题目中的背景信息及一些人的观点重新表达(paraphrase),可以做：主动语态被动语态主谓宾主系表某些近义词互换Example:At present,it is hard for college students to find jobs.Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography.To what extent do you agree?→ The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation.Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography.其后再加考生自己的观点即可.2)题目中包含了背景信息,有时出现一些人的观点,但题目中字数较少,若直接重新表达,字数凑不到40字左右.这种情况下推荐以下2种开首方式来保证字数：把笼统信息细节化即通过举例来解释说明题目中的背景信息.Example:International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems?→The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism's gaining momentum virtually all over the world.Each year,millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture.其后加入考生个人观点即可.追溯历史,过去与现在形成对比.Example:International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems?→Prior to the early 1900s,the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel.However,the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient.International tourism is gaining momentum and has become a big industry.其后加入考生个人观点即可.3)题目中仅出现一部分人的观点,而没有背景信息.这种情况下,我们可以根据这部分人的观点所涉及的信息在开首段附加对背景信息的描述.Example:The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel.Do you agree or disagree?→In the process of industrialization and urbanization,the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense.From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed,tried and implemented.Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem.其后加入考生个人观点即可.另外,要提醒考生注意的是开首段一定要避免出现语法错误,因为如果语法错误影响文章的理解,那会给考官留下极差的第一印象,而考官也就没有信心继续往下读了,最终大作文的得分也不会很高.
在雅思写作中，一个好的开头段不仅抓住读者的注意力，引起阅读兴趣，亦要点明中心论点，统领全文， 其重要性可见一斑。在雅思大作文的写作中， 开头段一般由general statement，argument， thesis statement两部分构成。每个人的情况不同，也可以登录文都国际教育官网进行一对一的咨询。1General StatementGeneral Statement的主要作用是介绍写作背景，引入话题。但是值得注意的是：不能照抄题目，应用同义词、近义词替换题目中的相关词语，并用不同的句子结构来改写题目中的句子结构。例如：Example 1:It is widely believed that mothers are by nature better parents than fathers. It is therefore more important for mothers to spend time with children than fathers. Others think fathers make equally good parents. What is your opinion?在这个题目中，首先我们可以看到题干表述用了三个句子，首先我们要区分哪句是general statement， 哪句是arguments. 其实很容易发现，通常句中间有明显阐述观点表达的，就是arguments, 而做客观陈述的就是general statement，其位置一般是题目的第一句。上题中 It is widely believed that mothers are by nature better parents than fathers， 就是我们要拿来做同义改写，放到我们开头段作为背景的句子。同义改写可以采取以下技巧：1 同义句型转换。如 It is widely believed that… 这个句套表达某事情是众所周的，它有很多同义句型，如 It is generally assumed that…, Common knowledge is that…, 等。2 同义词，近义词，同义结构转换。如by nature 这个介词词组表达的含义是，自然天性上的，在原句中作为be动词的表语，我们可以改写为一个同义名词词组，nurturing instinct，自然天性的意思。相应的，前面的谓语动词要发生变化，搭配have。3 造并列结构。有的时候我们可能发现原题中的表述无论词语还是句型都不是很轻易的可以找出同义结构出来，那么我们可以采取并列结构，即并列两个近义词语义，或者反义词再加否定结构。上题中的better parents than 可以改为 better or less dispensable parents than通过上面的三个步骤，我们就可以成功的将原题的背景句改写为我们开头段的general statement。原题：It is widely believed that mothers are by nature better parents than fathers.改写完后：It is generally assumed that women have a ‘nurturing instinct’that somehow makes them better or less dispensable parents than fathers are.General Statement常用句型：With the development of science and technology, great changes have taken place in…in the past few years. (虽常用，但已被滥用，建议减少使用)Along with the increasingly rapid _____________, more problems are brought to our attention.The issue of whether or not __________ has been widely/ heatedly/ debated currently/recently.When it comes to whether …, some… are strongly against it, claiming….It is generally accepted/ It is indeed the case that most countries have seen an increase in _______ over recent years.2Argument(争议)Argument即为题目表述的观点的立场，不同题目的立场表述大有不同。(1)有的题目中只有一个立场e.g. Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?在我们写的开头段，在写完general statement后，直接用One point is that…把原题的立场(countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time) 同义转述即可。值得注意的是，这个题目本身没有背景句，所以写general statement的时候，需要我们根据题目的argument进行总结。亦或者可以general statement 和argument这两个部分合并为一个部分，这个题目可写成：The issue of whether or not countries with a long average working hours are more successful in terms of economic development than those countries which do not have a long working time has been heatedly debated currently. As far as I am concerned, …(2)有的题目中包含两个互相否定或者相关的立场e.g. Some scientists think it is very soon that computers will be more intelligent than human. Some people think it is a positive development, while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.e.g. Some people think the best way to reduce crimes is to give longer prison sentence. Others,however, think there are better alternative ways to reduce crime. Discuss and give your opinion.这样的题目，在开头段写完general statement后，要把题目双方的立场都转述，不可减少或删除一方立场。如 Some people think it is a positive development, while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.可以转述为：Quite a few people claim that it has brought great benefits. On the other hand, those who think differently argue that it inevitably would has negative influence.3Thesis Statement (总论点)Thesis Statement简单来说就是作者对某一写作话题所持的明确观点。例如：1 In my opinion/ As far as I am concerned/ To my mind, students should wear uniforms in school.2 While the majority may like to live in a large family, I prefer to the small one.在雅思写作中，文章的立场，也就是全文的总论点，主要分两种：有倾向性立场和两边支持有倾向性(一边倒)有倾向性的立场一般在文章的开头即表明本文的立场，同意或者不同意，或者多大程度地同意和不同意。在剑桥雅思的考官范文中，有一个题目涉及对教育免费的商榷：All education,primary, secondary school and further education, should be free to all people and paid for by the government. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?考官在范文的开头段中即明确表明自己的立场：I certainly agree with the statement that this should be the case.当然，有倾向性的立场还包含让步的观点，这种立场的文章多见于以to what extent do you agree or disagree?提问的论题。如：Environmental problems should be solved by the government instead of individuals and private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?在考官范文的开头段中，立场是这样表明的：I concede that the government should lead the efforts in addressing the environmental problems. Nevertheless, cooperation and participation from the cooperations and individual citizens are essential as well.让步的立场并不需要纠结于在句子中回答到底agree 或者disagree没有, 清楚的说明自己的观点即可。值得注意的是，观点有倾向性并不代表思路有局限性。在辩论中，作者既要证明自己的观点，同时也要回应对方的观点，也就是说能够站在不同的角度看同一个事情，并且能看到各自的优劣。两边都支持这种文章立场一般常见于discuss both view and give your opinion这种提问方式的题目。立场一般建议在结尾段点明，并且要在结尾段明确题干两者之间的关系。(4) 开头段的两种常用写作方法将以上三个部分组合起来，我们步难得出开头段的以下两种写法：A. General Statement – Positive+Negative Idea – Thesis StatementThe issue of whether or not students should take a part-time job has been widely/ heatedly debated currently/ recently. Quite a few people claim that it would not only widen their horizon but also help shape their personalities. On the other hand, those who think differently argue that the task of a student is to make good use of his limited time and acquire necessary knowledge and skill for the future career. As for me/ As far as I am concerned/ In my opinion, I believe that part-time jobs play a positive role in the development of university students.这种方法的一个变形形式是：General Statement – Opposite Idea – Thesis StatementNowadays the incomes of many sport stars are truly astounding. Some people claim that the salaries of athletes are too high and the athletes themselves attract too much attention. Yet, in my opinion, such benefits are well deserved.B. General Statement – Concession – Thesis StatementWhen it comes to whether students should be allowed to work outside the school hours, some educators vote against it, claiming that part-time work may have a negative influence on their study. Obviously, too large amount of time a student is employed may contribute to a poor academic performance. However, if they do a part-time job over reasonable hours, it is extremely beneficial for them, providing financial support for their study and broadening their horizon.When evaluating a job applicant, most companies would place much weight on one’s educational certificate. Of course, one’s educational certificate does tell something about the applicant. However, it is not the only means through which we can judge whether the applicant is qualified or not.
一提到雅思写作模板，有人想到的是一大篇完整的 文章 ，其中有少许空缺，用来填上某个特定话题的特定内容，一篇及格的雅思文章即出炉。其实这是对模板的误解。最有效且值得初学者模仿的内容，是 句子 。我为大家分享20种经典的雅思大 作文 开头句模板。
雅思大作文模板之20种经典开头句分型
1、According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________.
2、There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: ______________.
3、Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________,
while others are inclined to ______________.
4、Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like ______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________.
5、 ______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ______________. While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________.
6、Everything has two sides and ______________ is not an exception, it has both advantages and disadvantages.
7、For years ______________ had been viewed as ______________. But people are taking a fresh look at it now.
8、It has stipulated by the government that ______________. To this stipulation, many people respond actively because ______________.
9、______________ is a common occurrence in our daily life. Whatever we do, ______________ can't be avoided.
10、______________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way.
11、Recently, ______________ has become the focus of the society, and in this way.. People swarm to ______________.
12、______________ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious problems as well.
13、Man is now facing a big problem-______________, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ______________ second, ______________.
14、Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of ______________.
15、It is only during the last years that man has become generally aware that ______________.
16、There is an old saying, ______________. It's the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct in many cases ever today.
17、The English proverb says, ______________. This is quite true because ______________.
18、______________ is now______________, and at the same time ______________. These two factors have caused ______________. Then what shall we do to solve ______________ in the face of such a situation.
19、One of our ancient philosophers said, ______________. Chinese people have always been holding this idea to be one of their standards of morality.
20、One of the great early writers said that ______________. If this is true, the present situation should make us ponder over ______________.
雅思大作文：the old age is more valued , while in some cultures the youth is more valued
雅思大作文题目：In some cultures, the old age is more valued (valuable), while in some cultures the youth is more valued (more useful). Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
作文 范文 ：
There have been drastic and constant changes of societies and values in the global context for recent decades. Therefore, some traditional cultures regard old age valuable for their civilization whereas other utilitarian ones may deem the youth, energetic and willing to accept challenges, to more precious.
What the senior brings about to all areas is mainly experience and the sense of security to all. It is well acknowledged that the aged, whichever field they have served, have accumulated more knowledge and skills out of years practice. They may thus grasp some principles that can be utilized in guiding the next generation to cope with matters and, even having undergone modern technological revolutions, ought to be applicablein most cases. Apart from this apparent benefit, another must not be neglected. Everyone without exception goes through the aging process and it is not hard to imagine what it would be like if a society viewed the elderly to be useless and exerted little of its resources in supporting them. Nothing could alleviate the anxiety of the middle-aged and even young adults about their retirement benefits and eventually fade away the sense of security, followed by some possible increase of crime rate.
Cultures think high of the youth, however, can see benefits on social production and renovations. In the first place, the youth are generally way more dynamic, which offer sufficient labor force to carry out productive activities, and if a greater reward and respect can be given and shown to them, this force can be more active and rewarding in return. Moreover, they generally and more quickly can embrace changes in work and life. This indicates the removal of obstacles in implementing challenging policies, promoting certain businesses, developing new technologies, and boosting economy afterwards within a relatively short period.
To my mind, a justifiable government should keep the balance between the pension for the past devotion of the elder and the incentive for the current contribution from the young, to realize social justice and security.
雅思大作文：the world of work is changing rapidly
雅思大作文题目：The world of work is changing rapidly and people cannot depend on the same job or same conditions of work for life. Discuss the possible causes for this rapid change and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for work in the future?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
作文范文：
In my country, people used to be constrained to a single workplace for lifelong by social security or welfare system. However, this is no longer the case nowadays when people are free to choose their occupation or have to adapt themselves in different positions.
People now change their works and environment based on several reasons, subjectively and objectively. To pursue a better career or break through a bottleneck, rather than secure a stable income, young people usually opt to change their job. In addition, graduates with little working experience have not developed a clear perspective of their life career. It is reasonable for them to be exposed to various workplaces, orienting to the society and trying to find out their strengths and interests. On the negative side, employers have to qualify themselves every couple of years, or else they may get fired and are forced to get other positions. This is because modern technologies have been revolutionizing since the advent of computer and internet and employers from different industries have to adopt the radically changing needs of the market. They thus must recruit those with advanced skills and specialties and cast out those left behind in order to meet the demand.
For better future career and greater possibilities of being always employed, people can take the following pieces of advice. It is certainly feasible that people exert their lifelong time in acquiring new knowledge and skills. This is especially true and cruel for the veteran workers who may find their specialized knowledge outdated comparing to that brought by the fresh and even new graduates. It is only a matter of attitude of being studious and diligent, otherwise laziness would eventually take its toll. Another piece of suggestion is to stand on solid ground before a job-hop and a promotion, which is mainly aiming at those regarding themselves already fully-prepared to get higher position. If one’s strong sense of responsibility is not fostered, maturity not or ability to tackle problems not developed, the newly-promoted will suffer from both disobedience of reports and doubts of bosses.
To sum up, the swift shifting societies offer people less chance to stay vocationally unchanged. Therefore, the path of a successful career would be more even if one is willing to tgeready and embrace.
雅思大作文：the family have a powerful influence on children 's life
雅思大作文题目：Although the family have a powerful influence on children 's life， the influence outside from home isa bigger part for his/her development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
作文范文：
It is known to people from both western and eastern world that some certain features always run within each family, unlikely to alter even after people have become independent from the original family for long. Therefore, I hardly agree with the indication that the life outside from family has greater impact for people.
Schooling and social experience undeniably affect peoplein various aspects. The most obvious one lies in the environment in whichschool students and social persons have more chances to acquire more knowledge and gain richer experience because of far more sources of input, from friends, teachers, bosses, colleagues, acquaintances and even strangers. People thus have to foster a variety of relationships and learn to cope with them skilfully. With extensive knowledge and harmonious relationships, a better development maybe maintained and furthered.
However, the family education, or parenting to be exact, turns out to be more profound and root. In the pursuit of knowledge, one has to foster habits like being able to concentrate and to expand quality attention span at the very beginning of school years. These are required by school authorities and sadly and generally realized at home as teachers can only focus on the overall performance of the class rather than each very individual. Some may argue about private sectors and that leads to the second point, the power of money. The amount of resources that one can utilize not only decide the standard of living, which may support private tutoring for better learning habits but also may formulate his or her value towards wealth, which in the long run, intentionally or unexpectedly is passed to the offspring. As well as that, children’s value towards people, right and wrong and even goal of life is deeply affected.
In conclusion, I don’t agree with the opinion that others factors influence more than family itself as the value is formed there and it can be recognized in nearly all aspects in the later part of life.
多元 文化 的存在是一个既定事实，你对多元文化的看法是什么呢？雅思写作可能会考到这个话题，下面我给大家带来雅思 作文 话题 范文 及分析：多元文化 。
雅思写作高分范文关于多元文化的利与弊
雅思写作题目：There is a mixture of people from different cultures and ethnic groups in a country. Why? Is this a positive or negative development?
雅思写作题目讲解：
第一段：介绍目前多元文化的社会现象。
第二段：分析原因，例如，全球化，人口流动增加和移民政策的影响等。
第三段：negative：例如，文化冲突和文化同化或边缘化，年轻一代的文化认同危机等。
第四段：positive：例如，文化融合，促进经济繁荣与文明等。
第五段：结论
雅思写作范文：
In many metropolises around the world, especially in English speaking countries, it is not surprising to see people from different ethnics or cultures living and working together. How this comes into existence and what influence this exerts on our society will be discussed as follow?
在世界各地的许多大都市，特别是在讲英语的国家，来自不同种族或文化的人们在一起生活和工作并不奇怪。这是如何产生的，它对我们的社会有什么影响?
Such co-existence of races in many major cities can largely be attributed to modern transportation and telecommunication technologies, to be specific, airplanes， computer and the internet. This advancement increases mobility of human and promotes communication and interaction between people without limitation of space and time. The earliest and most obvious representation lies in the globalization of trade and business which expand beyond the national border and facilitate people involved to immigrate permanently or live overseas temporarily. Some countries like USA or Australia have tradition of immigration and they welcome distinctive cultures and ethnics or at least they tolerate differences well. In these places, multi-culture is the embodiment of a high level of civilization.
在很多大城市中，种族的共存很大程度上可以归因于现代交通和通信技术，具体地说，飞机、计算机和互联网。这种进步增加了人的流动性，促进了人与人之间的交流和互动，不受时间和空间的限制。最早和最明显的表现在于贸易和商业的全球化，这种全球化扩展到超越国界，并促进有关人员永久移民或暂时住在海外。像美国或澳大利亚这样的一些国家有移民传统，他们欢迎独特的文化和种族，或者至少他们能容忍差异。在这些地方，多元文化是一个高度文明的体现。
Of course melting pots have caused some concerns or problems. Races with different religions sometimes collide due to misunderstanding of other cultures. The dominant culture may have the tendency of assimilating or marginalizing other minor ethnics, leading to the young immigrated generation being confused with their cultural and political identity. Multiculturalism aimed at establishing an egalitarian society is deemed by some people to be over simplistic and idealistic.
当然，融合引起了一些关注或问题。由于不同文化的误解，不同宗教的种族有时会发生冲突。主流文化可能具有同化或边缘化其他少数民族的倾向，导致年轻移民一代被混淆于他们的文化和政治身份。哪些建立平等主义社会的多元文化主义被一些人认为过于简单化和理想化。
However, this trend of globalization seems impossible to reverse and trying to deny it would not be as wise as to keep pace with it. Cultural diversity is believed to stimulate open-mind of people and the creativity and innovation of a society due to accommodation and communication of different ideas, therefore enhancing productivity and prosperity of a society in both economic and cultural terms. Looking back human history, brilliant ancient civilizations always featured a high level of inclusiveness of exotic cultures and religions.
然而，这种全球化趋势似乎不可能逆转，试图否认它并不如跟上它的步伐那样明智。人们认为，文化多样性能促进人们的思想开放，促进社会的创造和创新，这是由于不同思想的容纳和交流，从而在经济和文化方面提高生产力和社会的繁荣。回顾人类历史，灿烂的古代文明总是以高度包容异域文化和宗教为特征。
To conclude this essay, the integration of cultures and ethnics in many areas in the world reflects the desire of human beings for widening their horizon and exploring the unknown world and this in turn accelerates more contact between distinctive cultures and ethnic groups. Human society would be more dependent on each other and realizing this sooner would be helpful for us to adapt to the current trend.
最后，在世界上许多地区的文化和民族的融合体现了人类的眼界和未知世界的探索，这将促进独特的文化和民族之间的联系。人类社会将更加彼此依靠，实现这一点有助于我们适应当前的趋势。
关于多元文化的雅思作文范文
【题目分析】
Multi-cultural societies, in which there is a mixture of different ethnic peoples, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(考题重现：2006.08.25 )。
核心词汇：multi-cultural society, mixture of different ethnic peoples.
文章 结构： 辩论 型片面式话题。
【高分范文】
It is widely acknowledged that in many places worldwide, different races live in the same place with the same nationality.This method of grouping peoples benefits in many aspects; however, it also brings about some conflicts racially. Personally, it is not a choice but a must to create and maintain a multi-cultural society for mu ti-racial nations.
Admittedly, to ensure the security of the community, it is effective to divide different groups of peoples into different regions in the same city, which does reduce the conflicts of races to some extent. However, with the isolation of distinctive groups, it is much easier for the races whose beliefs are opposite to the others to ignite hostility against the others.
Establishing a multi-cultural society has at least three benefits: First and foremost, it promotes understanding between races.Living in the same place and experiencing the same lifestyle make peoples remit others' aggressive behaviour daily.Secondly, it is colorful for people to live under the circumstance of multi-cultural society. With various kinds of cultures, people may and will enjoy the mixed culture consisting of peoples from all kinds of traditions. Taking New York City for example, it is always said that the Big Apple is a “Melting Pot” of all cultures. Lastly, the barriers or the gap between two different peoples are nothing but stereotypes.Without living in the same community, it is impossible for anyone to eliminate discrimination amongst peoples.
In conclusion, it is better to create and maintain a multi-cultural society with multi-racial communities.Only in this way can people enjoy the high levels of civilization from all peoples.
【范文翻译】
众所周知，在世界很多地方，不同的民族拥有同一国籍并生活在同一地区。这种民族群体生活方式有很多好处。然而，它同时也产生了民族冲突。个人认为，为多民族创建并维护一个多元化社会势在必行。
必须承认，为确保社会安全，在同一城市内将不同民族划分成为不同区域是行之有效的方式。从某种程度上这的确可以减少民族冲突。然而，由于各特殊民族的孤立划分，很容易让某些民族信仰相对立的民族引起彼此之间的仇恨。
建立多元化社会至少包含了三个方面的好处：第一，也是重要的一点是可以增进民族间的相互理解。生活在同一地区，经历相同生活方式，能使各民族逐日宽容其他民族激进的行为。第二，生活在多元化社会下，人的生活是丰富多彩的。伴随各种各样的文化，人们可能并将会享受到由多民族组成的多元文化和其中的各种传统。拿纽约来说，总被提到“大苹果”(纽约别称)是个文化大熔炉。后，两个不同民族间的障碍其实就是固有的偏见和成见。如果没有生活在同一社区，任何人都不可能消除民族之间的歧视。
2016年4月2日雅思大作文范文选读：关于多元文化利弊
Task：
Multicultural societies, where people of different ethnic groups live together, can bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
多元文化的社会，不同种族的人生活在一起，能给一个国家带来更多的利益。你在多大程度上同意或不同意?
参考范文
It is believed that multicultural environments bring many advantages for many people, since the variety of races, cultures and traditions will make the country become unique and attractive. Although, multicultural societies have some negative issues, but I do believe that the positive sides are greater than the negative ones.
On the one hand, countries that have multicultural communities have some similar problems. Firstly, it is common that discrimination would have been the main issue. Some groups of people feel that their races are the most superior one; therefore they would underestimate certain kinds of races. Secondly, there is always a debate about religious activities, as some groups might have extreme faith in their religions and would annoyed other believes. One of the classic examples would be about the debate of religion in Israel between the Jewish and the Palestinian, which have caused so many casualties.
Despite of all the drawbacks, multiculturalisms will bring many advantages for the government and the people, if they are well managed. Multicultural societies makes the city become alive and fascinating, as some sides of city shown Asiatic cultures, while on the other side it show Western civilizations. This situation makes the city become unique, and would attract tourists from many parts of the world. As a result, it will boost the tourism industry, create a lot of employments and generate income tax for the governments. There are many multicultural cities that are well known, such as Sydney, Toronto and Singapore and they are considered as advanced cities, due to the proper management of its local government.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that multicultural environment has its own advantages and disadvantages. In my point of view, I do believe that multicultural societies have more benefits than its drawbacks, if they are managed properly by the government.
结构分析：
全文采用四段式，作者立场是pro-benefits
导入段：2句。立场鲜明，并运用了paraphrase方式，交代了自己的全文观点。
主体段1：4句。主要讲述了多元文化的drawbacks。组成：主题句+观点1+观点2+例子。
主体段2: 5句。论述了多元文化的benefits。组成上：主题句+观点1+观点2+观点3+例子。
总阶段：2句。 总结 。重申整个立场，多元文化必然有其利弊，但只要政府运作得当，坚信是利大于弊。整个立场很稳固。
2018年雅思写作大作文范文：多元文化在不同的民族和文化背景下，随着经济和文化的全球化继续成为主流，在这个新时代中并不少见。这是一种必然的趋势，我认为应该更加乐观。
It is not uncommon in the new era that people with different nationalities and cultural background mingle together, as the globalization of economy and culture continue to become mainstream. This is an inevitable trend and I deem that it should be embraced with more optimism.
The interaction between citizens of diverse cultural backgrounds is likely to add more spice to the modern life. People coming from various countries lead quite distinct lifestyles due to different living habits and cultural heritage. The diversity of culture can bring continuous feeling of freshness and a novel, exotic experience to those who have no former access to the other cultures. Take New York for example, it is a noted metropolis renowned for its multitude of cultural complex and a bunch of cultural genres, which are the fusion of different ethnic groups’ beliefs and cultural outlooks. The residents in New York can hardly feel bored with the monotonous life because they are more accessible to a cultural melted pot.
Besides, a multicultural society is more tolerant. It is true that the openness of one country is closely related to how diverse the culture is for the reason that mutual understanding and empathy are the foundation of peaceful co-existence. Thus, the dissent is inclined to be set aside in order to gain more consensus and the society will become more open to the less dominant cultures.
As for the dark sides of multicultural trend is rather limited but still worth mentioning. One most conspicuous drawback might be the threat to the local culture, especially when other foreign cultures are too aggressive and dominant. But this problem can still be handled if some precautious measures are carried out.
To conclude, the exchange of different cultures is the unavoidable tendency and both individuals and the society as a
whole can be beneficiaries.
雅思作文：关于多元文化 社会话题
Multi-cultural societies, which are a mixture of different ethnic people, bring more benefitsthan drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
翻译：
多文化社会，包括不同人种的混合，给国家带来的好处比坏处更多。你在何种程度上同意或反对?
抛砖：
多民族、多文化国家通常会比较有趣。各种民族有自己不同的文化，不同的生活习惯，因此多民族国家里我们可以看到各种各样的文化现象和生活习惯。即使是发生文化冲突，也会经常让人有新鲜感。
多民族国家里，各个民族的人思考方式不同，可以互相启发，有利于发明创造。比如在美国，大学和研究生院里集合了全世界各地的优秀学生，非常有利于技术创新。而且，各个民族有自己擅长的领域，比如爱尔兰人喜欢政治，犹太人擅长经商，中国人擅长科研，德国人在机器制造上领先，而瑞士人擅长精密制造，大家能各尽所长，更有利于经济发展。
虽然多民族国家可能会有种族冲突，但总体上讲有利于经济发展。
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雅思写作大 作文 高分范文城市化的影响
Question
These days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city.
Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation ( migration from the country to the city) and suggest some ways in which this trend could be reversed?
Key words analysis
? rural areas: 郊区, 它的相对词是urban areas
? depopulation: 减少居民，后面括号内的内容是岁这个词的解释
? trend: 趋势，和tide, current同义
? reverse: 使倒转
Argument:
? 这是属于 议论文 中的problem的类型，通常会在要求学生表达对这个问题的看法和给出一些解决方案。
Possible effects :
? 过于拥挤的城市易影响城市的舒适度
? 过于拥挤的城市可能会导致失业率升高
Possible solutions:
? 政府进行商业性的引导
? 加强农村基础建设，提升生活便利性
Model Essay 1 – Part 1
Introduction
Rural depopulation is a very important issue in many parts of the world today. In this essay, I will discuss some of the main effects of this problem and also offer some possible solutions to it.
Main body 1
Firstly, it is clear that migration away from the country negatively affects life in the city. Serious environmental and social problems often occur when cities become overcrowded. Problems such as air, water and noise pollution are now increasingly common in urban areas around the world because there are simply too many people living there. Pollution can make city life very uncomfortable indeed and can even cause illness. Beijing is a very good example of this. Overcrowding in cities can also lead to high unemployment (especially in poorer parts of the world) and crime.
Model Essay 1 – Part 2
Main body 2
In order to prevent people from moving away from the country and reduce the size of cities, I feel we must make country life more attractive. In my view, the best way of doing this would be to improve services in the country. One of the main reasons that so many people have left the country is that facilities like shopping centres, cinemas, swimming pools, restaurants, libraries, schools and hospitals are generally better in the city. If such facilities were available in the country, more people would choose to live there. Another effective solution would be for the government to subsidies businesses and workers who move to the country.
Conclusion
n conclusion, I believe we must all recognise how serious this problem is. For the sake of the environment and our own quality of life it is vital that we preserve rural communities.
雅思考试大作文范文:过度城市化的原因和结果
雅思大作文题目：
Since cities have changed a lot, the size ofthe cities has grown enormously. Discuss thecauses and consequence of the enormous sizeof cities.
雅思大作文范文：
Nowadays, the maps of cities are updatedfrequently. With the development of city, more andmore suburbs become parts of the city. When thecities in the world are amplifying constantly, peoplediscuss the topic hotly, the causes andconsequence of the enormous cities. Different people have different answers by theirrespective views.
In my opinion, the evolution of society and the development of economy result in thegrowth of the vast size of cities. Since the number of population in every city is increasingcontinually, people need a large amount of space to live in. With the progress of the technology,the output of crops rises sharply. Fewer and fewer farmers are required, as a result, more andmore villages urbanize. The growth of the cities brings us many huge changes.
There are more job opportunities in the cities. For instance, China will hold the OlympicGames in Beijing in 2008. The government is amplifying the size of Beijing to build new gyms inorder to hold it excellently. Obviously, people in the cities could gain a lot of new jobs.
Of course, the enormous size of cities also has bad effects. Pollution is becoming more andmore serious all over the world with the amplification of the cities. For example, thepoisonous gas sent off by factories and automobiles has made the air unhealthy for people tobreathe. Water waste keeps pouring into rivers and lakes; as a result, many water species aredying out. Furthermore, more people the city have, more rubbish we can find.
In a word, since each coin has two sides, we should be acquainted clearly with the reasonswhy the size of the cities has grown enormously and what it will bring us. Thus, we could makefull use of the positive effects and overcome the negative effects.
雅思大作文范文解析-如何解决城市建设带来的问题
题目
The world has many towns and cities constructed in previous centuries that are suitable and livable for people in those times. What problems will this cause today and what can be done to solve these problems?
题型：问题解决
翻译：世界上有许多几个世纪前建造的城镇，适合那时代的人们居住。这会导致今天出现什么问题以及如何解决这些问题呢?
写作结构
开头段：背景引入+话题介绍
主体段 1：可能造成的问题
主体段 2：可以采取的 措施
结尾段： 总结 概括
范文解析
开头段
交代背景“如今全球化和现代化超过了城镇建设，并带来一些问题”，政府需要采取措施解决它们。
背景句：Globalization and modernization nowadays have considerably outpaced the construction of new cities，which has brought some adverse impacts on people’s life.
话题介绍：Under pressure, the government needs to identify them to reduce complaints from citizens.
主体段 1
商业开发为一些城市的城市化带来了一些问题，如交通堵塞，住房紧张等。
主题句：Commercial development gives a facility to urbanization in some cities where the basic infrastructure does not match the needs of enormous flow of dwellers.
平行列举 1：In some cases, the shortage of transportation means that the road would be blocked by vehicles especially during rush hours. This low efficient traffic can have negative implications on business to some extent.
平行列举 2：Apart from stagnated traffic, there are accommodation issues to be considered. This is because the advances of economy surely require large numbers of migrants. If single-storey constructions without necessary facilities including heating, sewage system and even electricity supply take a dominating place in city, it would be difficult for those workers to dwell comfortably.
主体段 2
为解决上述问题，政府可以采取一些措施。如建设高架桥和地下交通系统减轻道路交通;说服房地产公司建造更多功能性的区域来甘山城市面貌。
主题句：To solve the problems identified above, the most influential factor may be the government who is responsible for modifying the old cities.
平行列举：Perhaps viaducts are needed to accommodate more vehicles and underground traffic systems such as railways or underpass tunnels can serve to ease road traffic dramatically. Persuading estate companies to construct more functional concrete jungles would probably be an effective strategy to mitigate the terrible living or working conditions. It would also help to improve the overlook of city if some districts are demolished for central business areas, public parks or statues.
结尾段
总结概括 文章 内容。
Overall, the governors play a vital role in city development, and tax payers should have the awareness of maintaining their new cities.
重点表达
impact on... 对...产生影响
to some extent 在某种程度上
it will/would be difficult for sb to do sth 对某人来讲做某事是有困难的
serve to 服务于
play a vital role in 在某方面发挥巨大作用
雅思大作文范文解析-如何解决城乡差异大的问题
题目
Some people think a rise in standard of living in a country only seems to benefit cities more than rural areas. What problems may those differences cause? How to solve those problems?
题型：问题解决
翻译：有些人认为，提高一个国家的生活水平似乎给城市带来的好处比农村更大。这些差异会造成什么问题?如何解决这些问题?
写作结构
开头段：引入背景+话题介绍
主体段 1：可能造成的问题之一
主体段 2：可能造成的问题之二
结尾段：可采取的措施
范文解析
开头段
交代背景“一个国家的工业化和城市化大大提高了公民的生活水平。然而，许多人断言发展的成就城市超过农村，并产生了许多问题”，表示“应采取措施解决问题”。
背景句：The industrialization and urbanization of a country have massively improved the living standard of its citizens. However, many people assert that the developmental achievements have benefited cities much more than rural areas and a series of problems have arisen.
话题介绍：This essay will discuss the problems and then offer feasible solutions to cope with the situation.
主体段 1
高度发达的大都市区占据了多数的优质资源，提供了大量的就业和商业机会，导致大量年轻农村居民涌入城市寻求机会，直接导致欠发达地区的劳动力和资金严重短缺。
主题句：The imbalance of economic and social progress between rural and urban areas is starkly visible and have triggered a number of problems.
平行列举：First, the highly developed metropolitan areas have occupied the quality resources of education, medical service, finance, commerce and entertainment, providing numerous opportunities in employment and business. As a result, a large number of young rural dwellers crowd into the city to pursue education, hunt jobs and make investments, directly leading to the severe shortage of available labour force and capital in the underdeveloped places. The loss in population and finance would inevitably worsen the overall economic development in rural districts.
主体段 2
由于农村和城市居民的受 教育 程度、职业和收入不同，可能导致农村居民进城务工的时候收到歧视。
主题句：The second problem resides in the aftermath of rural-urban migration.
平行列举：As a multicultural destination, the city holds a huge population with diverse backgrounds in terms of education, profession, income, social class, and even accent. Individuals from underdeveloped places tend to have less professional competence and personal wealth, due to the lack of educational and commercial resources in rural areas. Such discrepancy might trigger discrimination towards the rural residents who struggle their way through the urban jungle. What's worse, the widening wealth gap might even force the poorer ones to commit crimes to obtain more material possession.
结尾段
可采取措施解决发展不平衡的问题，如政府应该帮助农村居民利用当地资源发展旅游和商业贸易产业;在农村地区的教育系统中投入更多的劳动力和资金;还需要立法和监管来打击与歧视和暴力有关的行为。
Several solutions could be taken into account to improve the situation. The government should help rural residents exploiting local resources, such as natural landscape and specialty products, to develop industries in tourism and commercial trade. Once the industries are on the rise, job opportunities would be generated, along with a growing business revenue and average income. In addition, more workforce and fund should be invested into the education system in rural areas. If rural dwellers could obtain a specific skill or a certain academic qualification, they would be more professionally competent and employable. Furthermore, legislation and regulation are also required to fight against conduct related to discrimination and violence.
重点表达
living standard 生活水平
a series of 一系列
cope with 处理，解决
labour force 劳动力
simon雅思写作观点总结之城市化
Simon 写作观点集：Cities 城市化
1.Reasons for Urbanization 城市化的原因
People move to cities in search of job opportunities
Cities offer greater employment possibilities and a higher standard of living
People migrate to cities from the countryside
Traditional activities like farming need fewer workers nowadays
2.Negatives of City Life 城市生活的缺点
Life in cities has its drawbacks
The cost of living is higher than in rural areas
Some people d not manage to find work
Housing is usually much more expensive
Homelessness and poverty are common on cities
There is a gap between rich and poor
Life in cities can be extremely stressful
There are problems like traffic congestion and crime
Cities lack a sense of community
People do not even know their neighbor
Cities are sometimes described as “concrete jungles”.
3.Pedestrian Areas 人行道
Pedestrian zones in city centre can improve the local environment
Banning cars encourages people to walk or cycle
Many European cities have built bicycle lanes
Dependence on cars is linked to health problems like obesity
People who walk or cycle regularly are generally healthier
Pedestrian areas are safer and more attractive for both residents and tourists
范文
1、
反思，就是认认真真，一丝不苟去对待的检查和评价，是一种对自己不利的行为，是对对自己负责的表现。反思是一种对自己有利的行为，是一种对自己负责的表现，一种对自己负责的表现。
我们每个人都应该去反思自己的行为，并且去改善。我们要去发现，我们的错误，并及时改正，让自己更优秀，更完美，这就需要我们对自己负责。我们每个人都应该去反思自己的行为，并且去弥补这个错误，这样才能让自己不被别人所看到。
我们每个人都应该去反省自己的行为，并且去改变，这样才能让自己更优秀，才能让自己的行为受到他人的认可，这样才会让自己更加优秀。
所以，从现在开始，从今天开始，从今后开始，从今天开始，从今日开始，从今天开始！
2、
今天上语文课时，老师拿着语文试卷走进教室，发试卷了。我看着试卷上的试卷，心里很紧张，我想：这次我肯定没考好。我慢慢地走到讲台下，拿试卷开始答题。我心跳得非常快，心里就像有一只小鹿在砰砰直跳。
“叮零零”下课铃响了，老师说：“这次一定要仔细阅读题，把要点弄明白。”我心里想：这次一定要考好。
第二节课下了，数学老师拿着数学试卷走了进来。我看了看试卷，呀！这一张试卷好难呀！我都有点不敢相信自己的眼睛，我想：我能考好吗？我真不敢相信自己的眼睛。
老师拿着试卷一张一张地发了下来，一张张的试卷上都有一道又一张的错题，我心里很紧张，怕我会考差，但是，我又不敢相信自己的眼睛，我看了看周围的同学，有的同学在埋头写作文，有的同学在做试卷，还有的同学在写答案。我心里很紧张，心里想：万一考了不及格，怎么办？我想到了：老师会把我叫到办公室，批评我的。于是，我就慢慢地写，把每一道错题都做对了。我心里很紧张。
这次，我认真地看了一下卷子，发现错题是不少的，但是，都是粗心错误。我想：下回一定要努力。
无论是身处学校还是步入社会，大家总少不了接触论文吧，论文是指进行各个学术领域的研究和描述学术研究成果的文章。那么，怎么去写论文呢？以下是我精心整理的学会反思议论文，欢迎阅读与收藏。
金无足赤，人无完人。每个人在人生的道路上都留下了不可磨灭的足迹，那些足迹印证着我们的成长。然而每个人都避免不了犯错误，如果做不到反省，只会让自己错上加错，愈陷愈深，因此，反省是成功的基石。
反省，使自己的品德更加高尚。古代的廉颇处处与自己的同事蔺相如为难，但蔺相如有不与计较的宽大胸怀。当廉颇听到蔺相如对敌狠对友宽的肺腑之言后，反省自己，最终悔悟，于是向蔺相如负荆请罪，二人终成好友，这一文一武成为赵国的中流砥柱。“将相和”的故事一直传诵至今。因为廉颇的反省，让他的品性得到了升华，让他在自我的大海里找到了正确的航向。这种反省使人自然轻松，放弃错误的锁链，从而走向成功。
反省，让人与人的关系更加和谐。高尔基说：“学会在适当的时候承认错误，将会成为你与他人关系的调和剂。”有些人害怕承认错误，于是自欺欺人，从不反省自己，坚持自己才是对的，因为他害怕丢面子，使人际关系僵化，甚至到你至亲的朋友也会弃你而去。韩愈年轻时曾到朋友家作诗会友，在创作时因情绪激动打翻了朋友的一只碗，回到家后反省自己：虽然打破了一个碗事小，但如果办公也意气用事，岂不会坏了大事?于是他登门谢罪，削掉了一束头发以作誓证。朋友被他这种精神感动，更加信任韩愈，成为至亲至信之人。由此看来，反省能让你在他人眼中成为至诚之人，若人人如此，我们的世界岂不美好?
反省，让一个国家兴旺发达。作为中国人，谁都不忘近代屈辱的历史。由于落后，中国贫穷积弱，犹如案板上的鱼肉，任外国列强宰割。今天，我们反省自己的过错，不再闭关锁国，于是我们打开国门，实行改革开放。如
今，我们的国家已屹立于世界强国之林如果日本也能深刻反省当年侵华战争中的滔天罪行，那一衣带谁的中日邻邦，关系就会更加融洽。反省可以让一个民族复兴，让世界和平永驻。
反省，化干戈为玉帛，化荆棘为坦途，化山重谁复为柳暗花明。反省既有如此至魅力，经常反省，不亦乐乎?
荀子曰：“君子博学而日参省乎己，则知明而无过矣。”可见“省”十分重要。 “省”使人及时发现问题，不在错路上越走越远；“省”使人看清自己，获得谦逊的美德；“省”使人在一次次自我审视的沐浴中，洗去污浊，成为更好的自己。我们都应该学会“省”。
“省”使人发现问题。学习新知识固然重要，然而有时候停一停，自我反省一番，对学习也有大用处。“学而不思则罔，思而不学则殆。”“省”正是一种有大智慧的“思”，它让人更清晰地把握所学知识，及时发现问题，进而能查漏补缺。一代名臣邹忌也有“省”的智慧，正因为他能对镜仔细地审查自己的面容，才不会被谀辞所迷惑，并因小悟大，委婉地劝谏齐威王改革弊政，强大国家。
“省”使人看清自己。“人贵在有自知之明”而“省”使人拥有这种明智，使人谦逊。韩愈有文：“古之圣人,其出人也远矣,犹且从师而问焉。”这就是“圣益圣”的原因。正是因为圣人能在自省时，发现了自己的不足，才能从师而问，解决困惑，从而进步。虽然如此，世上却总有些不懂得自省的人，他们犹如井底之蛙，永远困在了自己的狭小世界中。比如仲永吧。“仲永生五年，未尝识书具”，然而，他“指物作诗立就，其文理皆有可观者”，被赞为天才。其父却不懂“省”的智慧，“日扳仲永环谒于邑人，不使学。”他只顾着眼前的蝇头小利，却毁了这样一个天才少年。若是当年的仲永之父亦或是仲永自身能好好自省一番，认清自己，转而投入学业，也不会落得一个千百年来人人“伤仲永”的结局。
“省”使人成为更好的自己。犯错者能浪子回头，在于他深刻的反省。人并非只在犯错后才“省”，“省”也应该时刻实践在生活中。作为学生的我们，不犯相同的错误是一种很大的进步，而认真地反省自己的错误并尽力改正，就能做到。当家长教给我们小细节的处理时，只要能深深反省，人就会更有修养。每天睡前，你省一省自己的一天，自问有没有遗憾，有没有欣喜之处，明天又应该如何减少遗憾，增添欢乐。问题能因此及时解决，自信也能因此建立。在不断的“省”中，人终会成为更好的自己。
寒梅“省”得自己严酷的处境，才能以更加顽强的姿态傲然绽放；牛顿“省”得前人的智慧，才能在巨人的肩上，飞得更高。“省”是一种永恒在生命中的大智慧，我们都应该学会“省”。
其实，每天都会有不同的问题涉及到我们的自身，当然个别严重情况，也会上演出一幅精力绞悴、心神意乱的状态画面。如果从利益角度来看，大可对所有事件进行二元划分，一类为对自己利益相关事件，另一类为自然发生事件，我们可以认为这类事件可以脱离我们的存在而发生在世界任何角落。当然，对于第一类事件，简单的称之为身边所发生的且对自身会产生一定影响的事情，我们是要关注的，有时是必须要关注！其实对于我们的未来会产生促进作用或可以让我们倍感轻松快乐的事或事件，我们可以认为它是有益于我们的，进一步可以认为它符合我们的生活要求，满足我们正当的利益需求。
可生活毕竟犹如一场探险，人不可能知道什么时候会发生利益受损事件，也就无法对下一刻，或下下刻，作出准确的预料！当我们感受到自己不爽不快乐或心里特难过，那也是生活所给予的一部分，尽管我们会认为自己受伤了、自己利益受损了、自己很失败，但这种认为是必须有的，事物总是在不断对自身进行肯定与否定的切换中曲折前进的！人也是一样，在肯定自身价值与否定自身价值的双重模式下前进，当然最终要面对的是如何正确对待负面影响。
一提到负面，往往会联想到很多不好的词汇去修饰它，既然要生活，就要适应它的两面性，世人都希望能有个正面效果，这很符合情理！可负面性质的影响也会时不时来光顾，当然选择逃避不是最终的解决方式，勇于面对却是快速摆脱阴影的最佳良方，所以有了问题不是关键，能选择出一个可以解决问题的最优方案才是关键之处，所以处事之道在生活中很重要，它是遇事不惊的保障！
再来着重看看反思这个词，这里所说的反思只涉及到一层含义，那就是在遇到挫折时，所应当有的反思，这一点很重要，但极易被忽视！对于挫折，大家面对的手段很多，有习惯于沉默、有选择于发泄、当然还有的运用了转移视线的`方法，可是挫折一旦出现，如果不敢面对就是在逃避，如果消极应付就显得孱弱，但不管怎样，挫折总是存在于某段时间里，不可能长久的去困扰一个人！那当挫折过后，留给我们究竟是什么？这就是我们要反思的前提条件，说到底，反思就是为了认清挫折本质，吸取经验教训，这样的话，就可以在以后有经验可依，有经历可参！反思是有好处的，反思的结果可以反作用于生活，是构成生活技能的基础！反思能有什么样的好处，那要看挫折的来源！如果挫折源于学习，反思就是一种不断思索求得真理的过程，它对于学生自主学习能力的提升，是有很大益处的，所以学生时代的我们，遇问题，多思考，然后再寻找答案，有助于对问题的理解！如果挫折源于生活，那反思的结果就可以看成一种生活技能的形成，纵观生活百态，唯多去思考，才会有产生新的发现，这一点是不值得怀疑的！生活的本身意义就来源于对生活的反思，多思考是没害处的！一般情况下，生活的挫折形式多样，数量之多，所以更需要我们多去反思，只是为了去认识它，了解它！如果挫折来源于社会，我们更有理由去反思它，这是一个很大的层面，往往会让我们的认知局限在我们所拥有的知识水平层次上！
在现在，对社会进行反思，不是因为社会给我们造成挫折，而是基于我们对社会的责任！就因为我们对社会有责任，所以我们会对社会有各种看法！不管看法是好是坏，我们应当在不受他人看法的影响下去反思我们的社会，才能得出我们自己的结论！在很多情况下，跟风现象是无法禁止的，这说明你很同意别人的看法，所以才把别人的看法拿来用，这可以理解啊！不过，现在大家都习惯于找出这个社会的病态，然后再加以渲染，我认为这样的做法并不可取，当然，社会的进步需要批判，但一味地批判，彻底地批判，只会让我们对这个社会只剩下失望！我只希望那些具有批判精神的人们可以对这个社会留点情，因为读他们的文章，只会让我找不到这个社会的希望所在！
今天就说这么多，如果里面有可以帮助你的内容的话，我很高兴，因为我没有白写！
开头 深夜躺在床上，月光洒进窗来，投在墙上。墙仿佛成了一块幕布，今天的种种，如电影般浮现出来，带出深深的悔恨 结尾 我知道，过去的事再也不能重演。我能做的，只有收起这深深的悔恨，将它变做我宝贵的经历，为我人生的答卷，添上一条苦涩的警句。
关于生命的反思 对于这个世界的一些基础性的规律，许多人知之甚少，我们用作思考方式的语言和逻辑本身就是我们智慧的产物，其基础浅薄的令人担心，但是，我们所体验的世界在很大程度上具有共同的特性，它的原理似乎并不会因为某些创始人的离去而有所改变，你也可以说这是生活之所以成立的原因。 那所谓的事实，在基础物理学上清晰而不容置疑的东西，一旦被放大，归结，列入更多的元素，成为生活现实之后，其性质就再也不具备清晰的特性了，我们对自身和他人的评价参差不齐，我们的文学和见解百花齐放，它们各有许许多多的支持者和批判者，我们的善和恶之标准也并没有绝对的、令人安心的评价，我们总是在心中默默地支持着自己或者自己认为所属的阵营，从这些角度看，说我们的见解总是符合我们的生活也无可厚非；而且，从另一角度来说，就是理所当然的东西，除了我们自己的心，除了自己的生活环境，我们还能从什么地方得到这一切呢？ 许多人开始意识到，我们的时代特性，我们的社会属性和我们的知识、见解总是存在着惊人的类似，我们的整体观随着时代的起伏而起伏，这一切都有着复杂、美妙、细致的特性，每一次，我们都自大的以为自己那所表述的便是真理，这个社会中的诸多细节都符合我们的看法，的确，除此之外，我们再无任何虚无的真理可供我们来比较，我们心中的世界和那外部的真实如此完美地契合，从非生命的物质上衍生，无法摆脱束缚，与此同时，我们的心又深深的影响着它。从这个意义上说，承认理智和混沌的一致，就好像承认生命和非生命的一致性那样正确。 在过去，人们曾经依靠分类获得知识，我们仔细的区分这个现实世界的诸多不同之处，努力为它们区分界线，我们逐渐意识到这一切有许多可以被发见的特征，凭借这种努力，我们建立起了我们的实在观，对世界的理解由此启始。与此同时，我们从现实发现矛盾、各种概念的奇怪的交错和不可区分，我们意识到许多概念本是一个事物的不同面，凭着我们的执著和一股奇怪的不服输的决心，我们开始建立联系的基本纽带。正是凭着语言和逻辑学，我们重新发现了许多过去所创造的独立事物的美妙特性，我么对此惊叹不已，并深深的折服于其诗意的，令人惊讶的联系。 许多伟大的理论由联系主持，它们让我们实在观延伸，进入过去不曾设想的领域之中，它们所创造的联络博大精深，也因为他们所描述的概念的宽广属性，从它们本身就能发现更多现实之中的细节——由空间和时间的统一所启动的理论至今还在发现更多的细微之处。 如果智慧本身有什么目标的话，或许从这种努力中我们可以看到一些东西，有些时候，从这种时而令人豁然开朗、时尔使人战栗的生命和智慧之中，也可以看到一种时间尺度的轮回：从我们祖先开始的努力如今已经更多的向着统一前进。它有别于初始的混沌状态，从单纯的看待区别开始，在我们的内心之中，我们开始重新组合这个世界的破碎镜像。 自混沌之中产生有序，如今，它已经超越了逻辑和矛盾，真理和谬误，辩证和诡辩，对立性和流动性，生活本身的面貌也逐渐清晰起来，即使我们不能完整地了解它，即使我们的智慧总是受限于这个躯体，我们也能够看到自己生命的那个带着喜悦和悲哀的平面，而我们的每一次自省，自我反思，对过去的否定都将我们带入一个全新的世界，在那里，一些问题得到了解决，另一些悄悄抬起它的头，让我们深感自豪和谦卑
下面是一篇雅思大作文写作模板，包括了开头，主体和结尾的部分。雅思大作文写作是雅思考试中对考生要求非常高的一个部分，因为在词汇，句式和篇章结构方面都要正好才能拿到高分。IntroductionRecent years have witnessed ………(背景)， which has aroused a heated debate of whether ……….(把要讨论的话题引入进来) Views on this issue vary from person to person. From my point of view, before airing my own opinion, I do think it’s necessary to analyze / explore this thorny issue from different angles / both sides of this thorny issue.万能开头：As Descartes(笛卡尔) once said:"If you would be a real seeker after truth, it is necessary that at least once in your life you doubt, as far as possible, all things"然后后面再加上你自己的模板："although the author's claim that...is not wholly insupportable, it would still be a mistake to draw the conclusion generally. In my observation...Main bodyThose who ………(正面观点)tend to present the following reasons. To begin with, ……… In addition, ………. What’s more, ………………..(尽量用不同的论证方法)However, other people may examine / explore this issue from another angle. For one thing, ……... For another thing, ……. Furthermore, ……..ConclusionIn conclusion, although it’s very difficult / hard to draw / come to / reach / arrive at an absolute conclusion to this issue, I would not hesitate to assent to the former / latter viewpoint because I’m fully convinced that ……
雅思小作文写作万能模板 1、通过第一个曲线图，我们可以知道____,也说明了结果是___ According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________. 2、一张有趣、有教育意义的、(内容)的图片(这句模板在雅思小作文中的应用非常的广泛。) There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: __________. 3、当前有一张涉及______的增长曲线图，许多人______，然而其他人倾向于___ Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________. 4、目前，共同之处是_________,许多人喜欢______因为_______除此之外还由于_____ Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________. 5、(图表所示)_____，就像许多其他事物，被____更加喜爱，然而这一观点正被________所抨击，一些人认为_________，他们指出___________ ______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ____________. While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________. 1 according to the chart``` 2 the date lead us to the conclusion that``` 3 the date show``` 4 the tree diagram reveals how``` 5 the figures show``` 6 this is a cure graph which describes the trend of``` 7 the pie graph depicts``` 8 the graph provides some interesting date regrarding``` 9 the table shows the changes in the number of ``` over the period from ```to ``` 10 as is shown in the table ``` 11 from the table ,we can clearly see that ``` 12 this table shows the changing proportion of X and Y from ``` to ```` 13 the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in``` 14 as can be seen from the grape ,the two curves show the flutuation of ``` 15 over the period from ```to ```the```remained level. 16 in the year between ```and ```. 17 in the 3 years spanning from 2005 through 2008. 18 the number of ``` remained steady from ```to ````. 19 the number sharply went up to ``` 20 the percentage of ``` stayed the same between ``` and ``` 21 the percentage remainede steady at``` 22 the percentage of ```is sightly large than that of. 23 there is not a great deal of differece between ```and ``` 24 the graphs show a three fold increase in the number of ``` 25 ```decreased year by year while ```increased steadily. 26 there is an upward trend in the number of ``` 27 a considerable increase occurred from ```to ``` 28 from ```to ```the rate of decrease slow down. 29 from this year on,there was a gradual declinel reduction in the ```reaching a figure of. 30 be similar to ```be the same as 31 there are a lot similarities between ```and ``` 32 the difference between X and Y lies in ``` 雅思学术性写作考试中Task 1 考查考生解释，说明信息的能力，这些信息通常体现在图解，表格和插图中，这一部分的模式化程度更高一些。下类50个句式是雅思留学类考生需要背诵的最最基础的句子。请同学们自己背诵。在写作小作文的时候，也可以作为参考材料。 1. the table illustrates the changes in the number of...over the period from...to... 该表格描述了在...年之...年间...数量的变化。 2. the bar chart illustrates that... 该柱状图展示了... 3. the graph provides some interesting data regarding... 该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。 4. the diagram shows (that)... 该图向我们展示了... 5. the pie graph depicts (that).... 该圆形图揭示了... 6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of... 这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。 7. the figures/statistics show (that)... 数据(字)表明... 8. the tree diagram reveals how... 该树型图向我们揭示了如何... 9. the data/statistics show (that)... 该数据(字)可以这样理解... 10. the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that... 这些数据资料令我们得出结论... 11. as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table... 如图所示... 12. according to the chart/figures... 根据这些表(数字)... 13. as is shown in the table... 如表格所示... 14. as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in... 从图中可以看出，...发生了巨大变化。 15. from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that... 从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到... 16. this is a graph which illustrates... 这个图表向我们展示了... 17. this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to... 该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。 18. the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in... 该图以圆形图形式描述了...总的趋势。 19. this is a column chart showing... 这是个柱型图，描述了... 20. as can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the fluctuation of... 如图所示，两条曲线描述了...的波动情况。 21. over the period from...to...the...remained level. 在...至...期间，...基本不变。 22. in the year between...and... 在...年到...期间... 23. in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998... 1995年至1998三年里... 24. from then on/from this time onwards... 从那时起... 25. the number of...remained steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year). ...月(年)至...月(年)...的数量基本不变。 26. the number sharply went up to... 数字急剧上升至... 27. the percentage of...stayed the same between...and... ...至...期间...的比率维持不变。 28. the figures peaked at...in(month/year) ...的数目在...月(年)达到顶点，为... 29. the percentage remained steady at... 比率维持在... 30. the percentage of...is slightly larger/smaller than that of... ...的比例比...的比例略高(低)。 31. there is not a great deal of difference between...and... ...与...的区别不大。 32. the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of... 该图表表明...的数目增长了三倍。 33. ..decreased year by year while...increased steadily.
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议论文排比句万能开头如下：
1、梦想是航灯，指引着船舶航行的方向。梦想是曙光，照亮了夜行者的路。梦想是沙漠中的一眼甘泉，让干枯的行者看到了生的希望。
2、选择是隆隆的鼓声，重重的击打在胸口。选择是迷茫的岔路口，一步决定天堂地狱。选择是纤细的指挥棒，激扬愁苦全在手。
3、也许是因为贫穷的缭绕，也许是因为生活的所逼，也许是因为无奈的眼泪，他们不得不出此下策。
4、家长们，放开你们的束缚，你们不可能陪伴我们一辈子，我们现在长大了，我们渴望自由，我们想像雄鹰一样，闯出自己的一片天地。
5、潜能是人的能力未开发部分。潜能是人的发展空间提升的基石。潜能也是人的综合能力提高的推进器。潜能还是人的一种后天自身资源。
6、缺陷也是一种美丽，断臂的维纳斯便是明证；缺陷也是一种精神，张海迪便是例证；缺陷也是一种动力，追求完美便是实证。
7、虚荣是母亲，做作是女儿；虚荣是罪恶，做作是惩罚。前者可谓自爱之根，后者可谓是自爱之果。
排比句式也是语文写作中常用的一种句式，排比句可以起到强调的作用，也可以为整篇文章增添不少特色。下面是我整理的一些关于高考作文素材万能开头排比句的相关资料,供你参考。
1. 人们在同样的时间里奔跑，错过了桃花送走雪花春风唤醒田蛙的春，错过了浪花裂开心花荷盖展开青霞的夏，错过了稻禾沾满金露树木寄走一封封枯叶的秋，错过了山坡覆白雪水面凝银冰的冬。人们应该在这样的季节这样的景色中踱步，让一个个脚印有翡翠的韵脚金银的注释。这才是我们的世界。
2. 那是张骞“凿空”的驼铃阵阵，那是苏武牧羊的忠洁刚烈，那是昭君出塞的黄沙漫漫，是卫青迎向大漠的旌旗猎猎，是岳飞拔剑戟地，仰天长啸，壮怀激烈，是郑和下西洋的浪花飞舞，雄心勃勃。
3. 有的人希望成为爱迪生式的“发明大王”，可是却畏于钻研科学知识之难;有的人想继莫泊桑之后，再夺“短篇小说之王”的桂冠，但又慑于常年练笔之艰辛;有的人想一鸣惊人成为“音乐巨匠”，却惰于在五线谱的田地上埋首耕耘;有的人愿自己成为体育明星，却怠于“闻鸡起舞”进行训练。
4. 生活是一团麻，那也是麻绳拧成的花;生活是一根线，也有那解不开的小疙瘩;生活是一条路，怎能没有坑坑洼洼?生活是一杯酒，饱含着人生酸甜苦辣。生活是七彩缎，那也是一幅难描的画;生活是一片霞，却又常把那寒风苦雨洒呀;生活是一条藤，总结着几个苦涩的瓜;生活是一首歌，吟唱着人生悲喜交加。
1. 燕子去了，有再来的时候;杨柳枯了，有再青的时候;桃花谢了，有再开的时候„„当手指跳跃，风儿便不再悲伤;当黑白流淌，思绪便将痛苦遗忘;当旋律激扬，天地便只在我的心泉徜徉„„
2. 那轻轻摇摆的柳絮像是你飘逸的长发;那闪闪的星星像是你明亮的眼睛;那天边的一抹红霞像是你温柔的唇;那霏霏的细雨像是女儿对妈妈您无尽的思念。
3. 要燃放瞬时的烟花不难，难的是将这刹那的灿烂永恒定格在夜空;要鼓起一时的勇气不难，难的是将这不灭的斗志维持一生;要获得片刻的欢愉不难，难的是笑到最后.
4. 当三闾大夫抱着石头与江水相拥，当西楚霸王自刎时的鲜血染红了整片夕阳，当普罗米修斯裸着身体被巨鹰啄食，当拉奥孔扭曲着身体仍想保卫自己的儿子，历史的悲风中发出阵阵悲鸣，但他们生命的结尾却那么响亮有力，数千年来仍叩击着人们的心灵，播放出永不低沉的生命绝唱!
5. 风，从水中掠过，留下粼粼波纹;阳光，从云中穿过，留下丝丝温暖;岁月，从树林中走过，留下圈圈年轮„„那么朋友，我们从时代的大舞台上走过，又该留下点什么呢?我们应当留下青春的骄傲，寻梦的足迹;我们应当留下真我的风采与个性的张扬，我们应当留下无悔的演绎和星光的灿烂!
1. 欣赏高山，自然会在高山的巍峨中找到强悍和凝重;欣赏大树，自然会在大树的伟岸中获得自立和尊严;欣赏小草，自然会在小草的葳蕤中汲取执著与希望。
2. 看花开花落，云卷云舒。初春明媚的阳光，透露了夏日的气息;盛夏繁茂的绿装，昭示着秋日的丰收;金秋累累的果实，昭示着冬日的萧瑟。四季轮回，秋去冬来，自然界万事万物各自演绎精彩。倘若没有经过严冬的洗礼，又怎能盼来初春的希望?
3. 人生如一本书，应该多一些精彩的细节，少一些乏味的字眼;人生如一支歌，应该多一些昂扬的旋律，少一些忧伤的音符;人生如一幅画，应该多一些亮丽的色彩，少一些灰暗的色调。
4. 爱心是一股撞开冰闸的春水，使铁石心肠受到震撼;爱心是一座亮在黑夜的灯塔，使迷途航船找到港湾:爱心是一柄撑起在雨夜的小伞，使漂泊异乡的人得到亲情的荫庇;爱心是一道飞架在天边的彩虹，使满目阴霾的人见到世界的美丽。